IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06 - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, I was in tears reading it.

I guess its a full flashback. I am sorry but I have some doubts in the last update Khushi was lying unconscious and naked on the floor. Did Arnav clothe her and put her on the bed and covered her with the blankets.

The last line was just awesome, Arnav wanted to stay near her yet away from Khushi's sight. This shows the depth was of his love. He couldn't face her because he was filled with so much of guilt and didn't want to scare her even a bit. But still wished to stay near her to be assured that she was well.

Khushi will definitely come up from the trauma because of her high EQ levels and she will also forgive Arnav for this, because our female lead has got a big heart and she knows to forgive people. If she wouldn't have forgiven then the whole Raizada and Gupta family would have been aware of what happened between the two. But, I think it will take along time to build up her trust.

For Arnav one has to worry because his heart is not that big that he will be able to forgive himself for what he did to the woman he loved.

One thing I didn't get is why Khushi didn't leave the house when her father asked her to come with him, what does she actually want. I don't get it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Hiru...i was thinking you forgot this one...😛

i am so glad you updated and brought out the pain so perfectly...both are suffering at the hands of fate...

nice one...thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!!!
too good!!!!
n cngrts...ur predictions hv come true!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiruni... I've got no words to describe this update of urs... I've still got goosebumps on my arms after reading the 1st half...
the feelings of helplessness have been portrayed marvellously for both arnav and khushi... thank u so much for this excellent chapter...
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Posted: 13 years ago

so heart wrenching update... it was worthy to wait for this long for the update..
my heart goes for all... because of one person everybody is suffering... please make snake to suffer till his death...
poor khushi you described her state so perfectly that i couldnt control my tears reading her parts hope she gets out of this trauma soon.. don't know whether she will be able to forgive arnav or not but still my heart goes for him too.. he is also suffering aftermath of his actions before... but still what he didnt was unforgivable...
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update the way you portrayed the pain , betrayal ...i know what he did is unforgivable but the way you showed him tormented...i felt sorry for him...

cant wait to see how you handle this...i love it ...pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it totally.
Awsme update.
So sad 4 kushi bt soon waiting 4 her form back.
Arnav s also sufforing a lot. Bt compard to her pain he s less.
Poor anjili.
Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I know what you mean about Arnav never being able to live the guilt down. He is one of those peope who feel too much of everything, every feeling is felt with an intensity.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update. Khushi seems completely shattered, feel bad for arnav too though. Can't w8 for her to be her normal self agin. Update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally u updated... awesome as always👍🏼

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