IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

i was heartbroken reading khushi's fight and struggle back to normalcy

thank you for the update! i was looking very much forward to it - the moment i saw CDLove in my inbox, i was like "YES!"

i really enjoyed your focus on the supporting characters and their reactions to the incident.

i loved that line when payal was wishing that khushi was there to explain everything

one thing i'm a little confused about - how long after the double wedding are the events in this chapter? just curious and trying to figure everything out

one thing i'm eager to read is how you bring arnav and khushi back together. for me personally, from khushi's angle, what happened is unforgivable. so i'm very interested to read in which way you handle the entire situation and in a perverse way, i'm happy arnav's suffering (bah i'm evil but whatever haha)

look forward to reading more and i hope your exams went well :)

queenie

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sugar_bag

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

i dont know wat to say..so touched by miseries of both arnav n khushi..awesum update..thnx fr d pm

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hararnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

our waiting is 200% worth for this update...

such a lovely update.. simply superb...

i know we shud feel sorry for khushi, but after reading this update and seeing arnav drowing in guilt,,my god i feel soo sorry for arnav. even if khushi forgives him he wudnt forgive himself... no punishment or no forgiveness will cure him..

My heart goes for Arnav... he is in painful situation than khushi

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Hiruni i must say u r one excellent writer.. the angst their agony was very well portrayed.. not only arnav and khushi's but also payal's.. the fact that she did not confide in her husband and now she has to win his trust back and always the need that khushi be with her as a support coz she acts like payal's backbone most of the time..

ya just as u mentioned, the events are happening in the real show too.. but just hope anji's and arhi incident doesnt happen.. :)

and yaar its time u bring back our khushi.. and also arnav .. which is not possible without khushi coming back..

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arshia

@ashvez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

Hiruni...that was phenomenal!!👏

The agony what Arnav is going through was portrayed brilliantly.Even I felt it here.LOL!!I can just imagine, him, doing this...later in the show.In a way he ha sto...he has totally taken away a girls existence without letting her explain..just in a jiffy.

The shock of Khushi...was so touching and painful.

This is so real,Hiruni.Too good girl!!!

I am now, prepared ..for what would be stored in the show.

All the best for your exams!! U wld do a Fab job!!😊

Ash.

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Priyanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

its beautifully well written...depicition of arnav and khushi's feelings r awesome...loved it...continue soon...

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callyd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

I was crying for both of them. Scars like this will take time to heal. Poor Khushi, what did she do to deserve this?

I love the way you write. Absolutely amazing.

Hate Shyam even more.

I am quite disappointed with how things are going on the actual show. Khushi is going through hell right now. And I feel like slapping LM and his team right now for the physical torture and the slap.

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music1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#508

guess the broken mirror reflects Arnav's life as u have urself explained in the end that Khushi will bounce back...I'm glad that she will but is there anyway Arnav will also coz both need to come back for a happy ending...if that's how u want the story to end.But I'm sure u are better at judging the story right now than me...hence have full faith in u that u will atleast bring THEM back...even if Arnav is broken inside.