IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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CrazyAbtTV18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#531

both of them going through so much truama...u have written it so very well..👏 the way u have described Arnav's pain, it was too painful... hope we get to see the bubbly kushi soon...

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meluhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#532

Another amazing update.

I am also more concerned abt Arnav now, cause like you said, he will never be able to forgive himself for what he did to Khushi and he deserves to feel that way coz nobody has the right to commit such a heinous act under any circumstance.

Your writing so gripping and leave me wanting to read more.

All the best for your exams dear.

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#533

What Do I Want To Say ?! I'm TOTALLY Confused What To Write Cause I'm Speechless Man 😳 You Are One Of The Best Writers We Have In Our Forum 😍 Keep Writing . NEVER STOP ! 🤗

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Sunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

first of all u UPDATEDDD!!! finallyyy!! i was so so waiting!!

and reading this..hmm i was in the uni library and i was crying, practically trying to stop myself from bawling like a baby! it was so so beautifully heart wrenching..i don't know or rather i never knew both those could actually co-exist...but now they do..for me..

to say u have created such a predicament that i weeped for Khushi..her state is breaking my heart..it is so so unfair! no woman should ever face that..
and for Arnav i don't even know what i can say about him! he must be dieing every second he sees her like that knowing it was only his fault...only his fault that she is broken beyond any attempt t repair..knowing she is gone, only a vessel of the girl he loved remains..
even if she forgives him one day cz of her love for him is bigger than anything else, i don't know how he will ever forgive himself knowing how much he loves her..

so Hiru it really was so beautiful!!

n best of luck for ur exams!!😳 but lol do update soon!!can't help but asking, i love this story too much not to be greedy!!😆

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shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

Loved the update.. So painful but beautifully written. Arnav's anguish and pain on whole matter and on the truth described perfectly. It's sad to see everybody going through such pain..
Hope the sun shines soon.

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Flame.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

You write beautifully girl. Just beautiful.

Maan, I can't see them like this. Arnaaavv :( Urgggh noo what is happening in their life? Jeez my poor doll Khushi. Everything's so messed up. I want everything to be alright again. Make it fast Hiru.

Waiting for the next chapter. EAGERLY! xxx