IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#491

Aaahhh... !! The way you write is absolutely amazing!! The emotions in this update were so alive and as I was reading I could totally feel Khushi and Arnav's pain and heart break!! I LOVED this update!! Thanks a bunch for the pm!!

Please continue soon!!

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#492

Thanks for the PM. Very well written. Awesome.

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sbk2

@sbk2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#493

Hiru..

I am delighted to see that you've updated the FF.

Last time I read your previous update, things in the serial itself were pretty light and good.

But this update coincides with the grim and dark point IPK has reached...I am very much upset with last week's episodes, especially Wednesday, Thursday and Friday.

Read the latest update...you have woven the pain, anguish and suffering of both Arnav and Khushi wonderfully into words...beautifully written as usual.

I see that you have continued the grim aftermath of the tragic trauma Arnav subjected Khushi to...

You write so well..that I end up imagining whatever you write.

Its amazing though...some things that you already wrote in your FF are now being shown in the serial...Arhi quick wedding on the same night as Payash's, Shyam poisoning Arnav's mind, Snake attempting to kill Anjali by setting her on fire!

Wow!

I'm sure if the PH hired you, the story of IPK would have been more interesting! 😉

Lovely lovely update... 👏

You are # 1 on my list of favorite FF writers...yes! The secret's out! You're the best!!

PS: regarding the actual serial...I am very much worried about how much of torture and anguish will poor Khushi go through! I do not want them showing any kind of physical violence...I was aghast on seeing Arnav painfully twisting her arm that way

And as much as I love your FF writing skills, I hope they never show violence of this kind...

Edited by sbk2 - 13 years ago

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

everyone is suffering excpet shyam...the one person who made everyone's life a living hell...but am sure you will focus on him when the time is right

thanks for the pm

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#495

I thought that the previous one is the end but u made it and its an amazing part with a lot of emoions...
A big ccheerrrzzz...for ur work...

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

hiru hiru u have no idea wat a treat it is to read ur stuff first thing in the morning... awesome update hun... loved it

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--drama_queen--

@--drama_queen--

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#497

wow awesome update... feel so sry for anjali,arnav and khushi...ohhh my poor baby. i feel so sry for him...i can never see him crying...but thank god its just a story. if it was in da show thn OMG my noise would'v melt. ur story always makes me cry. 😭btw thnx sososos much for da pm. mwahhh love u.

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#498

speechless...emotional update...m feeling bad for khusi !!!!!:D arnav deserves it ...

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Madia

@kawkabon

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#499

i just cant bear to see khushi like this. i feel like payal. to see a mute khushi is probably one of the most deathly things possible in the show/ff considering her character sketch lol.

yeh i do feel for arnav too but he has to pay i guess and he should do aswell.

Absolutely LOVED THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED THE FEELINGS. when u wer describin khushis pain and almost paralysis i felt like i couldnt move. got very scared lol

hope u update sooon!!

and thankxxx for the pm😊😊