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i will continue tommorow 😃 thnks for appreciation
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Great promo Amna!Acha ab story cont karo! Cant wait too read more!!! 😊 😊 😊
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gr88888888 starting amna 👏 countinue soon 😛 😛 😛
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PART :1

A girl sleeping peacefully on her bed ......but then she seems to be uncomfortable she moves her head to nd fro ....she was dreaming as ;

Ambulances are racing down the street, sirens blaring, a crowd of people staring. A boy's been in an accident, he's very hurt and a girl is holding on to his shirt. She whispers in his ear, "Please don't die, please. I never told you this but I'm in love with you. I fell in love with you a long time ago. I know you love me too. I'm going to hold on to you baby and if you die, I'm going down with you." The doctors rushed to his side and proclaimed him as dead. People gasped and cried but the girl stood still, in shock. Nothing was said. As the thoughts in her head started to collide, she pulled a knife out and stabbed herself in her broken heart as she fell down by his side...never once letting go of his hand. Her last words escaped her breath as she said, "I love you to death."

she wakes up quikly ...and screamed ..the other girl who was sleeping besides her also wakes up with jerk .....the first girl scream;

girl 1 : wo maar jaye ga ...us ko ...bacho ....wo dono ...maar jayengye .....

girl 2: kon d ....kesi baatein kerin hein app ....

girl: charu ....wo ..wo swayum ...or ria ....wo dono ...wo maar jayengye ....

charu : kuch nahi hota di bas ik bura sapna dekha app ne

girl: nahi charu ..plz meri baat mano ....

charu: bas kashish di app roz ye hi kehti hein ..plz get a life ...sukoon se rehney do humey..huh

charu again lay on bed ......kashish ....cry ....quitly ..tears rolling down from her eyes .....two hours passed like that ..her tears are now dried ...their prints can be seen on her face !...and she has gone sleep!

Kasish was not like this till the age of 20 ....now she is of 23 ....she start getting visions of what will happen in future ..he parents ...anuragh basu and prena basu ....showed he to every doctor every Psychiatrist but they have only one answere .....it is her fear actually ...and her dual personality effect...which can be ....cured and she would spend a normal life ONLY WHEN ..IF SHE GET PROPER CARE AND LOVE ...AND SHE FALL WITH SOME ONE IN LOVE!...at first her parents her family take great care of her ....her sister charu ...she loved her alot ..but in three years ..they also ....become tired....the only person who still have hope is RISHI BASU ...kashish's elder brother.....kashish has have half brother SWAYUM BASU ...also .....who lived with them ...he is a nice guy ....and treat both sisters ...and rishi as ....they are not step ....but his own !

kashish is scared as she is getting visions about swayum .........!

NEXT DAY:

kashish got up with voices of some one screms and crying ....it is her mother prena basu ......kashish run down stairs ......as she go down staris ......she has a un-expected scene infront of her ......swayum's body ......in blood !...ria's body is also there but there are stains on white sheet on her body ........!then kashish heard a woman aying

woman: bechara road cross ker raha tha ke ik truck ne issey maar diya ....or is ke pyaar main ria ne khud ke pait main chako ..ghoop ker khudkhushi ...kerli ..hae haye !

kashish was like a statue...she screamed!

kashish: kaha tha na main ne ...ke bhai ke ghar se mat janey do bahir ....dekha nahi ..mantey na app loog ..meri baat ...app ...app sab katil ho is key !

she continue to scream when prena get some sences and asked charu to take kashish inside!

COMING UP: kashish admits in psychaitrist asylum ...shimla! entry of sujal grewal!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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haila kya starting hai amna too good 👏 magar mujhe coming up jada pasand aaya 😉 entry of sujal 😳 post the next part soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnku...shurti ...wo bechari psychaitrist ke pass jarahi hai or tum khush hori hai
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

thnku...shurti ...wo bechari psychaitrist ke pass jarahi hai or tum khush hori hai
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😆😆kya karu merey ko sujal ki entry dekhni hai 😳😳😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG.....WOWWWWWWWWW...I M ASTOUDID...SUCH AN AWWSUUUMMMM CONCEPT....WOAW YAAR...U R 2 GUD... I LUV DIS STORY ALREADY...GUD JOB...N PLZ CONT SOON....WILL B WAITIN 4 IT....WELL DONE ONCE AGAIN...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 hrpy finally i have shown ..what she is 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 going amna......

keep it up...plzz cont soon

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