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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 ..brilliant amna...kitna pyaar assylum tha..hahaha....bhoot bangla lag raha tha ...continue jaldi see plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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geart story. post the next part soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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superb story...........a new idea........try to cont soon.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
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farha terey rehney ki jaga hai na is liya 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
Amna Mamii! Boley toh kya part tha! Loved our Januu entry!! Lookin too cute as ever! Aur kya mast pisture thi ghar ki! Do continue!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part:3

sujal finally reach at asylum …he gets out of the car…he see an adult age lady …and smiled …..and scream her name ;

sujal: hey….nano…..how are u

nano: arey sujal baba …kesa hai app

sujal: main tu theek hoon ..magar ..nano ..i feel like ..tumhara mood off hai

nano: ab hai tu lagey ga na baba

sujal: why …don't tell me …mamma net um ko danta …hai na

nano: us ka problem nahi hai rey

sujal: then what

nao: wo hum ko danta …mager us new pagal …larki ke liya …wo lerki ik Hitler mafik hai

sujal: Hitler jessi lerki

nano: arey hum us ko pyaar kiya tu ….us ko pyaar ki ….barey main acha acha batein kiya ke ..she will better …but ..us hum ko thapper mara!

Sujal: app jaker us ko maar do

Nano: kya bol rela hai baba app hai

Sujal: arey jisey pyaar ras nahi us ko maar tu raas aye gin a …wesey hai kon

Nano: wo deko …wo rahi wo pagal larki ….she point out at a girl ….who was sitting on wheel chair ….

Sujal: kya ye lerki chal nahi sakti

Nano: ..arey baba ..ye lerki ..jo hai …bhoot …hateli hai …idher ..ward boy ..or nurse loog ko marti hai!

Sujal: oh ….acha main dekhta hoon

Nano: arey nahi baba app jao apni mom ke pass ye tu …..he stop her with his hand ….signal …and asked!

Sujal: naam kiya hai is ka

NaNo: KAHISH

Sujal: kashish ……ye kesa naaam hai kashish …acha hai ! he moves towards her …..but foor unknown reason …teke his steps back ..then his heart say and he get all his courage and go in front of her!

Her deep but empty eyes ….her pink lips ….her …..sad face ..which has …unique type of attraction ….which attract him !

Sujal: kashish ….waqai kashish hai

Kashish look at him and turned her face ..he was dishearten ..he was not accepting this! He gets up and leave the place! ……….kashish look at …..scene infrnt of her …and a tear drop from her eyes !

Kashish(to her self):

saath dil ke chaley
dil ko nahi roka hum ne
jo na apna tha'
usey toot ke chaha hum ne
ik dhookey main kati
umer saari humari
kya batayein
kisey khoya kisey paya hum ne !

another tear ..follow the previous one …she closed her eyes!




COMING UP: …KASHISH HAS PAST ….WHAT …..WAS THAT !

sorry it is a short part coz ....i have to continue chaandni ratein also !
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😕 kashish has a past don't tell me with sujal???>>>continue soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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not with sujal ...with some one else ....sujal is new for her 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amna dii
that was fantastic
par chalo kashish ki thapr ki kahani kab ki nahin suni..........abh thora sakoon milla ............likin becharay sujal ko maat pitwana

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50

or haan

next part lamba hona chahye plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭

or jaldi lhikye ga

lol

ana

Edited by cool_SK - 19 years ago

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