Mohabat jab ho gai S-Kprt18pg38 UPDTED - Page 3

hey amna dear just want to ask u
yaar aapke dimag mei yeh ideas aate kahan se hai??? 😉
simply superb yaar kya plot liya hai... 👏
seems to be really interesting 😛
so plz post the next part soon... sujal's entry... 😊

amna diiiiiiiii
fantastic story haan..............itnay naye ideas kahaan say miltay hain app ko..........i m quite impress by ur thoughts haan.............
gr8 part
abh plz cont soon
👏
lol
ana

aamna the story seems interesting plz continue

the ideas are origally and wholey solely mine .......thats 100% true ....plus i dont know how either 😆

wow!!!Nice introduction!!!Please next part jaldi update karo na!!!!!!!!!!!

Great Amna! Kab hogii Sujal ki entry! Plzz post the next part! 😛

👏 👏 wow amna..cha gayi yaar...bahut fit hai..lol..kashish bechari pagal... 😆 😆

Amna..too good of a story...i love the storyline too....Kashish mental 😆 ..thats funny..hmm Sujal's entry.....he could be her doctor 😳 ...anyways update soon!

ok here is next pArT:

kashish screamed many times ..she made every one responsible for swayum's death .prena locked kashish in her room ...rishi ..after taking keys from prena come inside .....with a sad look on his face!

rishi: kashish

kashish: bhai ...bhai ...dekho in loog ne ...swayum ko maar dala ...main ne ...main ne mana bhi kiya tha .ke maat bhejo swayum ko bahir ..magar kisi ne meri nahi suni !...maar dala usey !

rishi: kashish ...yeloog nahi samjtey na tumhari baat

kashish: haan ....nahi suntey

rishi: main tum ko in sab se door bhej raha hoon ...jahan sab tumhara khayal rakeingye

kashish: tum bhi chalo gye

rishi ..closed his eyes a tear drops........!
rishi: main wahan nahi jasakta ....but i promise tum se milney aaonga !

kashish: nahi main nahi jaongi ....

rishi: kyun main ne kaha na ...achi jaga hai .....

kashish: nahi wo loog bhi mujey in ki terha marrien gye ..or ....sirf vegetables ...or ganda sa khana kehlain gye ...meri baat bhi nahi manein gye

rishi: nahi essa nahi hai ...wo tumhara khayal rakein gye ..tum ko acha acha ..khana deingye ok ....

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kashish is about to sit in jeep ..with rishi when prena hugs her ...tears rolling down from her ..and anuragh's eyes ...this is natural for parents .....whoes ....eldest daughter ...is goig to admit in asylum .....!

kashish and rishi leave for .....shimla .. Grewal psychaitrist asylum !..they reached there ...after some formalities ..she admitted .....rishi left her there with tears in his eyes !

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a big and beautiful villa shown ..the name plate can be seen clearly ... "GREWAL HOUSE" .....THEN A FUNKY STYLED BED ROOM SHOWED !....it is neat and cleaned .....suddenly bathroom door opened a guy come out ....he is drying his hairs so ..we cant see his face properly ......when a knock on door made .....a cute chubby and old age lady entered in room ...the guy turned around ....the person has really .....attractive ...and handsome looks on his face ! he smiled deeply ....and says !

guy: so girl friend ........app agye ..main ye ho soch raha tha ke ab tak meri girl friend merey kamrey main kyun nahi aye

before the guy could continue the woman speak up ....

woman : kyun ke my young boy friend main tum se naraz hoon

guy: kyun girl friend main ne kiya kya

then another man entered in room he is also old age ...wearing old stle pant shirt ...but he is deent enough ..and he has cigaar in his hand !

man: so .....mr. SUJAL GREWAL .....app ne meri ..legally wedded biwi ka peecha abhi tak nahi chora

guy: u old man ....app kyun humarey beech ajtey hein

man: arey ager hum nahi attey tu tumhara baap is dunya main nahi atta ....wo nahi atta tu tum ..bhi nahi attey !

woman: app bhi na ...sujal in ki hor chal break fast ke liya

sujal: arey dadi maa.....app bhi na mummy ki terha danti ho...dada ko ....jis terha wo pops ko ....

dadi: haan terey maa baap ko tu hosh hi nahi abhi bhi asylum main hongye

sujal: wo un ka kaam hai na ...ab dekho main bhi tu ...abhi office jaonga na ...

dadi: nahi ajj tu pehley asylum jaker apni maa ko ghar bhej ...

sujal: ok girl friend ..pehla kaam ajj ye karoonga !

sujal ..grandpa ..and dadi had their breakfast .........and sujal left fo office!

back ground song played !

Ik din jab sawery sawery
Surmai se andherey ki chadar hata ker
Ik parbat ke takya se
Suraj ne sir uttaya Tu dekha
Dil ki wadi main chahat ka mausam hai
Or yadoon ke dali per unginat beetey lamhoon ki kaliyaan
Mahekney lagi hein ,un kahi un suni arzoo
Adhi soi hoi adhi jagi hoi
Ankhein malti hoi dekti hai
Laher dar laher
Maoj der maoj
Behti hoi zindagi
Jesey her pal nai
Or phir bhi wohi
Haan wohi zindagi
Jis ke daman main
Koi mohabat bhi hai
Koi hasrat bhi hai
Pass ana bhi hai
Door jana bhi hai
Aur ye ehsaas hai
Waqt jherny se behta howa
Ja raha hai ye kehta howa
Dil ki wadi main chahat ka mausam hai
Or yadoon ke dali per unginat beetey lamhoon ki kaliyaan
Mahekney lagi hein

he drives and start huming around !

Kyun hawa ajj yun gaa rahi hai
Kyun hawa ajj yun gaa rahi hai
Kyun fiza rang chalka rahi hai
merey dil bata ajj hona hai kya
chandni din main kyun cha rahi hai
zindagi kis taraf ja rahi hai
merey dil bata kya hai ye silsila
Kyun hawa ajj yun gaa rahi hai
Ga rahi hai ga rahi hai

Jahan tak bhi jayein nighahein
Barestey hein jessey ujalein
Jahan tak bhi jayein nighahein
Barestey hein jessey ujalein
Saji ajj kyun hein ye rahein
Khiley phool kyun hein niraley
Khusbooien kesi ye beh rahi hein
Dhadakaniein jany kiya keh rahi hein
Merey dil bata ye kahani hai kiya
Kyun hawa ajj yun gaa rahi hai
Ga rahi hai ga rahi hai

Ye kis ka hai chehra jisey main
Her ik phool main dekta hoon
Ye kis ka hai chehra jisey main
Her ik phool main dekta hoon
Ye kis ke hai aawaaz jis ko
Na sun ke bhi main sun raha hoon
Kesi ye ahatein aarahi hein
Kesey ye khawab dekhlarahein hein
Merey dil bata kon hai araha
Kyun hawa ajj yun gaa rahi hai
Ga rahi hai ga rahi hai

COMING UP : FIRST MEETING OF SUJAL-KASHISH ! 😃

LOVE U ALL
THNX FOR READING
AMNA 😃

thnk u dear ....for such so many emotions ..i m over joyed! 😃