Dhadkan-Garv-kumud - Page 5

Jas asked me to post this since she can't log in. this part also rocks.

PART-12

Kumud weeps:the person who came as a gud friend 2 my life is kshitij.he was very sweet 2 me.i even wondered whether a Us born boy can b like this.tho I liked him very much,it never turned into luv.but kshitij thought differently about me.
Once Kumud,kshitij were under a tree. K:what do u want 2 tell me?
Ks:I want 2 tell u that…
Unexpectedly Ks hugs her tightly.K was shocked:kshitij,whats this?leave me plz
Ks looses his hand. K becomes angry & slaps him:how dare u?
Ks:don't u luv me?
K:no,u r my friend.
Ks:I'm sorry kumud.i thot u luv me.
Ks kneels down:plz kumud,don't b angry & break our frienship.
K:ok

Kumud goes 2 his house.she gets inside the open door & enters ks' room.she sees drugs in his room:kshitij takes drug?
Ks cums.his eyes were dim. K:u take drugs?
Ks:ya,so what?
K:I never thot that u r this sort of a guy.
K was angry & she begins 2 go out.Ks grabs her hand:u can't go out wounding my heart.
K:leave my hand.
Ks:2 leave ur hand? Ks laughs:I won't leave u.
K gets scared seeing ks' eyes.K faints.

Kumud weeps:I don't remember anything else garv.i did'nt see kshitij when I opened my eyes.he did'nt cum 2 college also.later unexpectedly I realized that I'm pregnant.i was shattered when I relised what happened when I was unconscious.i wanted 2 die.but my parents' tears made me not 2 do that crime.my parents searched 4 kshitij.but later was known that he's in jail due 2 sum drug case.i cud'nt think of an abortion,bcoz what did that innocent baby do?I gave b'th 2 a baby.my parents tried 2 giv it 2 an orphanage.but I did'nt want my baby 2 liv as an orphan while her mother is alive.but my parents gave it 2 an orphanage.but I tolerated it when a childless cuple nakul-kali in US adopted my baby.when ur proposal came,I rejected it as I did'nt want 2 cheat u.but my parents told that nakul is ur cusin,if I marry u I 'l get a chance 2 see my daughter.but still I cud'nt think of a marriage.but my parents lied 2 me that they've told u the truth about me.that's how I agreed 2 marry u.but now my mama revealed that they'vent told u anything.i was shocked 2 no that I was cheating on my husband who loves me more than his life.but belive me garv,I did'nt cheat u knowingly.i'm willing 2 punish myself.my mind tells that I won't liv after this delivery.
G is shocked.he thinks about tashu's words & his reply 2 save only the baby.G's eyes get filled up with tears. G thinks:I misunderstood my loving kumud.god,plz 4giv me.
K:but I'm not sad even if I die as I don't deserve u.i'm happy 2 die,bcoz I'm sure that u'l look after our baby well.i wanted 2 tell u everything b4 I die.i cud.now I can die.but tell me once that u've 4given me.
G bursts into tears & hugs kumud:u hav'nt cheated me kumud.nothing wil happen 2 u.i won't allow anything bad 2 happen 2 u while I'm alive

wow!!! fantastic part!! do cont. soon!!!! i can't wait to read more!!!

Part-13....Kumud:after knowing everything also u luv me.u r gr8 Garv
Garv tells in his mind:if u cum 2 no how I planned 2 torture u,u'll never find me gr8.
G's tears flow down.
G goes 2 Tashu:Dr,plz save kumud.
Abhay-kusum r surprised 2 see G's change.
T:what about ur baby? G:plz save our baby too
T becomes upset:I'll try my level best.

After sumtime Tashu cums:there is a gud news.both kumud & the baby r saved.
All r happy. T:it's a girl.
G:I want 2 see my daughter.
Nurse cums:Dr,plz cum fast.the baby is….
T goes inside.All r tensed. T cums out.
G:whats with my child?
Kusum:what happened 2 my grandchild?
T:I'm sorry,I cud'nt save the baby
They r shocked. Abhay shouts:now only u told that the baby is saved.
T:I'm sorry,everything is in god's hands.nothing happens as we think.
All cry.G thinks:God punished me by taking away my baby.
G cries taking the dead baby.

G goes 2 K.K opens her eyes.K smiles:Garv,did u see our baby?
G keeps silent with eyes full of tears. K:I can't wait anymore 2 see my baby.Garv,take me there.
G wipes his tears:yes.
G-K go 2 see the baby.Abhay-kusum,tashu go behind them.K stares at it.K looks at others:whats this? Why my baby is kept like this?what hapopened?
Kusum cries. K:what happened?tell.
G's tears r flowing. T:sorry kumud.ur baby cud'nt b saved.
K screams:noooooo!Garv…our baby…
G's eyes r full of tears.he hugs her.K was silent.
All become upset about her abnormal condition.

Tashu calls G:I want 2 tell u an imp matter.Kumud is too weak 2 hav a child
G:what do u mean?
T:kumud won't hav children anymore
G is shocked:what?
T:plz don't tell kumud the truth now.it might effect her health.when she's perfectly alright u can tell
G is weeping.

amazing twist!!!! i rly enjoyed this part!!! n do cont. soon!!

gr8 continue soon bt its sad dat she cnt have any mre kids

Part-14.....2 months later.Kumud gives the coat 2 Garv:Garv,don't u think it's the right time 2 hav children?
K smiles.G becomes upset.he thinks:how can I tell kumud that she can't hav children?
G smiles & goes out.
Esha:garv,we must tell kumud that she can't hav children.
G:how can I tell?
G turns back.he was shocked 2 see K there:is it true?
G is silent. K:look at my face & tell garv.
G does'nt look at her face:yes
K bursts into tears:u hid such a big secret from me?Oh God!u gave me such a big punishment.
G-E weep.G consoles K:kumud,everything wil b alright.
K:nothing wil b alright.i deserve it.but why god is punishing an innocent man like u?
G becomes sad.

Esha:garv,since kumud can't make u a dad,do u feel like marrying another woman2 hav baby?
G:mom,how can u think like this?I've only 1 woman in this life.Kumud.i can't lose her.
K who was overhearing this becomes so happy that she 4gets herself & runs & G & hugs him.
E smiles seeing their luv.

Nakul-Kali cumfrom Us.Kumud was very happy & goes near them 2 see her baby.K takes the baby & kisses it. G thinks:let kumud b happy with her baby
G pamperes the baby.K is wondered 2 see G's affection 2wards the baby. G:if this is ur baby,its mine too right?
K smiles with tears:but now its Nakul's & kali's no
G feels sad 4 K.
K:whats the name of the baby?
Nakul:Tia
K smiles:nice name.
N:kali is pregnant esha aunty
All r surprised. E:wow!surprise!
Kali:but the problem is this baby.when there was no hope only we adopted this baby.but now it's a burden
K is shocked 2 no her daughter's situation.G becomes upset.

G-K in the room.K is crying. G:I no why u r crying?no mother can b happy when her baby is suffering.kumud,why don't we adopt Tia ?
K was surprised:garv?r u serious?
G:yes K becomes happy:thanku garv,I'm gr8ful 2 u.
K hugs G.

omg!
awesome parts garv is sooo nice!
cont soon!

👏 👏 👏 awesome, garv and kumud rock

Part-15...Garv-kumud adopt Tia.G-K r very happy with her.
Tia is going 2 b 7yrs old.
Nakul sees kali staring at Tia.
N:why r u looking at her like this?
K:see how happy she's
N:ya.its gud no
K:I dunno.she was supposed 2 b our baby.but now…
N:u only told me 2 giv Tia 2 Garv & kumud
K:ya.bcoz I wanted 2 avoid her
N:anyways they r lucky 2 hav Tia.she's cute
K:better than our child?
N:why r u so stubborn kali?
K:what if Tia cums 2 no that garv-kumud r not her real parents?
Tia overhears it,she was shocked.she runs 2 Garv-kumud with tears.
T:tell me,am I'm not ur real daughter?
G-K r shocked. G-K r speechless.
Esha cums:its true Tia.
G:mom!wy did u ..?
E:Tia shud no everything.
K cries.
T:then who r my real parents?
K:I'm ur mom beti
E: Tia,we dunno who ur real parents r.but they never loved u.that's why they threw u.
K becomes upset.G realizes her pain.
E:Garv-kumud only loved u.so u shud never think that they r not ur parents.
Tia cries & hugs G-K:if my real parents cum also,I want u both 2 b with me.
G-K smile with tears.E becomes happy.

G-K alone at the room. K:I'm Tia's real mom.but …
G:no 1 in this family nos that truth.they shud'nt no that secret.so plz kumud…u shud never tell others that u r tia's real mom.
K:Garv!am I an unlucky mom or a lucky mom.i'm confused.
G:u r a lucky mom as ur daughter is with u.she considers u as her real mom.she loves u very much.
K weeps.

Esha overhears it.she wipes her tears.E thinks:no,I'll never reveal that I cum 2no kumud's secret.i shud never destroy their peace.
Tia's b'th day party..There cums an unexpected guest.K is so shocked that she feels that she's going 2 faint.

WHO IS HE?

great job jas
i bet its kshitj