Dhadkan-Garv-kumud

Part-1...Garv is looking at the photo of kumud. G:I can't 4get my 1st meeting with u.
G recalls.Kumud cums 2 G's office 4 interview.G cud'nt take eyes ff her.It was luv at 1st site.G goes & asks Abhay:I wud like 2 marry kumud?will u plz conduct our wedding?
A was surprised.
G:finally that day has cum.2day we'll get married.
G smiles.
Kumud hasdressed up like a bride.K weeps in her house.
K:I feel that I'm doing a mistake.
Kusum:no,don't b guilty.we've told everything 2 garv.but promise that u'll never talk about this 2 garv.
K:ok mama,bcozs I want 2 4get my past.but I doubt whether I can luv garv.still I don't feel like marrying him.
Kusum becomes upset:u've 2 luv garv beti.he's such a nice guy.
K's eyes r full of tears.
Kusum goes near Abhay:abhay,I lied 2 kumud that we've told everything 2 garv.that's how she agreed 4 this marriage.if garv cums 2 no everything what'll b kumud's future?
A becomes upset:lets hope 4 the best.

Kumud-garv enter the mandap.they get married. K's mind was full of pain.song:Dhadkan…{Dhadkan}

Kumud is sitting inside the decorated bedroom.Garv enters.K gets tensed.

awesome part cont soon 👏 👏 👏

Part-2..Garv smiles at kumud.K did'nt smile properly. G:kumud,2day my dream came true.i was waiting 2 get u.i just can't believe that now u r mine.only mine.
K becomes upset. G:u no what I felt when I saw u 1st?u r my wife.that's why did'nt employ u there.what did u feel when u saw me 1st?
K was speechless. G:I no that u also felt the same.
K becomes upset.K thinks:eventho he nos everything,why he's talking like this?he's so nice.i don't deserve him.
G cums near K.G holds her hand & keeps on her chest:u r my luck.
K feels discomfort.she wants 2 get away from G.
K:I'm tired after the function.can I sleep?
G:sure…sleep.b fresh.
K:thanku garv.u r an understanding husband.no other guy can b so soft in this nite.
K sleeps.G smiles.

The next morning kumud brings bed coffee 4 garv.G:thanku kumud.
G starts drinking. G:did u drink coffee?
K:no
G extends hiss cup:drink this
K:this is urs no?
G:we'll share it
K:I'm sorry garv.i don't like drinking from other's cup.
G becomes dull. K:don't feel bad plz.
G:its ok.

Garv cums in the evening. G:kumud,ger ready.we've 2 go 4 a party.
K:sorry garv.i'm not coming 4 the party.
G:kumud,what r u telling?my friends arranged this party 4 us.plz cum with me kumud.
K:ok,let me wear sari.
G:thanks kumud 4 cuming with me.
G sits there.K takes the sari. K:I've 2 wear sari.
G:ok.. K:so plz go out of this room.
G was embarrassed:ok,I'm sorry.
G goes out. G thinks:why do I feel that kumud is avoiding me?is my feeling true?

veryyyyyy guud!!! 👏 👏 plz cont wen possi! 😊

cont. soon,i just went over ur fanfic and it's good!!!!

Part-3..Kumud cums in a grand violet sari.Garv cud'nt take his eyes off her.
G:kumud…u look really nice.
G's arms go 2 her face.K moves away.G becomes dull. K:we'll go.
K walks out.
G-K reach the party place. 1 guy announces:now the famous baby doll is going 2 perform .we ask all the cuples especially the newly married cuple garv-kumud 2 dance 2 the song.
G smiles at kumud. K:plz garv.my mind is not allowing me 2 dance.
G was shocked:why?
K:garv,I'm not feeling well.
G:kumud,then we'll go 2 a doctor
K:no need.it wil b ok if I take rest.
K's cell rings.It was kusum:kumud,how r u?
K:fine mama. Ku:how is garv? K:fine.how r u? & papa..
Ku:we both r fine.kumud…keep garv happy.don't giv him chance 2 become sad.he's gr8 kumud.he gave u a new life.
K becomes upset:now we r at a party.so bye mama.
Ku:bye.

Kumud thinks:I shud'nt make garv sad.
K looks at G.he looks sad. K smiles at G.G becomes very happy.K:Garv,now I'm ok.we'll dance 2gether.
G was thrilled:really? K:ya.
Babydoll performs:Aksar…{Dhadkan}.G-K 2gether.G looks at K. Seeing K's dull face,G's face becomes dull.After the song got stopped K moves away from G.G becomes dull.
G thinks:why do I feel that kumud is keeping a distance with me?

nice part.

but i definetly wanna kill kumud 😡

Part-4...Kumud is infront of the mirror.she's trying 2 remove her necklace.Garv cums:shall I help u? K:4 what? G:I'll help u 2 remove ur necklace.
K:no thanks.i myself will remove it.
G becomes dull.K removes it. K:Garv,wil u plz go out,I want 2 change my dress.
G:ok. G goes out. G thinks:how much I dreamt about my life with kumud?is it shattering?is it true that dreams won't cum true?
G becomes upset.He goes back 2 the bedroom.there K was sleeping. G looks at her with sad eyes.G was sleepless & walks out. K opens her eyes & tells in her mind:I'm sorry Garv,I still can't luv u.that's why I'm avoiding u.plz 4giv me.
K's eyes r full of tears. K thinks:I don't think I can ever luv garv.poor guy.he loves me very much.but he's not getting anything from his wife.

Garv's mom Esha tells:Garv,take kumud out 4 lunch.
K:no need mummiji.
E:no matter.garv has 2 take kumud out.wives won't force their husbands 2 take them out.but husbands shud behave knowing their wives' desires.
G thinks:I'm happy 2 take kumud out.but I doubt whether kumud wil b happy.

GK r sitting in a restaurant. G:kumud,if my mom had'nt asked 2 cum with me 4 a lunch here,wud u hav cum with me?
K was speechless. G says in his mind:I no kumud,u wud've cum with me.
G:kumud..u look very pretty now
K:thanks G:not only now,u r always pretty,u r very fair.Am I that bad looking? fair?I no that I'm not fair.but I'm a that dark?
K:u r not dark.u r very fair.very attractive also.
G smiles:really? K:ya. G:u no kumud,I'm so lucky 2 hear a complement from u.i value ur comment more than anybody else's comment.
K feels pity.

The next day,G-K go 2 stay in K's house. K tells G:Garv,can I sleep with my mom 2nite?
G:what?

WILL GARV ALLOW KUMUD 2 B WITH KUSUM DURING NITE?

Awesome....but we need some romance SOON 😉

Garv is such a sweeeeeeeeeeetheart, yea like kitty said we gotta have some romantic scene. Jasmine this ff is fab. good work!