Dhadkan-Garv-kumud - Page 7

I think trishul is lying continue soon 😛 😛

ohhh poor kumud!!! i am pretty sure that mr. trishul is lying, do cont. soon!n keep up the good work u r doing on the fanfic!

Im positive Trishul is lying!
But i hope garv doesnt desert kumud although i dont think he will anyways!
awesome twist cont soon!
but can someone plz explain th epart that i didnt understand!

Part-18....Trishul:u no..kumud had 2 go thru severe sufferings in life & thus she was gling out of track.she even used 2 become violent.
Garv:no T:I understand ur feelings.every husband is lyk this.
G:if so,kumud wud've told me.
T:4 that kumud does'nt no about this.bcoz she was not normal at that time.she may not b ABLE 2 remember anything
Kumud,esha & tia cum.K stares at T.
G:this is….
G does'nt no how 2 introduce T.
T:I'm Dr.Trishul,Garv's friend.
G smiles. K keeps staring at T. G:kumud,go & giv tia sum food.mama..u too.
E:ok K keeps looking at T while going.
T:Garv..is kumud having any particular tension now?
G thinks:how can I tell that kumud is tensed about kshitij,case & tia
T:I feel so,as I can see kumud becoming like b4
G:what do u mean?
T:yes garv.i'm a Dr.i can recognize patients.
G:u r going 2 say that kumud is…?
T:relax.u see,kumud was an interesting patient.i mean I used 2 giv a special attention 2 kumud.bcoz she was very special & diff from other patients.that's why I came 2 see her.otherwise why shud a DR care about a patient who has already gone.i want kumud 2 b ok.
G:so? T:u plz bring kumud 2 my hospital.let me check.let me see how her condition is
G becomes angry:enuf Dr
T:I'm not forcing u.but u miust understand that it's a disease that shud b treated in the beginning itself.otherwise u can guess what wil happen.u might even lose ur wife.can u think about a life without ur life?
It touches G's mind.T goes.

T observes K.K was talking alone in the room:no,I won't allow
G goes out with tears:oh god,whats this?
K tells herself:no,I shud'nt allow him 2 take my daughter
G goes near her:kumud,u r tensed & tired.we'l see a dr.
K:4 such a silly thing?
G:yes,u'l b fresh
K:no garv G:no kumud,u'v 2
K:ok.garv,is that trishul ur friend itself?
G becomes dull:why?
K:bcoz u'vent told me about him
G:I 4got.i'm going 2 take u 2 him K:ok,ur wish

K thinks:why do I feel that I've seen trishul b4?no chance.but still…
Trishul thinks:kumud was staring at me.but I think she does'nt remember me.once she has seen me with kshitij.that's all.

Garv-kumud enter trishul's room. T:hi,whats the problem?

Awesome Part!
My confusion is clear now! You know what! I really hope Kumud realizes that she had seen Trishul with Kshitij before and this is some sort of plan to trap her and Garv. I also hope Garv doesnt let Kumud go to the mental asylum though it seems like it because after the leap she is there! Oh I wonder if Garv is the one dead or Kshitij! I hope it is Kshitij! I liked this part even though its not as happy as the other parts.You should continue soon. I really dislike Kshitij and now Trishul unless he starts to take Kumud-Garv side. Garv is soo caring and such a nice husband, but there is still a twist you havnt revealed the part where garv wants revenger from kumud she doesnt know about it yet so i hope that doesnt cause problems between them. I love the fact that Kumud tells Garv everything and doesnt hide anything from him. I hope it stays this way and if she recognizes Trishul she tells Garv immedietly. Tia is cute. I have no idea what happened though and I cant wait to find out! How did Kumud end upp in the mental asylum? Who is dead Kshitij or Garv. The best part about your fanfic is that you end it with somehting intersesting! So people want to read what happens next! Atleast I do...Cont soon..awesome part!!!

I hope this is long enough!

good stuff jas, i had fun reading it, can't wait for the next part
👏 👏 😉

Part-19....Garv:kumud feels tired.
Trishul:ok,garv,u plz go out.let me check
Kumud feels weird:why cant garv sit here
G:kumud,I'l sit outside.don't worry
G goes out.T smiles. T:don't worry kumud.i'l giv u a medicine.u'l b fresh.
T takes a picture of a flower.T:how is it? K:very beautiful flower
T smiles:ya,u can go.call garv inside
K goes out. K:garv,nothing was there.he showed me a picture of flower.
G smiles.

G goes inside.G:is she ok? T:sorry garv,like I doubted,kumud's condition is going worse. G was shocked. T shows the picture of a camel:seeing this picture she says it's a flower.
G remembers K telling him about the picture of the flower.G becomes upset.
T:I'l giv u a medicine.lets see
T gives him medicine.G-K go.
T has an evil medicine:this medicine wil slowly make kumud half crack.

G:hav this medicine kumud
K:but I don't like medicines
G:but u've 2.u r tired.
G feeds her medicine.K was so tired that she goes 2 sleep.she was talking unclear words 2 herself.G becomes upset:kumud is becoming worse than b4.oh god!

Kshitij goes 2 see Tia in the school:don't u remember me?
T:ya,the uncle u gav a pretty doll
Ks:I'm not uncle,I'm ur dad.
Tia is shocked:dad? Ks:yes
Garv who cums there 2 pick up her sees this & goes angry:Tia,don't talk 2 strangers.
Ks:I'm not a stranger,I'm her dad
G:that court wil decide.only after that u'l b her dad.
Ks:ok,but thT DAY wil surely cum.it's a challege
G:it'l remain as a dream

G-T in the car. T:is it true that he's my dad?then why r u not allowing me 2 b close 2 him?he is lovable no
G was shocked.

oh god, that's sooo sad!!! do cont. soon! gr8 story!

Part-20...Garv:so,4 u he's more imp?
Tia:no papa.u r more imp 4 me.but still how cant I luv my dad?
G weeps:tia…u feel like going with him? T:never papa.i want 2 b with u all.but still I can b close 2 my dad too no
G becomes upset.

Kumud was really sleepy & always talk herself.Esha is shocked 2 see K's condition.G is really upset 2 see this.
E:whats wrong with kumud?
G:mama,kumud is not well
E:means? G bursts into tears:without ur knowledge I'm giving my friend & psychiatrist Trishul's medicine.he was her DR in Us.
E is shocked.

Trishul cums there.He sees kumud.that time,K is almost out of the sleep stage.But T says:kumud in a dangerous situation.u've 2 admit her in the mental hospital.
G-E r shocked. G:mental hospital?
K overhears it.she screams:nooooooooo
T:see her becoming overemotional.it's the result of her disease.
K catches his shirt's collar & shouts:how cud u lie like this?I'm not mad.
T whispers:u've 2 b mad b4 ur hubby garv.he'l desert u & only kshitij wil b there with u
K shouts:u cheat! K slaps him.
G-E r shocked. T:see,she's becoming vilent.she has 2 b taken 2 the hospital immediately.
G:ok. K was shocked:Garv,u….u want me 2 b in the hospital?I'm a mad?
G weeps:no kumud.but u hav 2 b like b4.i want my old kumud back.
G looks at t:that's the only reason 4 which I hav agreed 2 get her hospitalized.bcoz I need my kumud back.
T:I promise u that she'l b ok
K thinks:Garv loves me like crazy.that's why he even agreed this.
K cries.she stood like a doll with no reaction when she was taken 2 the hospital.
G feels upset seeing her like this.

Trishul phones kshitij:u r successful.kumud is mad in the eyes of garv.he'l b fed up pf her & he'l lose interest in her.kumud is going 2 b urs.
Ks is happy:thanku so much
Ks is thrilled 2 visit kumud in the hospital.Kumud behaves like a mad woman b4 him.
Ks-T feel weird. Ks:kumud… K:kumud?who is that?I'm koyal.ok…who r u?
Ks:what? K:ya,I no u.u r famous filmstar Salman Khan.right?
K laughs like crazy.T-Ks r shocked.

DID KUMUD REALLY BECOME MAD OR IS SHE PRETENDING?

great job jas 👏 👏 👏
i bet she is pretending