Dhadkan-Garv-kumud - Page 4

whoa, wat a twist!!!! i rly hope we learn more about this in ur next part!!!! n yeah, that was a very good part! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!

nice part!
but i really hope its not kshtijs baby!
u write really well!
cont soon!

Originally posted by: candyfloss

🤢 🤢 eww i knew it kumud is pregnant wid dat kshitij 🤢 🤢 sorry jasmine that's disgusting...how can you do this to garv 😭
i'm not reading anymore. 😕

candy give her a break will ya.
i mean kripa is pregnant with prithvi's child, now that's even worse, buh yea jas the story is great, love it. do ur thing babes. 👏👏

i'vent written that kumud is pregnant with kshitij's baby.then why all r guessing so much?Tashu tells that kumud has delivered b4.thats all.Kumud is pregnant with Garv's baby,not any1 else's

Part-10.....Tashu:bcoz of kumud's sudden pregnancy after the 1st delivery,she's very weak.u've 2 take care of her.
Garv is shattered. G goes 2 see abhay-kusum.
A:garv,what a gr8 surprise!cum inside.
G:I did'nt cum here 2 enjoy ur welum.i want 2 no a truth.Kumud's Dr.Tashu told me that kumud has delivered b4.is it true?
A-kusum r shocked.they weep. G:that means its true.
G is lost.his tears flow down. G:who is ur daughter ex-bf?
They keep silent. G:I'm least bothered about that.where is that child?
A:that baby is adopted by ur cusin nakul who is at states.that's 1 reason why kumud agreed 2 marry u.kumud did'nt cheat u.we only compelled her 2 marry u.so plz don't …
G:enuf of supporting ur daughter.
K:all the parents do the same 4 they wish 4 their children's gud future.
G:do u think ur daughter got a gud life?I cannot luv her anymore like I used 2 luv her b4.so her future is not as gud as u think.my aim is 2 take revenge on her.
A-K r shocked. A:Garv!
G:but my method is not 2 desert her or slap her 4 cheating on me.i'l not reveal that I came 2 no of her future.i'l keep luving here.if I can I'l return her lost baby.then she can't liv peacefully.bcoz each moment her heart wil b paining due 2 the guilty feeling that she's cheating on me by hiding her dirty past from her luving trustworthy husband.
G was determint.he goes.A-K cry.

G's mind is full of his moments with kumud.song: sad version of tere naam..
G returns home.K receives him with a smile:garv,whats the result?
G thinks about tashu telling that K is weak. G:u r perfectly ok.
K smiles:what about our baby?
G:fine. K keeps her face on G's chest.G did'nt react.
K:this is a happy news.so giv me a hug.
G hugs her.but there was no passion or luv in that hug.

The next day,while G is about 2 go out,K:can u buy a green sari 4 me?
G:ok,I'll.
G thinks:black is the perfect color 4 u as it's the color of sin.u cheated on me kumud.
G's eyes is full of anger.

IN the evening,Garv cums with the sari.K opens the cover.it was a black sari.K:this is black.i told u 2 buy a green sari.
G:sorry,I did'nt get it
K:but I don't like black.
G:its ok,black suits u.u look nice on black.
K smiles:really?tho its black, it looks nice.ur selection is gud.how can ur selection b bad?I'm ur selection no?
G stares at K.K was shy.G thinks:my selection was not gud.now I understand that.
G:kumud,drap this sari.i want 2 see u in this sari.
K:ok. K takes that sari 2 put it. G begins 2 move off the room. K:where r u going?u don't hav 2 go just bcoz I'm drapping this sari.oh!u r going bcoz that day while I was about 2 put sari,I told u 2 go out.that time,we were just married,we were not so close 2each other.but now its not like that.i'm even pregnant with ur baby.so its ok,u can stay here.
G:no,I'll sit outside.
K cums out in that black sari with a smile.G:u look extremely beautiful.
K smiles.
Months passed.K is admitted in the hospital.G sits near K & looks at her. K:r u tensed?no need.see how cool I'm eventho I'm the one who's going 2 deliver.

Garv,abhay,kusum go 2 Dr.Tashu. K:whats the matter Dr?
T:kumud's condition is complicated.a critical stage. All r shocked.

wow!!! it's a fantastic twist!!! plz do cont. soon, i am dying to read more!!hopefully, G-k will get closer again soon

oh man!
garv wants revenge from kumud its not her fault though its kusum and abhays fault!
nice part....cont soon!

Part-11....Kumud is in a serious condition.i don't think I can save both kumud & the baby.Garv,listen carefully.u can hav more children.but ur wife is sum1 who shud b there till the end of ur life.now choose whom do u want?
Garv:save my baby.
Abhay-kusum r shocked. T:r u sure? G:sure,no doubt.
A-K cry.G goes out.t becomes upset.

Kusum sits near kumud with sad eyes. Kumud:mama,garv is loving & caring.
Kusum becomes sad.she thinks:poor kumud does'nt no whats there in garv's mind.
K:tho he knows about my past he loves me so much
Kusum bursts into tears. K:why r u crying mama?
Ku:I'm sorry kumud.i lied 2 u that v hav told garv everything about u. we did'nt tell him anything.
K is shocked:what?garv does'nt no anything.he married me without knowing my dark past?u cheated on me & garv.unknowingly I cheated on that nice person.
K cries:god wil never 4giv me.
Ku:its 4 ur gud future I lied 2 u.
K:what future mama?4 cheating that innocent person,do u think god wil giv me a gud future?my life is finished.
Ku:kumud! K turns back:mama,u plz go now. Ku:kumud! K:plz go..
Ku goes with tears.

Garv cums.K looks at him with tears. G:what happened?
K holds his hand & cries. G did'nt understand anything.
K:my parents cheated on me.
G is wondered:what?
K:Garv,I've a dark past.i want 2 tell u everything.otherwise my heart wil break & I'll die.
G is stunned.

K:when we were in Us,I was alone.he came 2 comfort me with a cheerful face.like me he was also emotional.very soft.he gave me valuable frienship.He supported me in everything.he is….
G listens carefully 2 no his name.

WHO IS HE?

wow!!!!! i loved kumud's lines!!! n boy, did garv's reply shock me!!!!! even i am dying to know the name of kumud's ex bf!!!!

hey.....sorrie cudnt comment on it b4...was really busy in summtin...buh jus caught up and i think it is really gud...aww i hope garv and kumud get okay....i luved teh holi part too very cute...plzz continue soon...am waiting 😊 !!