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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MoNayaHolicPrag

Heyy !! I am so sorry for the late comment..


well i so enjoyed the update.. all the mood changes which has been goin on with samrat is a fun filled thing..
i enjyed it
ohh mann that was a dream ??? and i all this time i thought it was reality :) :P

loved it
when things turned from anger to care again..
but the last bit was like the bestest part i so enjyed it
how samrat was able to convince gunjan for lunch :) super awesome

i loved the way all the emotions have been potrayed..
bee it anger, love, sadness, care and all that.. superb..


how much ever samrat tries to avoid gunjan he cant.. how much he wants to shout at her.. at last he feels guilty..

and how much even gunjan wants to run away fro samrat.. he wont let that happen..

wanting to know wats more in store..
please do update fast really waiting for more :)




Thank you PRAGYA for the appreciating comment. And please, do not apologize for the delay in writing the comment as V know our readers R extremely busy.

Nightmare it was for GUNJAN who cannot even imagine such a scenario.

Whatever that SAMRAT is expecting is something new to him. But, whatever that he has been trying to hide for so long, all those emotions, those feelings, they are fighting to come out. And ultimately, they do manage to break free and so this sudden changes in his behavior.

It is GUNJAN's simplicity that makes him guilty every time he scolds her. She never replies back and that is why, when he cools down, he realizes his mistakes...B'coz, somwhere he knows that,he was wrong... n she is Perfect.

GUNJAN is totally at the mercy of her pure heart and try as she might, moving away from
SAMRAT is easier said than done.

V will be updating, but after APHG. That is long overdue now.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arzzo

firstly a big sorrryyy for the late replt the thing was that my pc was out of order then when i but a new one the forst thing i do was read ur post as it was ccursing my night sleep raat koa neend nai ah rahi thii souch souch kah kah story update hu gayi hai aur ab tak mai nah parhe nai hai and secondlyyy congragulation to you and all the readers of mbyph including me :-) for the completion of 3 thread and starting of the 4 one and now about the update honestly speaking it was speechless seriously this tym i have no wordsto complement it it was truely awesome from the start till the end each and every emotion each and every line the pain was outstandingly expressed gunji koa hurt dekh kar sam pai ghussa ahta hai per jb uska pain dekhti hu tu yeh souchti hu woa bhi kya kare the flashback of gunji parents death really brought tears the living room scene of gunji and her family was really cute then coming back to the room scene each dialogur by gunji each emotion was superb and her dream kuch der kah leya tu mai khush hu gayi thi kah sam nah akir woa kaha diya bt it can happen so easily and so soon prof nanda and aunty scene was great every parents feel like this about their children and god their are also intrested in monish now i am scared agar monish rista lahkar ahya tu yaha sai bhi han hu gii agar rahul aur monish koa pata chala kah un dono kah leya uncle aunty kii han hai tu unnaha tu party karni hai aur insb mai mera sam raha gaya apna anger kii wajha sai but gud kah atleast mr nanada usahatora samjh raha hai kahi nah kahi unaha uski ankhon mai kuch dekha and the concern for gunji from her uncle aunty was really amazingly written then coming to sam he was really angry and even right somewhere per usna is bbt kah ghussa gunji pai kyu nikal diya per kya kare uska koi control he nai khd per huta ghussa mai lets see woa kya karta hai the morning scene and office scene was awesome the way sajan behave was obvious and gunji dialogues were heart perching seriously sam koa hella diya usna the way she speak up her pain and the way she make him realize his guilt and woaaa sajan first hug awww sooo sweet waiting for it frm a lonfg tym and then the embrasement and the sweet talk of sjan about food and wound for a while i get the sam of mjht the nautangi one while talking to the phone and in the end while taking to gunnji it was really januable enjoy alot lets see gunji ab kya apna kal raat kah decession change karti hai aur sam ab agaha kya karta hai waiting eagerly for nxt part add me to the pm list of nxt thread and keep me in rajan update pm list and really hats off to you for such brilliant writing and sorry again for the late reply but honestly aj jahkar sukoon sai mai soa pao gii story per kah



Thank You ARZOO for your detailed reply. And please, do not apologize for the late comment. It is overwhelming to read that not being able to read the update gave you sleepless nights.😳.. I consider this as a ,One of the Big compliment for us...

More than us, the credit of starting off a 'New' thread, without doubt goes to our lovely and mature readers who take the time to read our updates and discuss them with us via their comments... heartily Congratulate to you...n all loyal readers...😳

Feeling glad to read that you have loved the update.Thanx !! SAMRAT is pretty impulsive in his behavior, and also the fact that after a real long time, he has met someone who is dominating his heart and mind, makes it even more difficult for him to accept that GUNJAN is not with him. She sides with her family, and for SAMRAT, family means nothing... He is anger because,he wants her attention more then her family.You can say... this is one type of 'insecurity comlex'.

The heart wrenching thoughts that GUNJAN thinks is very normal for a person who has lost a lot. Some memories never leave and her parents funeral is one of the bad memory that is etched in her mind, similar to his mother's death, etched in SAMRAT's mind.

GUNJAN's family is equally possessive about this adopted daughter of theirs and not just the NANDA's, but also the extended family. The NANDA's want the best for GUNJAN and so, they are trying to get a person who will take good care of their daughter post marriage. And MONISH has played his game well. They do wish that RAHUL would have been that lucky person.

Luckily, that was GUNJAN's nightmare, or else, it would be increasingly difficult for GUNJAN. her worry that her early morning dreams come true still may hold good.

GUNJAN will speak her mind, but at the right time. And that is the Next day at work, when she sees that SAMRAT has calmed down. It is futile to talk to a person and reason with a person who is angry And GUNJAN knows this.

And it is GUNJAN's effect on him that SAMRAT is moving away the facade of a brash, shrewd businessman and is becoming the SAMRAT he was and always wanted to be.
.. He knows that,somewhere he was wrong... so,he wants to change for her...

Don't worry... V already add your name in our both 'New' PM List. Now working on Next Thread... will be send that Link very soon...😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
wao love to read your sweet and detailed feedbacks as always and yah only i know how i have spend that days by knowing that the story is post and i am unable to read it gosh a nightmare and thank you so much for the wishes and for adding me will wait for the link
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arzzo

wao love to read your sweet and detailed feedbacks as always and yah only i know how i have spend that days by knowing that the story is post and i am unable to read it gosh a nightmare and thank you so much for the wishes and for adding me will wait for the link




Thanks for appreciating our replies with your lovely words. We do love to read the replies our readers give us and also enjoy discussing the FF with them. new thread will be ready soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hey S3J...Finally im back with my Comment...😊

First of all very very Sorry for sooo late comments.. i didn't get time to come online and read updates since last few months due to many problems...but now im here n I read all previous 4 parts in one go...and it felt awesome read all parts back to back without any break and further wait...i thought till now everything would b settle between Sajan...buttt.. there r still misunderstandings and "HADDIYAN" exist between them...but all parts were Wonderfull and Amazing..i had missed so much..😳

Anyways story going on really very very Well.now I'll give shortly Combine feedback to every part...I started read from part 41...but I remember I didn't comment on part 40 also...in that Part the Best scene was DAAI MAA and Samrat conversation...the ways she was confusing him with Gunjan's name and he defended himself by refer her as HIS "ONLY P.A" I enjoyed it alottt...that was Wonderfull scene of Samrat and Daai maa ever...😃

It was Completely Entertaining scene..i smiled constantly throughout the scene...😆

HATTS OFF TO YOU for writing this CUTEST and totally interesting PART👏👏👏

Office scene was written Awesomly...Specially Confuse Gunjan's feelings towards sudden change in Samrat's behavior... I never thought that new changes in his office will b like ... a combine office of a Boss and his P.A...😳

Samrat's behavior towards Gunjan was Sooo Sweet...i could imagine the surprise look of Gunjan's face in every gentle word that was utterd by him...like "haan to yahan se (from Samrat's desk) call kar lo...Oh GOD he was not allowing to let her go off from his table...so sweet...i always love Sajan's scenes..❤️

It seems Gunjan and Satyram Raheja have also some past connection...wait to know...

After this again Daai maa came...Daai maa is very smart...she always call him at ryt time ..I loved the scene when Samrat was waiting her to say him to go to the Doctor and she wasn't but when he was busy in his emotional thinking then suddenly she said what he wanted to listen...Samrat's all thinking parts I like very much when it relate to Gunjan since the 1st episode...As per Daai Maa statement Mujhe to No keh dia dekhna ye he Gunjan ko b "No" kehte ho k nai..and Sam did like exactly she thought of...😉

Doctor Clinic scene was also very Nice...Gunjan's concern and care towards Samrat was written too much beautifully...best thing in writing such stuff abt Gunjan's feelings is ..You always maintained her feelings even in petrified and accidental condition in a limit...like she always get tense to see him in any trouble..but she never loose control over herself..she gives a little hint to Samrat abt her feelings but not let her open so much infront of him...So does Samrat...😊

I loved the way he is trying to fulfill his all personal wishes in so Professional way...as he did in the case of Cell phone...Lovely scene it was...whenever he thinks necessary to convince her with his stern voice and little fake anger he he does..he knows na Shez so innocent and Pure she can easily obey him and could not deny his orders...😛

Dr Butra is sooo Disgusting..im sure he z Involve with Samrat's dad n playing a Game with Samrat and his health...hopefully they would not do something wrong with him...😡

1st time Monish and His parents Scene came...it was Wonderfulll...Really "1 Bigdi hui Family" ki Perfect Example thi...but the scene was written very nicely...Somewhere I took pity on Monish when there was such lines regarding child and Parents love..n I thought For a lonely and dishearten person . Take a decision of spend his life with a simple loving girl (like Gunjan) and make a family with her is not a bad idea..but Then again there is a big NOOO as we always want to see Our Sajan together only..wht to do..we cant help na...😊

Honestly some business talks n conversation I could never understand like that vote matter..I don't know what kind of deal was Monish setting with his parents.I really really didn't understand...His parents were really sick ppl...how can anyone behave with his/her own children like that...Disgusting ppl...

Sajan's Lunch was so cute...Samrat ordered everything as Gunjan's choice..it obviously made her go crazy...today I think she got most of surprises in her whole life just in one single day..in every passing minute she was surprised to see him so changed and gentle...like 100 times she got confuse n more confuse due to his behavior...😕..well a big surprise was waiting for her tonight...

Guys plz solve this Rahul and Alisha's mystery soon na...what happened in past...what had she done with Gunjan...reveal soon.

Welcome Back RiJA !! n Thanx for your detailed analysis...V do know the problems that our readers across the border face and so, V know, it would not be possible for you to comment as frequently as you normally do.😳,Actually,I want to say sorry for my late feed-back.😳

By the way,'HADDIYAAN' nahin hongi toh story bhi nahin hogi...😆.

DAi Maa is a mother figure to SAMRAT and she knows how she can get him to speak up his mind. And he tries to hide it by saying the 'only PA' dialogue, but Dai Maa is able to see through it.Thanks for appreciating that particular scene...That was tough... B'coz,I always said... Comic scene writing is not our cup of tea...😳

Absolutely, GUNJAN is confused. SAMRAT's behavior surprises her as he is so unpredictable. But, SAMRAT is dealing with his own demons and is trying very hard to get rid of them. And he knows, with GUNJAN around, it will be possible. His love for her makes him do things that he would never have even bothered to do otherwise. He is also getting possessive about her and so wants her to be right in front of his eyes every time.Actually,due to his past... now,he is facing some 'Insecurity complex' ...His over protective n possesive behavior is result of that... He can't lose her...

GUNJAN and SATYAM relation will be soon revealed... wid a twist...He is going to play a very very important part of this story...

Dai Maa called to remind SAMRAT of his appointment with the Dr.BATRA. It was her luck that she found out that GUNJAN was present then. And she, by now knows that if GUNJAN finds out about the appointment and SAMRAT refusing to visit the Doctor, she (GUNJAN) will ask him to visit the Doctor. And Dai Maa knows this much, that SAMRAT cannot refuse GUNJAN,If,he is trully in love.


GUNJAN does not know about SAMRAT's feelings for her. So she feels it best to keep her feelings hidden from him. She knows the social difference between them and has decided to maintain the distance.So,V have to maintain this in her behavior, be it concern or any other feeling.Its very important...for her character.She can't accept her feelings in-front of him.

Dr. BATRA's reasons and partner will be revealed soon.

SAMRAT has a habit of getting things done, by hook or by crook. And when he finds that a soft and gentle tone will not work, he speaks in his regular tone... albeit a put on one. And bingo,GUNJAN accepts the phone...mission accomplished for SAMRAT.😆

MONiSH is also a main character of this story and it is only fair that his part of the story is also told. He also had a very bad childhood and that is why, he is who he is now. A dysfunctional family and MONiSH craves to have a normal family, one which only GUNJAN can give him.

Sorry,for inconvenience in Business related conversations.Its only used for perfection...Ok...I am trying to explain U in laymen language... actually here,He is talking about BOD-General Meeting [*Board of Directors] ,jahaan sabhi shareholders ke vote ke basis par Company ke new MD ka selection hota hai... Due to MONiSH's Grand Paa's WiLL he is owner of his Grand Paa's shares too..Toh,now uske paas double voting rights hain... in this scene he is trying to black-mailing to his parents.

When, SAMRAT woos, he woos in style. It is these small things that create a place in a person's heart and though SAMRAT may not realise it, it is doing the job pretty well. He is trying to behave normal with her... Its really tough job for him... 😆.GUNJAN is really shocked to see his cool behavior with her...She was not expecting these changes in his personality...

RAHUL-GUNJAN-ALISHA mystery, to be cleared,soon. After Next part of APHG...V'll be send that part. [would be Only,available on PM].


Rest part of Reply will post soon...😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Ok again come back to Sajan... when Samrat was ordering to cancel all the meeting of next 2- 3 days n was talking abt his out door trip I knew hez planning to go somewhere with gunjan...on the lunch when he said Hum hi nahi honge to meetings kon attend karega...first I thought may b he would take her to pune to attend her family function...just to pleased her..regarding Pune I was ryt..but family function turns into Official tour...😳

Whole car scene was mind blowing...i think till now it was the most memorable journey for Samrat...he was loving her Company and and enjoyed indian songs a very first time...😉..u know when they were discussing abt movies and their titles...it was so hilarious but when conversation turned to Rahul...i thought "There is already one Rahul ..Real Rahul in her life..what will happen when Samrat get to know abt him.."😲

Before started their journey Gunjan wished that everythhing would be fine or else she will not forget this trip...and yup all what happens next would never allow her to forget this PUNE TRIP...

Frankly guys i also thought Samrat would drop her at her home..and next day she will join him in office...but next part was Totally unexpected..."ITNA BIG PANGAAA"😲

Both were ryt at their own place...Samrat wanted to spend time with her..and she wanted to meet her family...and when he melted by her tears..as he always did...he agreed to take her to her home..but Fact is when Gunjan knew this her family will not allow her to go back at hotel again..then why would she agreed to meet them just for 15 mints...Samrat's anger was obvious at this point...here in one scene..Samrat with Kids..remind me of Samrat and TINKU😆

Samrat behavior and Condition in so big family was not so unexpected..he was stranger there n hez not used to with Family circumstances and environment...everything and every relation is unfamiliar for him...unfortunately Gunjan also didnt know abt this...thats y he was feeling weird...but dinner on terrace was Awesome and Fabulous...😍

after this Dreamy dinner so disaster scenes came...to be honest i was Completely agree with BIJI...apart fromthe fact that we want to see Sajan together everytime...i also agree with BIJI P.O.V.

it was Totally loving. Caring and Responsible family's reaction..that no one can allows their young daughter to stay at Hotel with any young man..that too spend a night ...when there is home present...BIJI's everyword was so true...you have described her protective and scary feelings towards Gunjan very beautifully...yaaa wrong thing was just few words she talked abt Samrat...and Sam is not like those boys...so its obvious to get Samrat angry on her statement..but its okk na..bcoz Biji didnt know him so well.but Gunjan did..and she didn't say anything for him...it made him even more angry...bcoz he also dont know the fact why Gunjan respect and love hr family too much...whatever she loves him but she also cant tolerate anyone talk to her uncle like this as did Samrat...But Whoz this Aryan😲...im telling u guys now i'll not tolerate one More HADDI between Sajan..pehle kam he kya k ab ye Aryan ka rishta b bech me Tapak rha he..i hope Gunjan ko Laaiq hi na ho...😡Overall this whole Scene was Fabulous Marvelous and Fantastic...very very well written...👏👏👏

ok guys rest of comment will post soon...



Hi RiJA !! Finally back with my rest reply...to your longest Comment😊.V R trying to show a slightly changes in SAMRAT's behavior, a gradual one at that. And so, it is these small things that will bring about a change in him. Also that he now realises what GUNJAN likes and what gets her to talk. Hindi songs...n movies R really new things for him... He wants to follow them B'coz,GUNJAN's likes it.

And regarding the official tour, well as SAMRAT does not believe in family and family get together, he never intended to 'drop' GUNJAN off. He would have allowed her to meet them, but he had absolutely no intentions of letting her stay back. He intended to spend some 'quality' time with her.

In an emotionally intense update, we do try to add some light, SaJanish moments like the Dinner scene.

Biji is someone who has seen the world and she knows how innocent and easily trusting GUNJAN is. So, she is never going to allow GUNJAN to go with SAMRAT. Add to that, she does not know how SAMRAT is and also, SAMRAT's behavior is not exactly the kind a middle class family would feel comfortable with.Off course,she is right on her place...She is protective for her... n GUNJAN knows this... She can't take any steps against her family...

For GUNJAN, her family is priority and now, it is difficult for her to choose between her duty and her love. But she is so burdened by the love the NANDA's and their family has given her, that she always will choose the family.

ARYAN...well, what more ??😳 Now,GUNJAN is ready for marriage with him...
Ye 'Haan' kaafi interesting twist laane waali hai...😳 So, wait and watch...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hey S3J...im back with my another comment on part 43-44😊

Mind blowing...when Dejected Samrat was walking towards his car and thinking of Gunjan cheated him. He was mad on her'fuming with anger but when she came n for a moment he completely forgot all his anger to see her'it was sooo sweet scene written very nicely.. but when she said nothing and didn't answer any of his questions...here Samrat's anger was described beautifully... whole scene was Fabulous'👍🏼...Both were ryt at their own place'but Samrat once again hurted her a lot'.by his cruel n harsh words regarding her character n he family'.no matter she loves him but she couldnt tolerate all this anymore'.He knew very well shez not at all like those girls'then y he did say all this to her..even in anger'😲

She was broke down once again with his words..but still she cared him so much..that hand injury n bleeding scene was Awesome'.she forgot all her pain and in a fraction of second when she saw him bleeding'it was the BEST SCENE of Part 43...❤️..Awesomely written guys..❤️

After this their thinking part in their respective rooms was wonderful.. I love Samrat possessiveness towards Gunjan and hez hurt by giving her preference to her Family over Samrat.. bt im sure Once he would know abt her condition he'll surely understand her situation... But in this whole scene I was like' "Itni choti si baat ka itna BIG ISSUE bna dia samrat ne'" see..ek hotel k room me b nyt spend hi karni thi na..to Gunjan Apne ghar me reh jati..Subha Office aajati..is me problem hi kya tha'... BUT they exaggerate it so much'...🤔

Mr and Mrs Nanda scene was Fantastic..thanxfully Mr Nanda took Samrat little side'but yup Mom is Mom'she will not convince so easily..worse thing was when she said Monish se baat Karen Gunjan k proposal ki...n I was Like "HEZ all set n ready to get marry her..so as Rahul TOO..."😉

For a while I again disappointed with Gunjan's decision of stay away from Samrat'bt when Samrat decided to how to handle this situation to settle down everything like before. I felt relax'.But guys u made us SOOO Scary with that Disaster Dream Sequence of Gunjan'seriously I was so tensed while reading that part..and was constantly cursing poor Samrat that y did he come at her home so early morning when she was coming to office'but Thahnxfully it was just Dream'I think it was more Dangerous dream than the previous one'(Woh Monish Gunjan kiss wala)''.

Thanks RiJA for this other detailed comment on the remaining parts.

SAMRAT will be SAMRAT, impulsive n short-tempered. He never thinks when he is angry and ends up hurting GUNJAN. And GUNJAN knows that when he is angry, it is futile trying to explain to him. So she keeps quite, listening to the harsh words he hurls at her.Here,both R right in their own place... SAMRAT was in very angry mood [Due to Biji's words for him] so,he said all harsh words to her...Definitely,she is hurt...

But her heart, which is beating for him is unable to let her relax when it comes to SAMRAT being hurt. That is the moment, she forgets everything and rushes to him. Then, his harsh words mean nothing to her.

SAMRAT is getting possessive about
GUNJAN and he is unable to understand how she could not take his side in front of the family. He can see no reason and rightfully so. He has never seen family bonding ever. He is not able to forget, that what he had planned was not successful.His ego does not let him think so logically, that GUNJAN could meet him at office the next day.

Actually,due to his past...he has some 'Insecurity complex'.Somewhere,he scared to lose her... He wants her attention...He can't take this fact that,He is not her priority...So,this is the not 'small issue' for him n this is the main reason of his anger.

The NANDA's are protective about their adopted daughter and they want 'The BEST' for her. MONiSH has played his games so well that the NANDA's are smitten by him. The day he sends a proposal for GUNJAN, the NANDA's will be an elated lot. And if before that, RAHUL tells his parents of his decision, God alone knows what will be their reaction?? V just hope, they realise that the only person who has a right to make any decision is GUNJAN.

As of now, agreed, it was
GUNJAN's nightmare... But wonder how long for it to be real ?? That situation would be not easy to handle for her...

Rest parts reply...posting soon...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

PART 44

Till Now it was my most Favorite part..becoz Finally I got something that I wanted for sooo longgg'..😳

OH Man gunjan is So lucky to have a Family like Nandas'not only mr and mrs nada only but their own relatives are so nice and lovable..no wonder why does she care abt them so much'Samrat really had to realize that Her Family is just as nice as he consider her'Everyone love Gunjan a lot and never would her feel like an orphan'😳

After this their thinking part in their respective rooms was wonderful.. I love Samrat possessiveness towards Gunjan and hez hurt by giving her preference to her Family over Samrat.. bt im sure Once he would know abt her condition he'll surely understand her situation'. But in this whole scene I was like... "Itni choti si baat ka itna BIG ISSUE bna dia samrat ne'" see..ek hotel k room me b nyt spend hi karni thi na..to Gunjan Apne ghar me reh jati..Subha Office aajati..is me problem hi kya tha'... BUT they exaggerate it so much'.

Mr and Mrs Nanda scene was Fantastic..thanxfully Mr Nanda took Samrat little side'but yup Mom is Mom'she will not convince so easily..worse thing was when she said Monish se baat Karen Gunjan k proposal ki'n I was Like "HEZ all set n ready to get marry her..so as Rahul TOO'."😉

For a while I again disappointed with Gunjan's decision of stay away from Samrat'bt when Samrat decided to how to handle this situation to settle down everything like before. I felt relax'.But guys u made us SOOO Scary with that Disaster Dream Sequence of Gunjan'seriously I was so tensed while reading that part..and was constantly cursing poor Samrat that y did he come at her home so early morning when she was coming to office'but Thahnxfully it was just Dream'I think it was more Dangerous dream than the previous one'(Wo Monish Gunjan kiss wala)'

Starting with Sajan'Samrat eagerness after knowing abt Gunjan's presence in Hotel and Office was worth to read'Haaa once Again his Man Ego urge to made him think like y didn't she call him'he couldn't understand na that how much he had made her hurt by his words'

Poor girl always suffered his mood swings..and never said any word in return'inspite of being thanxful to her that she came to office after what all happened he became angry that shez throwing tantrums and showing him attitude..how could he think like this'😲

Confrontation part in Record Room Was Super Duper Amazing'..Loved it to the Core'from his waiting for her on lunch to his entry in Recording room...Everything was Superbb👏👏

Finally she ejected out all her frustation and hurt feeling infront of him ..Finally...for so long he was blaming her just for nothing...but when she spoke she always made him quiet...😳

Loved her Dialogues her painful lines abt 3rd class larki ki 3rd class family k sath 3rd class dinner ones...OH that was mind blowing...TOO Guddd...in so polite manners she was making him realize his mistake and its effects on her...n when he finally came to know abt his mistake that she was badly hurt by his words...then the MOST WANTED SCENE CAME...

SAJAN's First HUG Finallyyy...first i was like 😲

then 😃😃😃 and then at last i was just like ...😍😍😍

.Finallly...

guys i loved it sooo much...i think i read that particular para nearly 10 times...So cute Adorable and Heart wrenching Sajans Hug Scene Ever...Lovely Part...when everything was settle down...then their again sweet and polite conversation made the update even more beautiful...after hug theri shy feelings were written very nicely..👍🏼

Again naughty Samrat came back in no minutes...😃...That lunch part was Lovely...Gunjan's concern and care for him was worth to watch...he knew this very well thats y made diffrent techniques to convince her...Most Sweetest part was. when Gunjan's fake anger showed her love for him so clearly...he loved it and i also loved it...😳

now its sure they would take their lunch together...but guys Samrat's right hand had got injured na..then how can he eat with it..so plzzz guys now when its clear that they are going to have a lunch together so i was thinking may b Gunjan made him eat with her hands..plzzz guys dont break my dream..plz give us this scene in next part..if it happens..then it would be the most Lovely and memorable Lunch for Sajan and for us too...😳

Overall All parts were Fabulous Fantastic wonderful and Amazing...👏

Thanks for the pm...Continue soon the next part...i hope i didnt miss any part...ryt?????????😕



Hi RiJA !! Back with rest reply...😳.Feeling GR8 that ,U liked this part more then previous parts.

SAMRAT is unaware with GUNJAN's past n her bonding with NANDA's family.They all R so much protective n caring for her.
SAMRAT has to yet know that this family that is being overtly possessive about her, is not her own. He has no idea that she is an orphan. His ego is the crux of all problems. And he is unable to think clearly. And that is why, he forgets that it was his order not to let anyone call him or visit him. And it is this anger and ego that makes him think that it is she who is throwing an attitude at him.

And then, when SAMRAT's anger is at its peak, GUNJAN, in her soft and gentle tone speaks up... no harsh words...no high voice... just simple words that will pierce the heart of the one who truly loves. SAMRAT always wants to justify his anger reaction...but,somewhere he knows that he was wrong...

The hug scene... well, it may surprise U that V intended to 'Edit' that scene as V felt it would not fit in. But on second thoughts, V decided to go ahead with it and are pleasantly surprised to see that our readers have accepted that scene.😊.

Actually,Its not a 'traditional' Love story concept... Here,unspoken words are more important then other things...U can say, true feelings for each other is main essence of this story.

SAMRAT is but a child at heart, innocent... it is the circumstances that have made him so harsh. But, he becomes himself when he is with his Dai Maa...someone who he is comfortable being around and now GUNJAN, another person he is comfortable being around.

First,V were thinking about skip Lunch scene... But,after your comment...V'll surely feature 'Lunch scene' in next part... Thanx for suggestion... 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
PM List :

We are updating the PM list for NEW thread. Please do not hesitate to tell us to 'Remove' or 'Add' your name in the 'List'.😳

There are 2 Lists, one for the 'Regular Updates' and the other for the 'RaJan FB Parts' that, V intend to PM to those readers interested to read them.


*For the
Normal Updates :

aashizin (Aashi),
arzzo (Arzzo),
gunurlove (Rija),
snowwhite28 (Tanu),
MonayaLover96 (Nila),
MoNayaHolicPrag (Pragya),
mukitzz,
Archismita (Smita),
chulbuli94 (Shifa Khan),
HSFA,
MoNaYaRoX,
ammykhan,
358674,
1gunjan7 (Gunjan)
Coolioqueen (Aishi),
Joseph_A (Joseph),
pakpearl (Fauzia),
tanish997 (Tanisha),
CrazyMS (Marie),
--Kinjal--,
ronojoy_ria (Ria),
PrincessBhushi (Bushara),
Mitaly..,
-CreativeSoul- (Tanzeel),
..Amira..,
miriam2,
Mohit_monaya,
hbkumar,
nityah,
JohmySolomonRaj,
lekshmic7 (Lekshmi),
-Antu-_-Aslan- (Antara),
Anjali_12 (Anjali),
monayaMS, saduf,
HealMeForever (Aditi),
Riasa,
fend (Rukma),
..Ekta..,
Shafoo,
--softyy-- (Neefa),
aamirkhanfan,
Swaatii (Swati),
--SweetFarwii--,
sky05,
Shreya30456 (Shreya),
monaya_sajan,
SrkSabaMonaya,
-BurningDesire- (Ayesha),
Kritianya (Kriti),
sukklover (Tama),
SAJANIAN-4ever,
..Mallu..,
sanaayaaa,
Luv_monaya.



*For the
RaJan FB Updates :

arzzo (Arzzo),
MoNayalover96 (Nila),
gunurlove (Rija),

pakpearl (Fauzia),
HSFA (Fatima),
MoNayaHolicPrag (Pragya),
snowwhite28 (Tanu),
Joseph_A (Joseph)

Swaatii (Swati),
ronojoy_ria (Ria),
nityah (Nityah),
CrazyMS (Marie),



*New THREAD is coming wid NEW TEASER parts... will b send the link very soon

Edited by SIZZZLER - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi S3J...Soham Sonia Swati Joseph...Thanks a ton 4 adding my name 2 the New regular list...🤗...and Sorry 4 taking sooo long in posting my comments...I WILL try 2 post my comments on all earlier updates of MBYPH N APHG soonnn...Sorry MY Dear friend SOHAM SWATI SONIA N JOSEPH 4 making u all wait 4 sooo sooo longgg...SORRYYY...

AND ONCE AGAIN THANKS 4 adding my name 2 NEW LIST...and I would love 2 read RAJAN FB parts also ...PLss add my name in rajan fb list also...and Plss send me pm of those parts...and Plss send me link whenever u update UR both FF'sss MBYPH n APHG...CONGRATS 4 the NEW Thread...🤗.Waiting excitedly 4 NEW THREAD of MBYPH...

Love your good friend
Gunjan...
Edited by 1gunjan7 - 13 years ago

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