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Posted: 13 years ago
Swati,thanks for the PM😊 i have started to read it from thread one,i'll comment after reading the whole story😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chulbuli94

Swati,thanks for the PM😊 i have started to read it from thread one,i'll comment after reading the whole story😊




Take your time Shifa. We would love to read your precious thoughts on this FF.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the ups are really good
so it was a dream of gunjan or better say a nightmare
gunjan got really scared by the dream by somehow she made herself understood that it was jsut a mere dream and she have to forget it
after stuggling and making herself ready for the new day she left to meet samrat in his hotel but samrat who strixkly instructed the hotel stufs not to disturb him at any cost they didnt allow gunjan to meet him or neither called him to inform him about gunjan's arrival
and not getting any call from samrat who was already angry with the last night inicent again misunderstood gunjan he came out from his room and while handing over his keys to the hotel receptionist he came to know from them that gunajn came to meet him and she also waited for him but due to his instruction the hotel autority didnt disturbed him
samrat felt bad but his ego didnt allow him to realise his mistake he again blamed gunjan as why she didnt make any call in his cell
samrat went to his office and there he came to know that gunjan went to his factory
hearing this samrat gets really worried as he knew how inncoent gunjan is he goes to meet her in the factory but there when he saw her behaving normally with him
he felt strange but didnt ask her but then he asked her when they were alone in the record room
the anger in samrat's face and tone made gunjan scared but she didnt stood back she replied his and also made him realsied that she got really hurt by his harsh which he spoke to her last night
they both were hurt
now they both are going to have lunch
plz cont soon and pm me




Thank You RiA for your detailed reply.V R really glad that you liked this update.

GUNJAN is scared of the nightmare that she has had when she sees that it is dawn. She has seen the dreams that she has at dawn turn to reality and she is petrified by the mere thought.She knows that going to work is inevitable. and she has made a commitment that she cannot break. So work it is.

Since he has instructed the hotel staff not to disturb him at any time,SAMRAT misses the opportunity to spend some time with GUNJAN. But he is egoistic and he does the obvious...blame GUNJAN.

His heart which now beats for GUNJAN ensures that he worries for her when he finds that she is not at office, but at the factory. But seeing her indifference towards him, he understands that she is hurt. At the store room, in her soft tone, she does make him realise his words have hurt her. But, this brings out the innocent SAMRAT who, somehow manages to convince her for lunch with him.V'll try to continue soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: saduf

beautiful and awesome update



Thanks Saduf.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


Thanks Dear.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sky05

EXCELLENT update.
loved it.



Thanks dear.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snowwhite28

hi S3J

Again a awesome update...

oh no that was a dream of gunjan...it was a googly mujhe pehle hi guess kar lena chahiye tha...i hope this dream come true very soon...

now this is a high time that sajan should confess there love to each other...4th thread shuru hone wala hai still they hadn't confessed...

I felt really bad abt gunjan😭 i was crying while reading when she was talking to her parents it was heart touching😭😭..the way samrat behave with her and her family was not easy to forget..or to forgive...may be samrat is right that she should come forward to support him wen her family members were doubting his intentions ...but still samrat behavior was not right..

may be this is sajan story we always want sajan together...but just forget abt sajan..and imagine this type of situation in real life...its so scary...pyar kya i will start hating this man...and his mood swings...

I loved the answer gunjan gave to samrat atleast he realises his mistake..but future ka kya bharosa...i can't trust "this" samrat...but i do felt bad for him also i know his lonely and loveless childhood is main reason behind this kind of behavior...i really want that sajan should come to know abt each other past..i hope that this will happen soon..

I am worry abt kahi gunjan shaadi ke liye haan na kar de...pata nahi tab kya hoga🤢 kuch aur ho na ho earthquake toh jaroor aayega and laane wala hoga 🤢 <font color="#FF0000">samrat </font>🤢

Talk between Mrs and Mr Nanda was very beautifully written...it was a typical parent talk...i was amazed the way Mr Nanda had recognized Samrat's honesty...though the situation was not that type..

i want to know how long this ff will continue plzz don't misunderstand me i am loving this ff...i just want to know...i think story has just started off ...and more thing pm me the RAJAN past story too really eager to know there story ...Do continue soon..

Thanx for the PM
TANU😊




Thank you TANU for your sweet n detailed reply.

And you hope this dream comes true, but this nothing short of a nightmare for GUNJAN. n that would be very high point of story.😳

This story deals with human emotions and there are more people involved. V have tried to maintain a balance between all characters, giving each the importance they deserve. V R trying to put forth the POV of all the characters involved and so, this delay in SaJan confessing their love for each other. Actually here true feelings is more important then any confession n this is uniqueness of this story... n believe me... that most awaited Confession is very very emotional part of story...

Every time either is realizing the love he/she has for the other, some thing happens and they drift apart. But, next few updates will be SaJan specials as they bond with each other. A unspoken bond... 😳

SAMRAT is someone who does not understand the importance of family. For him, family means a manipulating and scheming group of people at home. That is what he has seen. So he feels, that like GUNJAN is important for him and he will take her side, she should do the same. But for GUNJAN, her family is very important and she will never do anything to hurt them. Never had family bonding, so does not understand the importance... that is SAMRAT.

Agree with you, that as long as this is fiction, it is ok. But to deal with someone like this in real life is not easy.

This SAMRAT is not to be trusted... but love changes everyone for the better... so...who knows, what will happen in the future...GUNJAN will never go against her family and she has also made up her mind to say Yes...wait and watch for that incident to unfold.

Mr. NANDA is a mature person and most importantly, the couple is fully aware of their responsibility for the young girl under their care. Also, for elders to see through the facade is not difficult.


N your last question... about this FF length... Actually,Our initial proposed Updates was 60 but,I don't think V can wind-up this story in next 16 Updates. Really impossible for us... !!

U R right... Now,story just started... I mean a Love story just started... N this story is divided in 2 Parts...

{1.}
Before the marriage n {2.} after the marriage of GUNJAN...

B'coz , her life would be totally change after her 'forced' marriage... 😕.. V'll be try to keep all 1st 'Teaser' scenes in Next Thread.

😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thread 1 & 2

I actually read from part 1 and was unable to comment there. But this FF is so amazing. Superb character sketch, and well balanced updates, with each character getting the space they require. Must add here, that I found some parts of this FF similar to certain scenes from the show IPKKND. And reading the comments realised that the scenes were written here way before we saw them on the show.

Simply beautifully written, the introduction of each character. The building up of the story. No rushing with any scene. The presentation makes it a pleasure to read.

Gunjan's past was written very well. Very touchy. And so very natural for Rahul to not accept her in the family. But the bond that they share now, is so beautiful. Though Rahul's feelings for her have changed, she still considers him her best friend.

Monish's entry was surprising. And the fact that he knows Gunjan even more surprising. So this is how Gunjan's 2nd suitor is... a casanova. he claims that Gunjan has changed him, but wonder, has he really changed.

As for Samrat... and Richa, well business marriage is so obvious for a person like Samrat. Like Gunjan, Samrat's past is very sad too. It is not even imaginable for most of us, the grief that a child endures when he/she lose their parents. But the way this is written here, as a reader, I am able to feel that pain.

SaJan first meet was beautifully written. And when she turns around, could visualize Samrat's expressions. The subsequent SaJan scenes are very well written too. Poor Gunjan, having to bear the brunt of Samrat's anger at the drop of a hat.

The Nanda's want Gunjan to be their daughter-in-law. What is holding them back is their son's choice of his life partner. Gosh, wonder what will happen when they know that.

Monish is playing meticulously planned games to get in the good books of the Nanda's. He is also as shrewd as Samrat.

In all this, no one is really bothered as to what Gunjan wants. not weird at all.

Lovely updates. Will comment on individual updates of this thread later. Please do add me to the PM list of this FF and also APHG.

Thanks.


Edited by monaya4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: HSFA

The update was awesome. I was not expecting it be Gunjan's dream. But Sajan part was awesome especially the hug. Sooo Cute.😍 U always surprise me. Will be waiting for the Rajan part and more updates.



Thanks dear, for liking the update. We do like to surprise our readers with such small special SaJan scenes. Updating after APHG.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolioqueen

Huge update...but feeling gr8 to get back Mjht track again. Thnx 4 the pm.




Thanks dear for liking the update. SaJan😍 and MJHT has become an integral part of our lives na??😳

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