You'll Find Someone Else...[MG] up: part 5

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DASTAK..

@DASTAK..

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi frenz...😊
actually m first time writing a ff...
and that too on maan and geet
hope u love it...😳
n i'll update it further...

here the story in any way is not related to the show...
i'll update it 2 to 3 times a week...
ONLY IF you like it...
so here i go...😳

for PM do hit like on PM LIST post, it'll be easy for me to pm u... And do send me BUDDY REQUEST
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INDEX:
part 1 below
part 2
part 3

part 4

part 5

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Posted: 13 years ago

give us a prologue soon ..

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DASTAK..

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Posted: 13 years ago

so here we go...
Part 1...
Do you remember your 1st day to LKG?? frankly speaking i dont...😛
So lets take a trip to the LKG class of St. Francis Primary School...
m pretty excited to see the class. So, challo lets go inside.
The moment i entered the classroom. I was shocked😲 I did expect this, but not this way. It was like a crying club with all baccha party crying like a crying copatition is being held here. Only one boy with dark brown eyes, a water bottle hanging in his neck, with hair neatly set carrying a bag was moving to and fro, sitting on a horse toy observing everyone in shock. Then his eyes caught something, he got down the toy and walked in that direction. Oops... sorry!!!! Its not something its someone...
There sat a pretty girl with two cute pony tails, almond shaped deep brown eyes crying badly. It was her who began crying 1st followed by all children. her voice was the top most. He stood in front of her and tapped her shoulder to gain some attention, but it was of no use. He again tapped, the girl rudely asked What?????
Mera naam Maan hai, aur tumhara???
The girl stoped crying and loked at maan like he was an alien...
Tumhe hindi nahi aati??
again no reply,
no hindi??? you english??
but again no reply. He was about to take the car besides her and leave, when she softly said.
main Geet, tumhare pass wale ghar main rehati hoon..
main tumhe roj dekhti hoon..
maan sweetly smiled at her
Good. aapna naak saaf karo, wo beh raha hai. Aur roo maat, tu bad girl a kya???
geet nodded her head in negative and rubbed her nose to her uniform sleeve. And gave a broad smile to Maan, while he gave her a piece of his cadbury...

so frnzzz
i kno its a small update..
bt dis is d last time...
next time i promise a long update
if u wish...
if u like and wanna read more hit d like button
n do comment

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

add me

and send me thepm

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Monali

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PRATHYUSHA

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome and interesting story ...do continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

sounds interesting ...add me in

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats !!!!!!!!! 4 d first one ...

awesome ... superb ... cute ... sweet ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...

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Aaksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

this be a gr8 ff

count me in

can we get pm's ?

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DASTAK..

@DASTAK..

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank you every one...😊
for reading d ff n commenting on it...
as m a student u can understand i'll need some time to update...😔
bt will pakka update in 2 3 days...😊
ur likes and comments mean lots to me...

once again

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