You'll Find Someone Else...[MG] up: part 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess.rocks

this be a gr8 ff

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sure why not??????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg such a cute kid
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Man 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.i lovd ur first three 2 four lines...Crying competition😲🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Thanks for d gud laugh...& plz continue with such funny & cute beginnings...I lovd ur style of narrating the story...plz keep narrating the story...like in the start...PLZZZ😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you everyone for your support...
here comes next part..
hope you love it
n plzzz
do hit the like buttone if you like
and comments must...
once again thank you everyone...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interseting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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here comes some additional characters
maan's mom: avantika
geet's mom: rano
geet's dad: Veerpratap i.e veer
so njoy...

Part 2..

Continued from part1'

In the later half of the day, it was children's "Play Time". They all were taken to a big play room which was filled with different toys. Walls painted with different cartoons. Here a picture of humty dumty falling, while there a picture of insi vinsi spider climbing the wall. It was amazing.😳 All children ran to grab their favorite toys. Some cried as the other child took his favorite toy and is'nt giving😭, some got involved in dhishum dhishum, while others drifted in their own world with their toys.

Maan had a small maruti zen, which he pushed everywhere as if having a long adventures drive. Creating his own roads Maan came across Geet who was busy playing alone with a teddy and a doll.

Bhhrrr''. Bhhrrr''

Pip Pip' Pip Pip'

Giving a look to him Geet again continued her playing.

Pip Pip'.. Pip Pip' sarak na.

Nahi tu pichese ja

Q??

Ja na'

Getting curious about what geet is playing he sat besides her

kya chalra??????

Wo aaj mere [showing her doll] bubbly ki [pointing at teddy] bunty ke saath shadi a' tu aayega????

Haan, Fir bunty mera.

nahi'.

agar tu mujhe bunty degi to main tere bubbly ko gaadi main bitha ke bhur le jaunga'

[here bhur means bahar. Small kids usually use the word bhur..]

Sacchi??? To thik a'

After playing for some time maan asked

tu mere shaddi main aayegi??

kiske saath a teri shaddi??

Maan proudly declared

Jab main bada ho jaunga na, tab main meri mummy ke saath shadi karunga.

Aaisa Q?

Kal maine papa se pucha unhone shadi ki? Papa ne kaha "haan ki" maine pucha kisse ki? To unhone kaha "meri mummy se" unhone to ghar ke ghar hi chala liya to main bhi bada hoke mummy se shadi karunga.

Aacha!! Khane main kya kya hoga??

Ice cream, chocolate, kakdi [cucumber], rasmalai aur maggi.

To main tere shaddi main pakka aaungi. Wo bhi mera favorite pink frock pehenke. Abhi ja mere bubbly ko bhur leke ja.

Maan made the doll sit on the roof of the car and continued with his drive, while Geet waited for him to return.

As the school ended and good bye prayer got over, children were taken towards the gate. Seeing their parents waiting, all the children screamed and ran towards their parents who were waiting to hug their child after his/her first day of school. All the children went on with their day's history.

Maan introduced Geet to avantika who was standing with Rano. Avantika picked geet and planted a kiss on her cheeks. Seeing this maan pulled the end of avantika's pallu and ordered her to keep geet down and pick him up. Avantika: Maan, bad manners. Avantika continued her talk with geet. Seeing his plight Rano lifted maan and tried speaking to him but his all attention was on his mummy and Geet.

In evening Veer after coming home went to his baby princess, who was busy watching Dexter's laboratory. Seeing her daddy dear she ran in his arms and gave him a bear hug.

Meri bacchi'

Papa main badi hoke aapse shadi karungi.

Aacha?? Q??

Wo Maan bhi aapne mummy se shadi karne wala a, aur khane main Ice cream, kakdi, rasmalai, chocolate aur maggi rakhne wala a. Hum bhi rakhenge na?? aur hum jalebi bhi rakhenge?? Hai na??

Veer laughed at his daughter

Par tab tak to main budha ho jaunga

Chalega. Main aapse hi shaddi karungi bas.

On which Rano teasingly commented

Kya baat hai?? To meri saut, mere ghar, main mere sath hi rehati hai?? Mujhe to pata hi nahi tha..

Which geet didn't understood a bit so continued with her cartoon sitting in daddy's lap, while rano and veer together admired their princess.

Days passed and maan and geet got familiar to each other. They were always seen together. One morning as usual the class was unsettled, each one busy doing something and as usual exception was our sweetheart Maan with red swollen eyes, balloon face and traces of dried tears on chubby cheeks he was giving murderous looks to his desk. Geet came and sat next to him.

Hi'.

She wished while digging for something in her bag. Getting no response she turned towards him. Surprised to see him like this she moved closer just an inch away from his face

hhooo''.. Maan??? Tu roya?? Tuze bhi rona aata a?? fir uss din tu Q nahi roya jab sab roo rahe the?? Tuze pata a miss mumma se bol rahi thi ki uss din meri aawaj sabse badi thi.

Proud ness was written on every cell of her face.

Roo mat, tu bad boy a kya?

Maan instantly nodded his head in negative. geet again started digging in her bag.

Tu Q roya??

Wo main roj ki tarha tub main soo raha tha, toh mummy ne mara.

Tears again made their way down his cheeks. Geet's head quickly sprung up from her bag like a spring, with excited and twinkling eyes she looked at maan

Tu bhi tub main sota a?? muze laga uske liye sirf main maar khati hoon'

Maan's all sorrows, hurt, anger vanished in thin air. Wiping his tears both had a great laugh. While geet atlast found her 2 clair which she shared with maan.

C.S.Lewis said it right

"Friendship is born the moment one person says to another : What! You too? I thought I was the only one'"


hey frnzz...

really hope you ppl like it..

Special thanx to my dear frnd gau..

n every1 do hit likes and comment..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
nice start
nice parts
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
so nyc yaar
i love it

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