SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

Hey... i read both ur updates... both were as usual good..

so now another page written... liked the sharing of her life incidences... such small incidences are also so important in our lives & sharing it with someone makes even more memorable... specially if he is your life partner... loved the effort Maan put in to bring in the milk & cookies indirectly telling her that he is waiting to sahre & know about her life as she is doing the same with Nakul... Good that Maan knows what has Geet being doing in the house for him & his needs..

Loved Nakul's outburst... Maan rewarded him with a weeklong leave... though for his own reasons too... but liked how Nakul replied...

loved both updates... continue soon... pls pm me ur updates... thanks :)

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Loved both the updates...totally loved them!

Maan was angry at her constant denial and also thought that Geet was doing things for him because she wanted his help.

Nakul's outburst was funny and am glad he spoke what he did. These two needed something to propel them to take a step towards the other.
Also glad Maan's touch theory was put into action.

Geet too played her part and shared another one of her memories...and that was really very imaginative. I'm gonna try it...lolz.

The entire bedroom part was too good and things are looking a bit brighter and better...am completely enjoying this. Do continue soon.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

Part 10 Preview: It's not the images that move on the screen and at times not the words that make this song, but close your eyes when the female singer lends her voice to the tune and tell me what you feel... that is what I want to write about.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D8z97e9da64[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Beautiful song Hasini.
Your choice of songs is amazing as always.
I can feel the free spirited Geet.
Geet without the guilt conscience may be

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Shalini

@shalini01

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

this was awesome. especially the endng. do continue soon.

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

What can I say I am addicted to your work.

Part 9 written so beautifully and Nakul making me a stand was so adorable.

Hum chup hai ke dil sunn ra hai.

Yet again, I look forward to part 10 or should I seriously be greedy and ask for more? I will let you decide on that.

Keep going girl and get someone to give you a big hug from me.

👏

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Damn that light... for once in life I have a problem with the electricity board. Why did they fix it? 😡

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

Electricity aayii, to kyun ? Timing kamal ka hain !

When's the update coming ?? We want more !!

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#319

awesome updt
just luvd it
ha ha poor nakul had bcum their jhoota khabri lolzz
awww luvd how msk woke up geet & asked her to eat
aww geet has so much of belief in her babaji true devotee
poor msk was hving a gud tym wid his wife when dis kabab me haddi lights had to cum on
thnk god channi left them alone 4 sumtym atleast
cont soon!