SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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SiniHanda

@SiniHanda

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Posted: 13 years ago

#541

Sigh. This is sheer poetry!

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#542

Simple awesome storyline..
I am in love with this story again and again. I find it very very simple and sweet love story.
Yes there are many FF based on such love story but there are lot difference they way u plot it.
You give a different dimension to whole story thou the base is still the same.
I guess that's the reason many got hooked to you FF.
I really loved the last part. Maan coming home finding emptiness. Relishing each memory that reminds Geet around the house. And the best part was when he realize that his bed is just too huge for a single person. Geet arrival was expected but the effort she took was
Loved the way Geet made her confession. And at last they way she opened up to him. Maan was very firm in making Geet confess her real feeling towards him. Yes she successfully made him feel what she felt when he first saw him. It was well described.
And their togetherness was slow and sensuous... The timing part was a great idea.
Keep up the great writing Hasini...
Two things that made me hooked with this story was Diary and Bourbon biscuit which are my favorite...