SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: -nirvana-
The music can surely play mind games when you least expect it, had she heard the same songs when he was not her life would not have made any difference, but now they are touching her in unknown hidden places...excellent choice of songs!

It is truly time to face the reality and accept her deep dark desires for him, it gives me shivers and leaves me with wild imagination to think how these two will become one...;)

What happen to the eggs, did they burn...;)

Oh! That's the point I wanted to make too. Ah! Common the songs are all your fav so need I ask.

These two coming together...I'm giving my evil grin now.😃

Oh! The eggs...he hadn"t even started with it. He is smart that way, escaping his own cooking.😆

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

This guy is one smart fellow...he picked up all the available opportunities and is making the most of them...i bet he'll stay home all these 7 days..

Loved it that Geet took the initiatives in the last update while Maan took it this time around - they'll move closer much faster this way😊

So is Geet back to her own room? It didnt look like this when the night started !! Geet is pretty clever - acting as if she isnt at all involved in any housework - but well, Maan is one notch up...😃

Loved the song sequence - the actions and the reactions - you put in all my fav ones 😃

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Parisa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

Olalla
This was Awesome poor geet she iws in such a mess lolz
loved it...<3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

loved it! If this is just breakfast, then the anticipation of him coming home in the evening after work is just going to kill her. I liked the fact that she put up a fight to make him share in the housework. She wanted to do it all when he was not there and unaware of her actions but now forcing him to do his share is so perfect for this couple!This update reminded me of my childhood memories of antakshari in a very large joint family where songs were picked to give a hint of what was going on with couples. The love songs were obvious, the fighting songs were always the ones which we laughed at the most. Always gave a hint who was going to spend the night on the living room couch.Thanks for the update. For future reference, did any one thing say "Open Sesame" to you?

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

part 10
oh too good dear...
good going FM stations...
cont soon...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

hasini, i'am just reserving my comment, i'am not feeling well & i will get well & comment...

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

Really Hasini, I just cant have enough of that dark air thick with rain and tension , and their ever so sensitive radars picking on the smallest shift around them.. and those drunk sensuous songs.. its almost a languid pacing which lets us linger in your imagination , rife with sensations..

super update, Do continue soon !

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

awesome updt
just luvd it
aww d song sequences were awesome maan teasing & tormenting poor geet
so geet connecting d last nights moments to d songs
aww d intimate moments r so deeply etched in her life
yep maan ri8 question at such vulnerable moment of geet
geet has to face d reality now as maan had done
cont soon!

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krati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

awesome update... nakul answering him ws too good... nd cheery on the top was fm scene...

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#340

Superb songs Hasini.
And they all favored Maan getting the desired effect on Geet.
Poor Geet couldnt control her desires any more with such seductive songs playing.
I love the way Maan is trying to get her let go of whatever is holding her back.
The last lines as usual were the best and beautiful.
But i dont think it will be that easy for Geet to get out of her guilt.
Me too waiting to see how hey are going to get together
Waiting for the next part.

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