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richiiiii

@richiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

that was one hell of a update hasini

they sexual tension was palpable...

the building blocks of their relationship...love, trust, faith, emotional security, physical needs..everything is at its nascent stage...and am excited to see how they will cement it together to build marriage

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

part 9
oh i love that song...
apt choice...
nice part dear...
cont soon...

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640638

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Loved the update.Nakul's outburst was the catalyst for Maan, like Channi was for Geet. I liked the "broken jack in the box" for Nakul. All evidence examined and case resolved for Maan. I generally look at clouds and see shapes of animals as does everyone else, my imaginative friend Hasini gets Babaji's messages in lightining! Each page of her life is being opened by her for him, whereas she goes around collecting his info from Nakul. Aaah, Reserved men are so intriguing. Well better than the mile a minute type.Hasini, since I probably have a few days before you update again, I will savor it and keep adding to the comment. This is first impression. Needless to say loved it, now will wait patiently.

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

o how I love the beautifully intricate detailing in your stories.. I could almost feel the chill in the wind with the howling rains outside, and the contrast of the darkened house... I used to love it , when lights went out late in the evening or at night specially in the rainy season..

There used to be a haunting sense of romance in the air.. walls would always seem to have grown softer ,and moved back a little to accommodate the tales of the flickering candles...

Oh I loved loved loved this update ! and the absent gestures he makes to get the water out of his hair, while talking to Nakul..

their stilted conversations, each word weighed down by those that are unspoken.. the childlike hope with which she waits for his little gestures to accept and encourage their progress.. its going terrific between these two!

You know, there's even something romantic about how the lights suddenly come back, and there's that moments disappointment , but you see it conjunction to the rain pelting outside and it winds some new magic again.. as if the lights that came breathed a cool sigh of life from the outside ,in.

hmm.. i m rambling.. ;)

Loved it! continue soon !

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

Loved the update..

Nakul's burst was too good.. Now Maan knows and I liked both are not running away from each other anymore..

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Hey honey bun😳😆,

Things have been crazy this week and I know there's two updates waiting for me to be read. Promise will do it tomorrow when I can think rationally again

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640638

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Awesome update... Now wat to say abt their moment u see ... Well i think I m blushing nd grining like a fool...lol... Its really difficult to understand somethings when u r inexprienced...lol...

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

I love and adore Nakul 😃
He did the right thing at the right time .
I suppose Maan is very clear with his mission right now.
He got her milk and cookie and there she was sharing one more page of her life.
But something has to be done with her guilt which keeps interrupting
their sweet moments.
I am sure Maan the advocate will pretty son find a solution for it.
I always read the last lines first .
They are so beautifully written Hasini.
You are the best
Continue soon.

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Wela

@Wela

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

I am in love with both now...ah the nuances..intricacies of their character, outlandishness included...looks like the tension is going to take them to the next level soon...so glad Channi is in town...

More please...

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