SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

😉 Well I look forward to reading part 9, as for the alien language you certainly made 😆, ehsi baat nay hai.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Don't you think this is the perfect theme song for 'Dear Diary...'?
It even shows the girl head over heels for Jimmy...sort of like our Geet.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PNQNUQ6Spog[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thanks surya for your lovely comment.

Misunderstanding...not so much, I would say, as it is stubbornness to talk. Well, both are present in certain degrees, but the unwillingness to express their honest sentiments trumps all. Would you agree?

You are right about the next part :)

yuppp i agree more than misunderstanding it is the the lack of communication, their stubbornness to talk to each other...yes i'am sure with one push, one step both will open up to each other...& i'am waiting for their honest sentiments to win over all their stubbornness...it would be just awesome..when they open up & talk...it will be beautiful..& i'am waiting for that beautiful moment..😍😍😍😍😍😍😍& my guess is right...that's greattt...woahhh, now i'am eager to read the next part...

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: 6thElement
Don't you think this is the perfect theme song for 'Dear Diary...'?
It even shows the girl head over heels for Jimmy...sort of like our Geet.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PNQNUQ6Spog[/YOUTUBE]

😳😳😳i love this song...it seems just so soulful..full of meaning...yes the song kind off fits in with Dear Diary..it is a very apt theme song for this ff...very nice...😳😳😳

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Hima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: 6thElement
Don't you think this is the perfect theme song for 'Dear Diary...'?
It even shows the girl head over heels for Jimmy...sort of like our Geet.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PNQNUQ6Spog[/YOUTUBE]

Beautiful song Hasini
Even they are sharing some cookie or cake or whatever the girl has 😃

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seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Hey sweety do PM this SS Dear Diary and loved the update.continue soon.

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568124

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: seemamary
Hey sweety do PM this SS Dear Diary and loved the update.continue soon.

Thank you :)

Ah! girl...my one vice in IF 😆: PM ing...

Either ways, part 9 is up. Let me know how you liked it.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hasini lovely update..i'am seriously in love with this fanfic of your's...it has literally got me hooked & addicted to it...you write so well dear...the way you express emotions, the way the feeling are portrayed it is very beautiful...i feel you portray feelings, emotions in a very artistic way...i loved nakul's out burst...haha..poor him...he is so frustrated that he is not getting to do any work, geet is competing with him & moreover for the two stubborn heads, he has to keep lying... this scene cracked me up... but the good thing is that, maan knows that it is geet who has been taking care of him & his home, from the time she has entered the house... & maan realizes that what he had told to geet that she need not do things for him in return for his help, he knows he was not right there... good to know this...then maan giving nakul a week long vacation.. i'am sensing that this week when maan, geet will have privacy will be their week, to break their respective silences & accept each other fully...then maan seeing geet lying on his bed...the touch thing you wrote, all were just too wonderful...then geet getting up, realization hitting her, but she does not move away or run away from there yet again..she stays back, lies down on the bed...this shows somewhere that geet has decided to stop running away from what she truly desires, because of the underlying guilt...then i liked how they both shared the simple dinner of khichidi, milk & cookies. the silence was soothing...geet sharing her childhood memory with maan.. then their light intimate moment..it was just so beautiful..i mean it was literally wowww...i enjoyed reading the part thoroughly...fantastic job...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏hasini please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 13 years ago