MG FF:Mystery of CryingCastle Epilogue 2/11

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Hi guys, I am back with my new FF. I know it has been long but I was too busy to either write or spend much time on IF. 🤢 Ok, again a FF on Maaneet but this time there is more mystery. I am not sure myself how you all will like this but please bare with me. I cannot reveal everything at the start. 😉
I am giving you a prolouge right now to give you an idea but not too much. Plus, just like Khurana Mystery, I have compelted the FF so that means regular upates... PLZ leave comments and press like button, them more the better because dependin on the response, I will update sooner.😳



Intro:
The castle of Gayatrinagar is abandoned for many years and so is the little village around it. Nobody in his right mind gets even close but things change when the Italian girl, Annie Walkers, gets a call. According to the last owner of the castle, she is the sole inheritor. Not sure what to think about it, Annie decides to accept the inheritance and comes to India. Unexpected events follow and a long forgotten story is whirrled up that has more to it than it catches the eye.
Read on to find out how the story of one girl changes the life of so many...

Index:


Prologue: See below

Chapter 1: An unexpected Phone call

Chapter 2: Engagement

Chapter 3: Not so good news

Chapter 4: Old Faces

Chapter 5: Concern

Chapter 6: The new Guest

Chapter 7: Pinky

Chapter 8: Invitation

Chapter 9: Dulhan Dhoond (in same post as Chapter 8)

Chapter 10: Gone

Chapter 11: Past Catching Up

Chapter 12: Dead

Chapter 13: Confrontation

Chapter 14: Very Close

Chapter 15: Mystery Solved

Chapter 16: Fear

Chapter 17: Ammy (in same post as Chapter 16)

Chapter 18: Ducky

Chapter 19: Gayatrinagar

Chapter 20: For a second time

Chapter 21: Ghosts

Chapter 22: Kidnapped

Chapter 23: Crying Castle

Chapter 24 Part 1: Sharmila - Part 1

Chapter 24 Part 2: Sharmila - Part 2

Chapter 25: The Night of the Prom

Chapter 26: The last Battle

Epilogue: (in the above post !!!)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Characters:
I will update this post as I will introduce the charcters in the story so that I don't spoil the surprise before hand!
Characters will come in order of appearance and only if they are important...



Anvesha Walkers
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Mr Talwar
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Maan Singh Khurana
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Veer Singh Khurana
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Nitya Vardan
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Naintara Vardan
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Dev Singh Khurana
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Vicky Singh Khurana
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sorry but Armaan keeps disappearing as soon as I try to post his pic...poor guy is too shy. But you all know how he looks, don't you!!!
Armaan Malik
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Aditya Kapoor
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Savitry Devi - Dadi
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Pinky Manchanda
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Arjun Singhania & Arohi Sharma
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Caretaker
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Rajeshwari Singhania
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Geet Singhania
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Sheilja Singh Khurana
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Yuvraj Singh Khurana
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Amro Manchanda
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Mohan Manchanda
same as in show (i.e. Pinky's dad)
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Brij Handa
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Preeti Singh
here I really imagined Mandira bedi as preeti from DDLJ but no matter how much I tried, I couldn't get a pic of her as preeti.
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Tejawar Singh
I just don't know whom to imagine in this role so plz bear with me till I get a suitable pic
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Gayatri Devi - Ranimaa
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Gayatri (1st daughter)
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Indira (2nd daughter)
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Sharmila (3rd daughter)



Edited by Mina420 - 13 years ago
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Prologue:

It was nighttime and complete darkness engulfed Gayatrinagar. Even the moon was hiding behind the clouds, afraid to shine some light onto this cursed patch of earth. He rather left this work to the sun.

A sound broke the silence and made the few animals, brave enough to come close to the village, pay close attention.

"Oye guys, hurry up." The boy spoke in a whisper but in the silence around him the others could here him clearly.

"Why Mahesh, afraid that the ghost will eat you?" Ram laughed his usual mean laugh but Mahesh didn't concern himself with the comment. He was afraid alright, he couldn't deny it any longer. The mere thought of having to come here at night was sending shivers down his spine.

Arun and Asha climed down the jeep and started to remove the backpacks from the car.

"Ok, as discussed I will go in with Arun and Mahesh is to hold the light for us. Asha, you stay in the jeep and wait for us to come out. Keep your phone ready just in case." Asha nodded bravely and sat down behind the stairing wheel. She was the best driver amongst her friends and hence had taken up the job to drive them. She pluged in her headphones and listened to some music to keep her entertained till the boys were back.

Meanwhile, Ram and Arun walked through the castle. The were mezmarized by the beauty and started filming their way.

"Right now, I am just taking the video and we will add the comments afterwards. I don't want to miss the natural sounds of the castle" Ram and Mahesh nodded and they walked along. Paintings adored the walls and Arun filmed them all. In his opinion, either the artist had had a great talent or the women living in this castle a long time back were really very beautiful. The finally came to the staircase. The stairs started at the bottom and split halfway through to the left and right side.

"Which way shall we go?" Mahesh asked.

"Hmm, I think if we go right, we will end up facing the side we came from. That means we will be able to see Asha from on of the windows."

"Then let us go there. We can tell her that all is well." They all agreed and started to walk up.

"Guys, don't you feel it is very quiet now?" Mahesh held the torch in his hand very tightly nad kept looking back.

"It is supposed to be quiet, you idiot." Ram shook his head and Arun concentrated on the filming. He thought about Mahesh's words after some time.

"Yeah, even the natural sounds of the castle can't be heard up here. I think we should mention this in the video later on. The architecture of this castle is amazing. I am sure this wasn't planned in but in this way, there is absolute peace and quiet up here." They entered a room and looked around. The furniture was covered with white cloths but still a fair amount of dust had covered the place. The boys covered their noses and opened a window.

"Asha" Ram yelled but he wasn't loud enough.

"I bet she has her headphones on, I'll give her a ring." Before Ram could dial Asha's number, she looked up and spotted the boys. She gestured if all was well up there and the boys replied with thumbs up. Then Arun showed her that they were going along the corridor to the other side and then will come down. Asha nodded and observed them going back in. She adjusted herself in her seat again and was putting her headphones back on when she happened to look into the rear mirror. She looked closer and her eyes widened. She spun around and supressed a scream. Ram, Mahesh and Arun were walking along the corridor, which had airy windows closely next to each other. She saw them walking from left to right but what scared her so much was the fourth person at a distance behind them. She could only make out a shadow but this was for sure not the fragment of her imagination. Without wasting a second, she dialed Ram's number but the ring didn't go through. The same happened when she called Arun and Mahesh. As the last resort, she jumped out of the jeep and ran towards the castle. A few steps before she entered, the doors shut on her face with a loud bang, imprisoning her friends inside. No matter how much she shook the doors, they just didn't budge.

"Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god" Asha didn't know what to say and walked backwards, holding her head with her hands. She ran left and right in order to find another way in but in this darkness, she couldn't see anything. Asha ran back to the jeep and as a last resort, turned the ignition and shone bright light towards the castle. She horned loudly in order to get the attention of her friends. She stopped after some time and perked up her ears. Did she just hear someone scream? No, it was just her fear that made her think like this.

She had no time ot waste and drove towards the nearest houses in order to get help. She didn't know what she had seen or what was going on inside but she had the strong feeling, that they had meddled in matters that they should have left in peace.

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Please Check out - I can't show it directly

Bhool Bhulaiya in Lucknow - this might give you an idea of the windows I am talking about in the prologue.

Edited by Mina420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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prologue is very interesting...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh Dear...thank you so much...I loved your first FF immensely and can't wait for the enxt installment
I love your mysteries and depth of characters...so bring it on baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the Pm
Prologue is interesting continue soon will b waiting
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new FF dear...
prologue
well i got quite scared by the time i finished the prologue...
and the corridor was cherry on top...
cont soon dear and thanks for the pm...
add me to the pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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glad to see you back!:)
sounds interesting!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum prologue
waiting 4 part 1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!!1 4 d new ff ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

interesting ... liked it ...

continue soon ...

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