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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpvg

Prologue:

You wont believe, even before reading the Prologue I started reading the story. Only after completing the whole story I noticed the Prologue... Ha Ha... Silly me

The Prologue was fabulous. I liked the last line of the Prologue "that they had meddled in matters that they should have left in peace." But still I wonder why Asha screamed??? What she saw in that rear glass??? And wasn't her screams heard by the other 3 boys.

I would have been like biting nails if I had read this first. But as I read the whole story I got that this was the incident you have mentioned in the later parts. But I have to say it was fabulous... Awesome & Mind blowing... I liked the 4th image following the guys... wow...



Acutally, Asha SUPRESSED a scream so she wanted to but did not actually scream which is why noone heard her... she saw the shadow following her friends and that is what scared her so much because she knew that they were only supposed to be 3 not 4 in the castle...
Glad you liked the picture, I came across it and thought it fitted my FF so well...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpvg

Part ' 1 ' An Unexpected Phone Call

In the first part I was confused actually. I wonder why a Italian girl coming in the picture of Maaneet. And then I thought of continuing my reading process. I found fishy when I in that part.

No. 1 is that, Why should Raj the previous owner have to transfer the property to Annie when he have kids of his siblings, I mean Brij & Pinky. Why is that he have to hand over the property to his Grand niece Annie.

No. 2 is that why the lawyer wasnt happy with Annie's decision to keep the castle to herself. Was he also involved in those tej group? And how was he sure that he can sell off the property that people knew haunted so easily?

I guess I can get answer for these.



For the 1st question: As you know, Brij (and Pinky) are Rano's children and her mother did not want her or her family to have anything to do with the castle as they still remember what happened to Suman...I will copy paste the part where Ferri explains it:

"Brij knew nothing about his sister because she was given away shortly after her birth. No one apart from Mr and Mrs Manchanda and her real mother knew. This leads to the conclusion that Brij and Annie are the only inheritor of this land in the eyes of the rest of the world. Annie was an easy target as she was not aware of being connected to India in such a way."

So, Tejeshwar wanted the castle for himself because he knew that there were riches in the castle (rumors from earlier time, you see) and the land was quite valuable. So he had to get rid of every possible inheritor that could get the castle...
Since they all only knw about Brij and Annie, they wanted to get rid of Annie so that Brij could marry Preeti and she would get the castle for her father...

Coming to your 2nd question: Yes, Talwar the lawyer was involved with Tej. He had gotten orderes to get the signature from Annie that she is not interested in the castle. The reason this had to be done was that if Brij was to die, the next of kin would be searched for. And this is Annie, not Preeti.
So, to make sure that Annie is no hindrence, she was told that she was the inheritor of hte castle. What they did not plan was that Annie would keep the castle...

"It was because of your decision to stay back. You see, for a foreigner like you it might be an adventure to live in a haunted castel. An indian would never imagine that you would give up all luxery you had to move to an unknown country and then into a place so old and deserted. They had thought you would easily comply to sell the house and be gone."

About selling the castle...many knew about the history of the place but not everyone. And even if they knew, they did not believe it to be haunted. A good example if Maan's father who wanted to buy the land...

I hope this clarifies your issues... keep posting for further inquiries, I'll be glad to reply...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpvg

Part ' 4 Old Faces

I really loved the chemistry of Arjun, Raj & Geet. They were so cute. Hope I had a brother like him. I felt sorry for Geet. She was so emotional. She was cute. I felt sad too.

The tension in KC' As I don't know hindi I cant understand what is the meaning of this dialogue. ""Maan sir, yeh bangla to bhoot mahal hain. Kya aap sach mein yaha kaam karenge?" Pinky spoke up. She purposely voiced her concern in Hindi, since Annie only knew English.

Then your concept of stairs split into two I have the photo of that too' see


The convo between Sasha & Pinky was about the persons you mentioned in Prologue na. I loved it. Cute Pinky as always' Arjun's reply when Maan said he should take care of his employees were great. I was wondering what really happened between these two. Was it really a very big issue that two gr8 frnds are like a big enemies.



"Maan sir, yeh bangla to bhoot mahal hain. Kya aap sach mein yaha kaam karenge?" - This means: "Maan sir, this is a haunted castle. Will you really work here?" Sorry, I thought I had translated every hindi dialogue but seems I missed this one out...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Mina420: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice & interesting FF
& it had lots of suspense love it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow yaar kya story tha i so missed it real time i mean i just dont have words to describe it well done girl
do come with more mg ff

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Posted: 11 years ago
splendid..simply awesome...👏👏👏
where have you gone now days???I am expecting more stories from you...😊
i have just read tailor made,HP express and khurana mystery back to back...
and u know what..I am recent member in your fan list...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flowing_river

splendid..simply awesome...👏👏👏

where have you gone now days???I am expecting more stories from you...😊
i have just read tailor made,HP express and khurana mystery back to back...
and u know what..I am recent member in your fan list...😳



thank you dear,
I am glad you like my work and are a fan now 😳. I am already working on a few stories. I just need enough time and patience to finish them. Rest assured, I will pm you as soon as I start my new story.
Thank you for your encouraging words...
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for the missing character pics... IF makes them disappear sometimes...

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