::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Nice ending 😳 But does Pia remain human or does she turn into a vampire? Loved the part where u united Pranay with Maithali. Both are fiery. Best part was peace getting restored between the 2 warring supernatural clans.

Well Maithali has waited forever like ABHAY so its only fair she gets a guy she always wanted who is her equal

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: matwamango
Its a Boy and lets just say even this Child is strong willed but its more soft hearted than his elder siblings. I was a little tired so i missed this segment out I mean i hooked the others up with magical beings who could i have left for this child?

Left this one for me. I mean if Pranay can date 200 year old Metz I am just 22 And a child of Abhay is as good as himself.😉

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

wow superb & perfect ending.awesome update.wow pia demanding 4 another child so cute.loved this update

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minibsp2007

@minibsp2007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

awesome OS👏

I loved your writings and these short sweet os

I read all three parts together they all were very nice and happy family ending was super, pranay with maithaili was something unexpected

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Part-2

Whoa!

Father and son engaged in a fight unto death...

Only no one will ever truly be able to kill a pure soul like Abhay...

Part-3

A sad -happy end...

Glad that Jeh so the light finally but unfortunately at the cost of his life...

Pranay and Metz...match made in heaven I dare say😆

Jannat is a hell broken loose...

AbhiYa are well AbhiYa

Edited by Eowyn - 13 years ago

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cuteteddy

@cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

awesome part dear n m really sorry for the late comment .look, i visited after 2 days to IF n i saw ur pm n thanks for that .

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

whoa nice update, pranay forund metz that diffrent yaar but good one

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Wow Ayesha! This was AMAZING!!

Firstly I love the title that you have given to the OS -- Its very different and eye catchy! :)

The ending was so sweet and cute -- Happy Family together. I feel sorry for Jeh he did see light but after losing his life (I hope show mein he sees sense soon) -- Pranay and Metz -- that shocked me -- Wasnt expecting that at the least!

LOVE :)

Edited by @nup@m@ - 13 years ago

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: @nup@m@
Wow Ayesha! This was AMAZING!!

Firstly I love the title that you have given to the OS -- Its very different and eye catchy! :)

The ending was so sweet and cute -- Happy Family together. I feel sorry for Jeh he did see light but after losing his life (I hope show mein he sees sense soon) -- Pranay and Metz -- that shocked me -- Wasnt expecting that at the least!

LOVE :)

Ananya i like to shock my readers This is why i pair them up so randomly. When U think about it Pranay and Maithali are made 4 each other just like Abhay and Pia are made for each other.

I prefer happy endings than sad ones

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Part-2
Whoa!
Father and son engaged in a fight unto death...

Only no one will ever truly be able to kill a pure soul like Abhay...

Part-3

A sad -happy end...

Glad that Jeh so the light finally but unfortunately at the cost of his life...

Pranay and Metz...match made in heaven I dare say😆

Jannat is a hell broken loose...

AbhiYa are well AbhiYa