::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Aysha...
Love u so much for this installment

ur the best!! Its the perfect ending. JanNay are too good. I love them so much. Naughty kids.. Just like their Dad

I was feeling numb with worry😆

But i guess after all the fights i have shown a little normalcy is cool

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Neytiri
And dey live happily evr after...beautiful endng aysha...lvd it...

COOL!!!!!!!!!! This is how i prefer my endings

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: prerna26
Superb Update!!!👏

Pia's faith in Abhay is unshakeable...Even after knowing the truth that Abhay was Pranay's father, she had full faith in him that he can't do anything wrong.😃True love is so powerful that it can overcome any obstacle!! They are reason for each other's existence.😍The ending was just Pefect! Finally the Raichand Family is complete. Pranay found his Perfect match in Maithali, Alina found her Soulmate in some Professor and Jannat found warlock for herself ! You are truly amazing...👍🏼Loved the whole concept and the end too!⭐️

When i started this Shot its very dark but like i said before i was planning on adding this to my FF A TWISTED LOVE but i am a little fed up with drama and thought as a OS this would be better.

Drama toh meri forte hai

I wanted to give all my faves somebody to lobe because we all have someone for us right?

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
What was the third child u never told us. But as usual brilliant update.

Its a Boy and lets just say even this Child is strong willed but its more soft hearted than his elder siblings. I was a little tired so i missed this segment out Daydream

I mean i hooked the others up with magical beings who could i have left for this child?

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: sdoll
Awesome update ayesha. n gr8 ending.

Thanks

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: abhiyan999
wow awesome update superb and jeh died abhiya again rocks very very nice ending whole family united a perfect ending...

I love a Happy Ending.

Jeh alive or dead? What could i do? I wanted some Melodrama a little sadness and we got it

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: rashika27.1997
awesome dear
its awesome
thnx for the pm

Glad U liked it

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
Awesome update
Loved it

Everyone found his/her soulmate

I guess i am obsessed with happy endings because in life we don't always get them

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
Superbb ending Ayesha 👏... Piya trust was simply woww... unimaginable 😳 felt sad for Jeh though cause he died but he kind of deserved it...happy to know Alina found her love and so as Jannat...but Prannay and Metz? I almost spilled coffee on my laptop... 🤣
You have a tendency to shock your readers 😆

Jeh ki end had to be in this manner Koi toh marna tha! Toh Jeh ki band apni hi khoon se karwa diya.

Roller Coaster Park Riding Ride Amusement Park Smiley Smilie Smileys Smilies Emoticon Emoticons Animated Animation Animations Gif

Well I like a roller coaster ride and in the supernatural worl anything is possible. Pranay and Mets are perfect for the other. Abhay had Pia the lookalike so Mets has the same. For the attraction may stem from looks but when U delve deep U find something Unexpected.

There is no way my readers will get the typical MASALA i normally dish out When i am fed up i like to pull out my tricks out the bag

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud
awesome end ayesha...👏👏👏
loved it to the core...
heart touching climax...❤️
pia was asusual the angel she is always😍...loved her way of accepting everything as it comes...
and no one can love abhay more than her...thats for sure...😉
felt sad for jeh though😭...bt atlast he understood evry1 n im happy abt it...
Both children liked to stick close to the other defending the others actions. Both loved combat in the house so no wonder their home was never in one piece.-this cracked me up🤣🤣🤣...it was like the two little rugrats from ur A TWISTED LOVE ff...
the match making part was too awesome👏...happy that no one was excluded...
love all ur updates dr...ur my most fav writer😍
n thanx for ur pms😊
~sam⭐️

This one shot has been the most violent and emotionally draining i have had.

I made a reference to that FF A TWISTED LOVE on purpose because this Shot was going to be a plot line for the twins being abducted by the elders but that FF has had enough hardships as it has.

U are so sweet for thinking i am a good writer i try my best