::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: .rumki.
wow superb & perfect ending.awesome update.wow pia demanding 4 another child so cute.loved this update

kiss kisses kissed kissing girly lipstick lipsticks makeup

I know right? Abhay would give Pia the world😆

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: minibsp2007
awesome OS👏
I loved your writings and these short sweet os

I read all three parts together they all were very nice and happy family ending was super, pranay with maithaili was something unexpected

Maithali and becoming evil smiley

Pranay are just a vision i see for the future

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: cuteteddy
awesome part dear n m really sorry for the late comment .look, i visited after 2 days to IF n i saw ur pm n thanks for that .

Its all good yaar

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: pratiksha2009
whoa nice update, pranay forund metz that diffrent yaar but good one

Both can be good and bad like the other so they are perfect😆

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Left this one for me. I mean if Pranay can date 200 year old Metz I am just 22 And a child of Abhay is as good as himself.😉

Koi gurantee nahin that he will be a good boy and not a bad boy😆😉

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--geny--

@--geny--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

too good !jay died-bad yar!ok.all is f9 !thanx!

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Awesome mindblowing ayesha,loved it to the core,sorry for late reply due to my net problem.wow kya ending ki hai i loved it,finally bro n sis united,loved alina n jannat conversation its superb.jay died he deserve this.abhiya lived happily ever after.

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Awesome Ending Ayesha!!!It was superb..When Jannat said wat abt Jeewan I though he n Alina was gonna be 2gether but didn't still it was awesome..Pia n her daughter fight sounds Cute n Abhay enjoying em I hope he Pia didn't did anything to him;)Awesome Ending I loved it thanks for PM!!!.sorry m late..:((:

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: sukugeny
too good !jay died-bad yar!ok.all is f9 !thanx!

Someyimes the outcome maynot be the desired one but the balance of good has to be restored some how right? Jehs' death was unfortunate but he did redeem himself

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Abhiya_vijata
Awesome Ending Ayesha!!!It was superb..When Jannat said wat abt Jeewan I though he n Alina was gonna be 2gether but didn't still it was awesome..Pia n her daughter fight sounds Cute n Abhay enjoying em I hope he Pia didn't did anything to him;)Awesome Ending I loved it thanks for PM!!!.sorry m late..:((:

Fights ho te rehte hain family ke beech but where there is trust there is no room for doubts😉