::OS::Destiny's Child part 2 2 OCTOBER PG 10

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

wow awesome update superb and jeh died abhiya again rocks very very nice ending whole family united a perfect ending...

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-Alone-

@-Alone-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Awesome update ayesha. n gr8 ending.

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rashika aggarwal

@rashika27.1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

awesome dear

its awesome

thnx for the pm

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Superbb ending Ayesha 👏... Piya trust was simply woww... unimaginable 😳 felt sad for Jeh though cause he died but he kind of deserved it...happy to know Alina found her love and so as Jannat...but Prannay and Metz? I almost spilled coffee on my laptop... 🤣

You have a tendency to shock your readers 😆

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Awesome update

Loved it

Everyone found his/her soulmate

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

awesome end ayesha...👏👏👏

loved it to the core...

heart touching climax...❤️

pia was asusual the angel she is always😍...loved her way of accepting everything as it comes...

and no one can love abhay more than her...thats for sure...😉

felt sad for jeh though😭...bt atlast he understood evry1 n im happy abt it...

Both children liked to stick close to the other defending the others actions. Both loved combat in the house so no wonder their home was never in one piece.-this cracked me up🤣🤣🤣...it was like the two little rugrats from ur A TWISTED LOVE ff...

the match making part was too awesome👏...happy that no one was excluded...

love all ur updates dr...ur my most fav writer😍

n thanx for ur pms😊

~sam⭐️

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Nice ending 😳 But does Pia remain human or does she turn into a vampire? Loved the part where u united Pranay with Maithali. Both are fiery. Best part was peace getting restored between the 2 warring supernatural clans.

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: shivanirajput
awesome update ayesha
sometimes i just could not find suitable words to praise
it was really a rocking ending
the way jannat and pranav realise their mistake was amazing
u wrote everything pretty well
i could almost visualise it
pranav and maithali u really shock us at times
anyways congrats for a gr8 os

U know me by now I like to shock people. I guess its me being stuck in my old ways of creating drama

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Aww...such a beautiful ending! 😛 Loved Piya's trust in Abhay when she told Alina that she knows Abhay would never deceive her! And I'm glad Jannat and Pranay accepted their parents and now everyone is one big, happy family! Awesome OS 👏

These angry children are ABHAY'S so they may be tough on the outside but they are soft inside. They were bound to melt sooner or later.. So how could they not accept their parents especially one as LOVING as ABHAY.Pia knows ABHAY inside out so questioning his love is out of the question. She knows him like she knows her own self. When U love someone the way Pia and Abhay love the other U have BLIND FAITH in them.