I lUV U MY DEAR CASSINOVA~~UPDATED~~pg 19 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Precap: kriya is beginning to do silly stuff when she's thinking about rey. Rey and swayam decide to made kriya realize her feelings for rey.😛

bharat and amar were rubbing oil onto the floor, directed by swayam and Vicky as rey was pacing left to right in the corridor. Nilesh was watching them and shaking his head.

"abey, yaar!" grunted bharat " mein bol raha hu, hum is technique ko buhat baar try kar chukey hai...koi faida nahi.."

"faida hai na!" cried Vicky, remembering the time when neha had tripped into his arms while entering through an oil covered entrance to their historic social science class. "wese rey, tujhe nahi lagta ke humein kuch aur bhi karna chahye?"

Rey continues pacing as he replied "arey, nai yaar. Background music aur huwa apne aap hi entry maar leti hai...but uske liye mujhe aur kriya ko same scene mein hone ki zaroorat hai."

"letin, agar triya nai aai to fir hum tya tare ge?" asked amar with his innocent eyes bulging slightly (if u guys didn't get him, he said "lekin agar kriya nahi aai to fir hum kya kare ge?").

Bharat stood up and cried "arey haan. Agar wo nahi aai to ye sab mehnat ka kya hoga?"

Swayam sensed trouble. He sighed and thought 'agar ye sab issi tarha aapas mein larte rahe to hummara plan kabhi bhi kaam nahi kare ga.' Placing an arm on bharat's shoulders, he said " dekho, agar kriya aa gai, to plan successful.."

Nilesh face suddenly lit up and he joined the group, "aur agar wo nahi aai to baqi larqiya to aai gi na, inhe fisalne se bachane ke liye hum hai na." He said enthusiastically, wriggling his eyebrows.

Goofy grins spread over their five faces as swayam said "par Sharon ko sirf mein pakronga."

"aur mein apni dewaani ko"

"aur mein linni to"

"Aur mein--"

"OYE!"

They jumped to see rey glaring at them "tum sab meri lovestory set karne aaye ho ya fir apni?"

They grinned guiltily as swayam said "sorry, rey. Wese bhi..."

"TARGET APPROACHING!" yelled vicky and they scrambled out of sight. Rey stood casually by the notice board and tilted his head slightly to sleat a glance at her.

Kriya was half walking half running through the corridor with her hair flying on and off her face. Her cute little face was looking at the ceiling, and seemed to be complaining about something.

'ab kis baat ke liya lar rahi hai aapse?' asked rey, looking upwards with a dazzling smile on his face.

"...universe ji, aap hi kuch karo na-AAAH!"

And rey caught her mid fall. (and then the whistle tune, I just love that one!)

Kriya slowly opened her tightly shut eyes at looked up at rey who was holding her gracefully in his arms, and looking into his eyes seemed to double her pulse rate...without meaning to, she held her breath and stared up at him, all thoughts forgotten, a soft smile beginning to form on her lips.

Rey slowly pulled her up, with his hands still on her waist and her hands on his arms and he was trying his best not to smile. He was already used to getting misty eyed over kriya and losing himself so much that he had now learned control over his emotions...but for kriya, everything was still new.. rey slowly removed his rms from around her.

"uhhh, kriya?" asked rey, triying to sound innocent.

"hmm?" she replied vaguely.

"tum teek ho...ab tum girne nahi wali ho."

It took kriya a moment to realize that rey had slid his hands off her, casually into his pockets while she was still clutching his shoulders. She quickly let go of him and backed away blusing furiously. She realized that the floor was glazed with oil.

"fir se wohi purana prank?" she asked furiously. "ek baar mujhe pata chal jaaye ke ye kis ne lagaya hai, uski to mein..."

She punched the air violently and bharat and amar automatically put their hands on their cheeks.

"woah!" said rey " prank itna acha nahi tha, but after effects itne bure bhi nahi hai, haina?"

Rey grinned at the way kriya had just turned pink to red in a second. Kriya ran away a second before the rest of the guys came out. All of them were smirking and Vicky wolf whistled.

Kriya ran straight into the fire exit. She needed to be alone for some time, to think over what was happening to her. She paused with her hand at the door, remembering all those times when rey had come up frm behind her and pulled her inside...and how she had decided to form her team right over here...and how rey had said 'tum meri mom ho kya?'. Kriya laughed out loud. She sat down on a stair and rested her head on the wall.

True...whatever was happening to her was confusing...and it did make her do stuff she wud have never dreamt of doing before... But the feeling, whatever it was, was just so beautiful that she wished she could feel it all her life...

They only thing that troubled her was that the feeling somehow connected her to rey...it made kriya wanna just stand there and look at him...and going near him seemed to double the intensity of the feeling..

Kriya sat there for a looong time, until she heard a soft cough behind her...

I hope u guys liked it!! 😃

Edited by misslaugheasily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
1st 2 comment!!!
awesum promo gurl!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Liked it very much :) Update soon.. waiting to read further.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...this was soo cute...

hehehe...sare buys rey ki problem chod k apni opportunities discuss karne lag gaye...!!!!🤣🤣


this was reallyy...soo funny and cute too...!!!!

"uhhh, kriya?" asked rey, triying to sound innocent.

"hmm?" she replied vaguely.

"tum teek ho...ab tum girne nahi wali ho."

It took kriya a moment to realize that rey had slid his hands off her, casually into his pockets while she was still clutching his shoulders.


andd...wow...loved this line...my fav...!!!!

it made kriya wanna just stand there and look at him...and going near him seemed to double the intensity of the feeling..

-Saumya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
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edited: hey so sorry yaar.. thoda late ho gaya tha.. actually was busy wid my FF..

ok coming to this one.. 😊

This was awesome one... 😊 all guys wid rey to pataofy kriya.. nice.. 😆 yeh kab hoga d3 mein..😭
but yaar aise kyu chodh diya adhoora sa.. Fire exit conversation chhahiye mujhe abhi... isse waqt..😆😆

some parts were mind blowing.. 😉

'ab kis baat ke liya lar rahi hai aapse?'

awesome dialogue.. 😊

update soon...!!!!!!!!
Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
hey hey plzzz gimme nxt update sooon 😛
this was awsum!!!! 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
aw nice one yar do update soon next Part !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
loved it 2 d core...
awsum update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dis was a SUPER DUPER AWSUM update👏👏...WOW i LUVD it😳
hahaha tel malish on d floor omg dats awsum🤣...luvd d way d guys thot d plan wud fail and strtd talking abt deir own plans dat was soo cute nd funny🤣
Rey continues pacing as he replied "arey, nai yaar. Background music aur huwa apne aap hi entry maar leti hai...but uske liye mujhe aur kriya ko same scene mein hone ki zaroorat hai."🤣
cudnt stop laughin at dis lyn how cute😳🤣
nd luv Rey's lyn 😳😆
'ab kis baat ke liya lar rahi hai aapse?' asked rey, looking upwards with a dazzling smile on his face.😆
HAYYE d fall 😍aww it was soo cute cud perfectly imagine it nd d way u described everything Kria's feelings in d fire escape OMG dat was SUPERB😳😃
AWSUM work👍🏼...plz update sooon nd pm me too😃...didnt recieve pm dis tym😒

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Posted: 13 years ago
awe... this was so cute it had orginality the way kriya shouted n amar n bharat placed their hands on cheek that was hillarious . it was awesome update soon

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