I lUV U MY DEAR CASSINOVA~~UPDATED~~pg 19 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG hey ames(if i can call u that) i just discovered this thread today and i went through all the stories you are an AMAZING ff writer especially this last update i loved the whole atmosphere you created with kria and rey it was tooo good!!! LOVED IT!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ piyu awww! no biggie...i came to IF 'cause of u! 😊 and i enjoyed writing those two parts the most! 😛

Edited by misslaugheasily - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@sweetapple thanx a lot! m sure glad u liked it! and yeah, enjoyed writing the last part the most! 😊
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WOWWW VERY NICE

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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing...!!! such a cute chapter...!!
wonder whats gonna happen next...!!! update soonn!!! :))
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it was just awesome...
just imagine if it goes real...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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luv ur ff keep it up with the gr8t work
pleaseee upload fast want to read more
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i just luv ur FF keep it up with the gr8t work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry, guys...cudn't update for ages! anyway, i hope u like it!😊

kriya was still feeling dizzy, as she dropped into her chair for dinner and picked up her spoon...

she couldn't get over the electric shocks that were still going through her veins at the memory of rey pinning her between the wall and himself...

normally, she would have felt scared, angry or insulted but somehow she felt a sense of security mingled with a strange kind of pleasure that made her heart race when she thought about him...

"KRIYA!!"

"huh?" said kriya, coming out of her reverie and looking up her mom who looked as if she was about to burst out laughing.

"mujhe pata hai ke tumhe mango juice bohat pasand hai, par iska matlab ye to nahi he na, beta ji, ke tum usse is tareke se piyo."

kriya looked down at the table, then looked up at her mom who was now laughing so hard that he was having difficulty in keeping herself on the chair and realized that she had been using the spoon to drink juice.

"umm...ma.." she said, groping around for a way out of the situation. "mein to...ye... ye to aaj kal ka fashion hai! haan, fashion hai."

"sun liya mein ne." her mom replied, wiping away tears of laughter from her eyes. " wese...kon hai wo?"

Kriya was startled at the question and rey's picture flashed across her eyes as she tried to keep her face impassive.

"kon?" she asked trying to sound innocent but not meeting her eyes at the same time. "aap kis ki baat kar rahi hai?"

"wohi..." she replied with a twisted grin on her face " jis ke baare mein tum abhi abhi soch rahi thi."

"mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha ke app kya keh rahi ho, ma." She said, jumping up from her chair. "mera ho gaya. Goodnight."

And with that she hurried away into her room.

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Rey was tossing and turning over in his bed. He tried to punch his pillow into a comfortable shape and dropped his head onto it. He had thought that maybe after seeing kriya, he would be able to sleep peacefully, but the visit seemed to have made it even harder.

But there was a slight difference in his train of thought...before the visit, all he could think of was how much she effected him, but now, he couldn't help but think about how much he affected her..

He remembered the way she had looked at him with her big round eyes turned misty...how she seemed to have lost control over her mind and knees.. rey grinned into his pillow. he slowly drifted into a beautiful dream about her after making a mental note to himself...he had to talk to swayam.

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"YES, SIR" said swayam marching into the empty classroom and grinning at rey through a comical salute. Rey grinned right back at him, and said, "thanx, yaar! I dunno, ke agar tum nahi to mein kiski help leta'"

"koi baat nahi rey! To batao, kya kaam hai?"

"wo, mujhe...uske baare mein baat karni thi..."

"kiske baare mein?"

"ussi ke!"

"kiske?"

" ok, ok... woh, actually, mujhe kriya ke baare mein baat karni thi... woh...mujhe lagne laga hai ke ab usko bhi mere karib aane se farq parne laga hai...i think, ke jab mein usey touch karta hun, to uske under bhi current aata hai. i think, Mujhe dekh kar, even she feels butterflies in her stomach."

Swayam was staring at rey, with a smile playing around his mouth.."oh, to tumne mujhe mujhe mission BKP ke liye bulaya hai... Mujhe pata tha, aaj nahi to kal, ye sab to hona hi tha!"

Rey looked confused as he asked "BK--what?"

"BKP." Said swayam, with a smirk. "mission Baatcutter Ko Patao."

"oye, hello!"

"ok, ok, TUMHARI baatcutter."

"much better! Wese...naam acha hai."

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Edited by misslaugheasily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i had smile throughout while reading thnx 4 pm n update it soon it was awesome

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