I lUV U MY DEAR CASSINOVA~~UPDATED~~pg 19

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Posted: 14 years ago
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what did u write in your text??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well, i got tired of seeing rey becoming the typical angry young guy and i was missing cubbylal, so here's my piece of fan fiction:

Rey is doing his best to annoy kriya. during one of his tasks, kriya falls down and hurts her ankle. rey decides to take her to the college nurse.

rey (helps her stand up): 'aao mein tumhe nurse tak le jaata hoon.'
kriya (shakes his hands of her shoulders): 'mujhe aap ki help ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.'
rey (looks at her angrily for a sec and the forces himself to be calm): 'dekho, tumhe is waqt kisi ki help ki zaroorat hai aur yahaan mere ilawa koi nahi hai. so you don't have a choice!'
kriya (sits on a nearby bench): 'meine kaha na, mujhe aap ki help ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. wese bhi, aap ko kya farq parta hai, kisi ka paao mudhe ya haath tutey.'
rey sits down besides her and glares at her): ' oh really? mujhey kya farq parta hai?? logon ko hurt karna tum se pehtar kisi ko nahi aata.'
kriya (remembers the slap and looks guilty for sec): 'mein jaanti hoon ke mijhe aap ko us din thapad nahi maarna chahye tha, par aap ne bi to mujhe pure college ke saamne insult kiya tha!"
rey ( looking half angry and half bewildered):' meine tumhe insult kiya tha? kab?'
kriya (angry again): 'haan, haan. aap ne meri insult kab ki thi. aap ki team ki to hobby hai na, GS ki campaigning speech dena aur us mein mujhe app ki tarf se sab ke saamne insult karna.'
rey opens his mouth to say something but kriya cuts across him and says, sadly: 'mujhe is baat ka dukh nahi hua kai sharon ne mujhe phir se sab ke saamne insult kiya...bura to mujhe is liye laga kyunke woh aap ki tarf se bol rahi thi...meine kabhi nahi socha tha ke aap mere baare mein aisa socho ge. mujhe laga tha ke chubbylal real hai.'
kriya stands up and limps away from rey, leaving him frozen over there, kriya's words still ringing in his head.

later he forces the truth out of vicky, and gets angry with sharon and really regrets the way he behaved with kriya.

Edited by misslaugheasily - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey that was nice.. but too short.. cont soon
Edited by kriyaaaansh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome! I really want the truth to come out soon- so do alot of members. I hope CVs get the hint- and hopefully make it something like this!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow this is good wating for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow dis is gr8😃...do continue pls...wud lyk 2 knw wat Rey dus now😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is amazing! I really wish something like this could happen in the show! i'm so tired of seeing angry rey and wanting revenge and stuff. I just want the old rey bak.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
nice one yaar plz continue 😊
Posted: 14 years ago
#10
well written... cont. it 😊

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