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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Heyyy... Me second... 🥳

I totally loved the way varun is bringing both of them closer to each other.. unknowingly, he's helping his parents.. He's a smart and cute kid..

and the past, that you wrote.. conveyed a lot Pally.. the love they shared.. their intimate moments.. everything.. Sometimes, its always better to convey these emotions in a subtle manner to have a lasting effect on the readers..

and that's exactly what you did...

FAB FAB update..👏👏👏👏

Edited by .Divya. - 13 years ago

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

awww a ray of hope...mayank clearly loves nupur too much to be able to go along with his stay-away-from-nupur plan...im so happy nupur is so adamant in her resolve...i hope mayank keeps warming up to nupur...nice update...hope the next one is soon 😊

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Aysha Saxena

@aysha_mayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Ok...First of all...😳

Omggg...the past...Hayeee...pallu that was utterly romantic🤪...Ekdum my types🤪...and worry not we can read more romance..isliye be motivated to write more and more romance...aur kya bolun...I can't elaborate here...Public thread hai🤓...But if you wanna know I can elaborate in PM😎

and about the present...I m liking the way Varun is instilling some positivity in their relation...There must be something related to Varun...that they drifted apart...and ur last sentence in previous update which Mayank thought...".all he didn't like was Varun was not her priority, just like he wasn't ."...Might be Nupur was too ambitious to give priority to her husband and son...😕

Nevertheless...I really want to know the reason soon😕

Update soon Ladkiii😛

Edited by aysha_mayur - 13 years ago

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

beautiful updt payal
varun is soo cute
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

that was a fantastic part...very nicely written...:):):)

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

cute update payal!❤️
luvd both Past n Present!😳
cont soon!🤗

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

beautiful update...ANOTHER WONDERFULLY WRITTEN UPDATE PALLU!!!👏

D way Varun interacts vid his parents it brings a dreamy PICTURE dat mayur vil be together again due to varun😍...n also UR DIS UPDATE CLUBBED VID LAST UPDATE MAKES IT VERY CLEAR DAT MAYUR STILL LOVE EACH OTHER!!!!!

THANX FOR D PM..

CONTINUE SOON!!!!