~maitri~ maaneet FF thread 9 pt77/78 pg 158/159END

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story so far
Maan Singh Khurana - 28yrs. Sucessful MD of Khurana Telecommunication based out in Delhi. He is certified women hater. He has crossed all the limits in exhibiting his hateredness. He has climbed all the peak in his career & achieved the heights in business field that no one could. And he has done all without a trace of fear. But one thing scares him - the self...!!! the hateredness of self...the loneliness within.
Geet Handa - 28yrs . Hot, incredibly sexy technically impossible to ignore her or not get attracted to her. You can say she dresses up to kill. She is intimidatingly smart. Her hold on her field has made her the CEO of reliance telecommunication based out in Pune. Guys around her find it impossible not to fall pray to her hot look but very strangely feels consciously low in front of her very high knowledge & confidence.

he has a past he hates & wants to forget.

She has a past she treasures & can't forget.
Maitri is translated in a lot of ways, maybe most commonly as love, but the way it translated here is unconditional friendliness and in particular unconditional friendliness to oneself. So maitri is about love a lot. In fact, sometimes muskan think it's the only thing muskan can write. Muskan also writes about compassion a lot, but actually compassion is a form of maitri so this unconditional friendliness to oneself, it seems to be what most of us do not have at times... or should muskan say most of the time.
maitri is about 2 bestest friends dodo & genie from college days.
she was really a dodo when he first met her on the first day of their college.
& he was the college heart.
A flirt..but don't say that infront of his dodo she may just tear u apart. ...
dodo left her hostel because of a cat fight with the room met & agreed to move in with her genie.
& she ruled him totally!!..
now the feel this unexplainable attraction towards eachother that makes it difficult for them to deny & accept.. wat is more painful the acceptance of it..to self & ur maitri!!!
thanks a lot nandu
thanks sia for the VM..just loved it
Another flavor of love...maitri...
please let me know how u like muskan's maitri
looking forward to your response
love
muskan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~maitri~
71

Where do I hide myself?

How I wish I could bury myself somewhere?
Als, this world is too small,
Alas, this earth is too shallow,
To be able to take the depth of my mistakes!
Why am I even calling them my mistakes?
They are crimes that I commited,
Crimes for which no punishment can suffice,
Crimes the punishment for which was borne by you for me!
How I wish I could die,
Sadly that the most cowardly thing to do now!
My child needs me now,
I will do all to save him, I vow!
But, is he my child at all?
No, certalinly not-he is just yours...
Keep him away from even my shadow,
For I might harm him, hurt him, trample him,
The way i did to you, your feelings, your emotions, your love...
My heart bleeds, but its nothing...
Nothing compared to the endless tears that you have shed,
the lonliness that you combatted,
And the love that you still saved for me!
Why? How? When?
Why do you love me-I am not worth you!
How could I do this to you-you are so innocent!
When did I fall for you-perhaps the day I met you since!
I am a devil-burn me, scream at me, kill me!
Shout at me, abandon me, blame me...
how can you still forgive me,
How can you still protect me?
Why do your eyes still speak love?
I fail to look at myself...I fear to even open my eyes,
But, even when they are closed, my heinous crime chases me behind those shut eyelids...
I am doomed, but thats what I deserve,
What hurts is that I brought upon your doom,
When you needed my love-I gave you lonliness,
When you deserved to be treated like a princess-all I gave you is hopelessnes!
Tell me-what do I do? where do i hide myself...
The oceans seem shallow, the earth insufficient...
by swati


His couldn't face Nt..he tried to look away.. Nt jerked him angrily.. how could u Maan? How could rape ur best friend...if thats wat u considered her!!!maan tried look every where...but not her eyes.. his face darkens & he was filled with inward grief! with shame, feeling worthless.. no longer able to understand what love is..maitri is..
how could u rape her she shook him..her words pirced threw his soul
Geet immediately barged in between & snapped her hand.. nahi di he didn't u know he didn't. She instantly cupped his face..he dipped his head low shedding tears...not able to face her. She raised his face..
we made love..amy is our symbol of love di..he could never hurt me. He loved him from the day one.. before even I knew all abt it.
Maan nodded crying..agreeing yet not daring to look at her.
Nt '
made love rubbish...geet...he doesn't even love u..if he did why didn't he say anything in last two days...forgot all these yrs ' wat was stopping him here meeting u after 8yrs..why couldn't he just tell wat he feels
Geet smiled sadly..
he thought I love someone else..
he looked at her in shock.. how she exactly knew wat he felt & thought. He looked into her eyes..there was only love...no complain.. no anger..no regret..humiliation was replaced with humility
insecurity turned to trust..all his fear was replaced by love...true love... only love that could release him of all his guilt.
Nt '
wat rubbish
Geet turned to face NT ..
haan di jaisen main soch rahi thi..he is married.
Nt shook her head ' tum dono hi pagal ho
Geet ' di its been only 2days & we both didn't know how to express our feelings..though all we wanted to do was confess our love.
Nt just left them alone not wanting to accept his plea. She couldn't forgive him.

Maan reluctantly looked at his dodo..he had so many mixed feeling excitement, anxiousness, guilt.. sadness..anger...his dodo...she looked so matured & understanding..just a min ago..& now her face was all turned fuming typical like she always used to be when she used to angry at him. He cleared his throat..& inched closer..she twisted her lips & snapped his hand.
He wondered wat happened...
dodo
tum mujhese baat mat karo

she got angry & walked into her room.. he caressed his temple & followed. He had no clue why she was angry now...
dodo sweety..kya huwa..
she slammed the door on his face
he closed his eyes & rested on the door...
dodo plz..
he pushed the door & walked in slowly
she threw the pillow at him
don't talk to me..she screamed...
u don't love me the way u used to love me before..


she complained cutely.. probably she was correct..he loved her more now... aab issen kaun samjayega
aisen nahi hain dodo..I love u more now
no u don't she frowned cutely
why r u saying that dodo..tu tho mujhe jaanthi hain na
she threw another pillow ..aab lagtha hain..bilkul nahi jaanthi...
kal raat ko tum ne kuch nahi kiya..

his eyes popped out
main ne di wala night dress bhi pehna tha.. she said it so cutely
pata hain di aur rahul ne mera kitna mazak uddaya
he could just fall off laughing like always or just fall in love with her cuteness all over again
he just stood admiring her sweetly...
lekin dodo maine bahut pee thi
she snorted her nose.. us din bhi tho pee thi..
us din tho..mujhe turn bhi nahi karne de rahen the.. main thoda hilthi..tho tum phir se .. she crossed arms & turned her face.
I was drugged dodo... he said sadly
kavitha had drugged me that night...(he sighed..thats why he was so sure it had to be that night when he lost himself completely. He remembered clearly..kavitha telling him the next day..how proud she was abt him that even after so many drinks & drug in his drink..he didn't cross his limits with her. )
She looked at him sadly..
but why will she do that
he dipped his head miserably..the worse part of his life..he didn't even want her nay where near that
he just hugged her
will u be ever forgive me for that
he almost broke down...
she cupped his face
if I can't forgive u ..then I don't deserve u genie..
she looked deeply into his eyes... saw her own love mirrored in his eyes, she knew that after this very moment there would be no going back..there was never going back between them..ever for that matter. Finally they explored their feelings for each other & they knew that after this moment neither would want to return. She softly pressed her body to his as she pulled him closed holding his cupping his face & kissed him, at first the kiss was tentative, both wanting to make sure that they where not making a mistake in their actions. soon the kiss deepened, their long held passion taking over until finally both were kissing and touching each other with no sign of trepidation or fear.
Crying out their love...in every possible way

Precap
Maan - amy confrontation

maitri would end in few more parts..plz support me with ur lovely comments & likes

thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
will PM later
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it sounds like some bad words... 🤣
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congrats for new thread waiting update soon
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congrats for new thread wow that was so sweet of dodo as usal
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Congrats for the new thread.

Muuaahhh...
Awesome
Superb
Loved it.

So cute...

Updt the next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update so u r planning to finish maitri so beore that geet should know what has happened with maan in the past and NT should also know i think its high time all should know what has kavita done with maan so that he has completely shut himself from everyone even from his family members
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Muskiii
Thank so much.
I loved the update v much...
Muahhh

Hugs n kisses...🤗
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Congrats for new thread
Awesome update

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