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Posted: 13 years ago

~maitri~
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Finally they explored their feelings for each other & they knew that after this moment neither would want to return. She softly pressed her body to his as she pulled him closed holding him cupping his face & kissed him, at first the kiss was tentative, both wanting to make sure that they where not making a mistake in their actions. soon the kiss deepened, their long held passion taking over until finally both were kissing and touching each other with no sign of trepidation or fear.
Crying out their love...in every possible way.


Saying those 3 words meant so shallow now..when they loved each other so much, from so deep within for so long. He hugged her, crushing her in his arms.. oh dodo... he immediately pulled away...amy.. he cried.
Geet smiled '
he is just like u
he like sItalian food too
bikul tumahri tara hi.. gussa karta hain
bikul tumhari tarah ussen aapne kamra chahiya

Maan looked at her
..but he hates me
Geet looked into his eyes dearly..
nahi nahi genie he can't hate u
wo thoda naraz hain
he is so used to seeing rahul being there for rany & u were ..

she couldn't complete the sentence...Maan clenched his fist ..
unknowingly he was angry at his dodo for keeping him away from him.
He turned his back ..she hugged him from back.. resting her cheek on his strong toned back.
She softly slipped around his waist I am sorry
he pushed his hair behind
ek bar tho kaha hota dodo
she held him tighter mujhe laga ki
he turned angrily ..tumhe laga ki..main

main ...uss dhoke baaz bitch ke saat khus hoon
itna kuch janthi ho mera baren main..yeh nahi jaan thi main tumharen bina kush nahi rah sakta
he painfully cupped her face..main amy ko kya kahonga
why I was not there for him
why his dad was never there for his fathers day
why I was not there to take him to school..hold his hand ..to teach him ride a bike..or swim

amy twisted his lips.. I know all that
maans heart stopped...he knew amy was standing right behind them
amy crossed his arms & turned his lips
I don't need u for all that
dodo taught me every thing
Maan turned to face him feeling horrified to even meet the little boys complaining gaze
he bend his knees... & cupped his face.
Amy snapped his hand & turned his back
Geet ' AMY
Maan held her hand.. not to shout ..not now..it was his turn to face it all
Maan went around & stood in front of him.
Amy shouted '
we don't need u in our life
why r u here?

Maan '
but I need u both
amy '
where were u when we needed u?
Maan ' I am sorry
amy hugged Geet rather protective manner ' then we r sorry now
maan's eye welled .. I know I have been mean.. & fool. Lekin tum tho samjdar hona. u r not mean like me
Amy screamed holding Geet closer '
no .. we don't want u.. I don't want u
Maan hugged from behind crying.. plz..amy I am sorry..apne dad ko maaf kar do
he pushed his hand that rested on him..& Geet.. no..don't touch my dodo.. don't come near her.. I know u will hurt her again.. I know u will leave her again.
Maan held his snapping hand.. promise I will never hurt ur dodo again
amy looked at him ..with teary eyes.. promise
Maan ' promise I will never hurt ur dodo
amy hugged him & cried.. meri dodo hain sirf meri
Maan smiled & cried.. haan sirf tumhari & slipped the other hand around Geet pulling her closer

amy pushed his hand around Geet.. & snorted meri hain
Geet & Maan both laughed with tears in their eyes.. as Maan nodded.
Maan wiped his tears '
can I just hug ur dodo once
amy looked at him & then Geet & then nodded
Maan hugged her dearly.. the usual bear hug & cupped her face..slowly placing a soft kiss on her lips.. hum shaadi karlen dodo. She blushed & looked down. Love u a lot dodo he said as his hands slipped into her hair softly caressing her scalp. Before the passion drove in..amy..pulled his pants..in the side
sirf hug karne ka permission hain kiss ka nahi
Maan smiled into the kiss & so did Geet.
Maan pulled out.. & sweetly complained
yeh meri tarah thodi hain..bilkul tumhari tarah hain
Geet made a ball of her fist & hit his chest.
Amy frowned ..don't hit my dad
Maan fell on his knees.. kya kaha...phir se kahoo
amy was little taken a back.. don't hit
he said feeling little scared in a meek voice
Maan ' nahi uske baad
amy looked at Geet ..she smiled sweetly
he looked at Maan then
.. dad
Maan exhaled sharply.. ..kissing him all over his face
he felt so contented to have his life with him .. only he knew wat life he was leading all this years without them.

-maitri part 72-

Precap
meeting the family

-PREV PART 71 NEXT PART 73-


thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
will PM later
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG di Loved the Update Finally a happy Family Moment Amy is sirf hug karne ka permission hain kiss ka nahi Maan asked his dodo to marry him Maan sweetly complained yeh meri tarah thodi hain..bilkul tumhari tarah hainAmy Called him DADAnd Perfect bear Hug
They both fight for DODO "meri dodo hai"
Good Night

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

i was tryin to sleep but asusual no sleep 4 me... mera kuch nahi ho sakta...opened my lappy js't saw updating then gt to read it...me second hurray... really cute n sweet update...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃... i mean geet has to deal two most difficult and possessive men of her life...😆😆...meetin the family.... i m scared..i mean knwin hw ortho is her family is...specially brij he lvd geet too much...maan is so dead...i hope he manage through the help of his dodo...omg i 4gt he proposed...cheers.. do continue...chao

Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
No Way!!!
Aww



I Thought It Was Just Cute The Way Amy, Maan And Geet Became One Family!! 😛
It Was Soo Emotional And It Was Just Amazing...



Can't Wait For More...
Thank You x




Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
:) Loved the update! Amazing! Can't wait for the family meeting!
Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg. it was too gud. amy perfect combi of both. loves his possesiveness for his dodo.
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMDZZZ!!!

I have tears in my eyes!!

Ive forgiven you now for all the torture you put us through the last few updates!!

Hayyeee kina sweet that!!

Amy called Maan Dad!!

And they're gonna get married!!!

Oye Hoye!!

Im loving you for this Muskaan...cant wait for more!!

:-)

:-)

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG

AWESOME UPDATE, PERFECT FAMILY
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upd...
lov it...
i m speechless...
i gt emotional by seeing beautiful union of dad & son ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
The part was so lovely, the way he complained and then he melted and and argue with her super lovey dover completely flattered.OMG that was just so sweet he is complete blend of both dodo as cute in his talks and genie have a magic in his acts.I wonder if he will ever allow maan to come near HIS dodo as if he possess her...loved it muskan so much
still cant believe this journey will end so soon
DO post next 1 soon
will b waiting
God bless U

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