~maitri~ maaneet FF thread 9 pt77/78 pg 158/159END - Page 82

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Posted: 13 years ago
this was so sweet...i loved it...n then nt teasing geet...it was awesome...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Geet looked at Maan.. giving him all kind of looks..
Maan made a cute innocent face.. ja raha hoon
lekin ussen bhi
she frowned.. he gulped his words & went in to the wash room..

Geet opened the suit case & removed a change for amy.

She looked at maans cupboard ..she smiled as she reached it.. remembering the way he kept it. She was shocked to see it kept neatly arranged. Her heart ached to see the shades of shirts that were stocked up.. nun he would have worn in those 4yrs when they were together. She sighed sadly & took out a kurta & pyjama for him.. she was surprised he had them.. he would refuse to wear it in college days even for a puja or a college fests.


She looked at the closed door when she heard him call out for her from the shower..
dodo..
she knew it was for towel..
she smiled & knocked at the door... yeh lo..
he smiled inward how well she knew him.. she screamed from outside genie..jaldi karo..daadi main wait kar rahi hain
he loved teasing her.. he just kept quite
she got irrated as he expected..she banged the doors..genie.. if u don't take the towel now.. I am going to come inside..
he chuckled...almost at the verge of challenging her
but he dare not.. he smiled & reached the door before he could..she walked in throwing the towel at him. He held the towel & covered his ahem ahem...
Geet giggled ..jaldi karo...she teased
well that was Maan Singh Khurana she was dealing with.. he held her hand & pulled her in. she fell on his chest with a thud..
genie jane do mujhe.. dehko meri dress gili ho rahi hain
he pushed her under the shower.

She jumped up.. with the stream of water on fully dressed self.
Yeh kya kar rahen ho..meri dress gili hogayen..she complained sweetly
this for pouring water on me..
she made a cute angry face...wo tho tum utt nahi rahen the
aisen utta then hain kya
..he said husky whispering in her ears sending shivers down her. Slowly his hands began to move over her..reaching to her dori,,genie.. she moaned.. shhh..he silent her placing a kiss on her wet lips.. she stood mesmerized realizing his hardness. His hands slowly undressed her ..placing wet kisses all over her shoulder..down her back around her waist then up to her breast.


His tongue swirled over the soft mounds Geet closed her eyes shut.
Phir kasien utta then hain.. she almost asked dazed with his touch
tumhe nahi pata he asked senously biting her earlobe..
she shook her hear teasingly
all too soon Maan stood back.. leaving her feeling restless & trembling. His body still sensuously brushing hers. Maan she almost cried.. for abanding her
he smirked .. u really don't know..she gulped looking at his intimidating gaze. knowing wat eactly he expected.

Tentatively she ran her fingers across his body. A low rumble emanated from his throat. Licking her lips she continued to assault him. Stealing a glance up at his face, she saw that his eyes were closed & his jaw was clenched. A small smile appeared on her mouth as she realized the power she had over him..like always...now she understood better.

she couldn't stop herself exploring him feeling fascinated with every touch. His muscles quivered in response to her touch. She continued circling.. then boldly she moved lower..her heart beat quickened when she moved caressing around his manhood that was becoming harder right in front of her eyes. Getting incredible bold her fingers slid down brushed over..she was surprised feeling it hot & silky soft ..she couldn't resist to holding them.. he suddenly grabbed her & pulled her placing a rough desirous kiss on those lips.. do u even know.. how it drives me crazy in need of u... she blushed furiously as he cradled her in his arms & struggled with his knees to instantly part her legs & fill her.

She bit her lips trying to silent the sounds of pleasure building within her but it was way too much to suppress. She began panting & moaning out loud as his movements became deeper harder & faster leading her to a ecstasy filled with the most exquisite sensations... he closed his eyes feeling the explosion.. holding her hanging around his waist...her arms tightened around him..
panting.. kissing they slowly regained the standing posture...only to hear..amy knocking the door..
amy - dad where is dodo
Maan without thinking answered..dodo is here
Geet immediately waked him
amy ' dodo wat r u doing
she bit her lips.. wo..wo..
Maan smirked...
she frowned .. actually I was giving a bath to genie
Maan looked at her in disbelieve
amy ' why?
Maan rolled his eyes
she immediately wore the night dress that was there & ran out throwing the towel at Maan.
He wrapped the towel.. while amy just walked in checking him out top to bottom
Maan felt little conscious
amy ' u don't know how to have a bath
how old r u ?
Maan could just eat Geet up for putting him in such odd situation.
He didn't want to answer any of his odd question.. he kissed him & got him ready.


Everyone looked at them in awe as they stepped down the steps ..maan & amy..
both dressed in similar color kurta..
Geet chuckled with Daadi.

As the pooja continued close family member joined them..with Kavitha & Dev.
Maan didn't even notice..he was so lost in amy..who was busy questioning him all abt the hawan..why fire in the house.. ?
where is the fire alarm go on?
Won't the pandit burn his hand doing all this
...
every one was shocked when they suddenly saw Geet totally out of control the moment she saw kavitha.. she took the whole ghee ka can & emptied it on kavitha's head.
It took a min for Maan to realize wat exactly was happening.. why every one was so panicking.


.. Geet madly looked around for the match box..
amy screamed dodo...
she found the match next to the lamp.. & frantically began to light it..stricking the stick along the box..
the whole gathering was shocked..& terrified.

The family knew wat kavitha had done.. but then now she was Mrs Dev Khurana..so they kept quiet. Maan had never seen her in past 8yrs. Not even in any family gatherings.. he attended nun.
But it all did mean anything to him now...
amy panicked.. dodo wat r u doing..he pulled maan's kurta ..aap dodo ko jaante nahi ho...
Maan smirked.. remembering how she left the hostel & fought with that girl..because she had called her genie is a flirt...he exactly knew his dodo..kavith was dead..no one could save her.. if he intervened..his dodo would kill him too..
he smiled inward & lifted amy in his arms..
he probably just loved it

Nt tried to pull her away.. rahul snapped the match box from her hand..
kavitha.. ran for her life.. Geet chased her around the house.. screaming out all kind of names.
how could he not fall for her innocence.. nothing abt her innocent love for him had changed.. she loved him as madly she did then.. probably much more now...
kavitha fell on maans feet..ussen rohka..
plz..maan
.. she is gone mad
Maan looked at Geet
the look in her face was enough for him to step out of it..
he pulled his hand out.. letting her do wat every she wants..
she took the lamp.. & was abt to throw at her.. Maan held her hand ...lovingly

she frowned
his gaze turned towards amy. She immediately left the lamp..that fell with a thud on the floor..spilling the oil & fire all around.. reaching quickly towards kavitha..
with in that split sec..she saw the horrible sight of death..darkness ..burning fire all around.. Dev..threw the spread on her & rolled her on the floor.
Kavitha screamed in pain ..she is mad ..she is mad..
Maan kissed her sweetly on her forehead.. My Adorable Dodo
she cried.. I want to kill her.. she hit his chest making a fist.
He kissed her head ..holding amy in his arms.


Precap
last part

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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Romance in the shower was beautiful.
Geet was so super bold
Maan knew exactly how to extract things out of her.
They were so lost in their romance and passion
but Amy knocked at the wrong time
Geet's answer was so embarrassing
Loved the way Maan managed the situation.
Dad and son seemed to be perfectly matching everywhere
So Kavita is Mrs Dev khurana now.
Geet's reaction was furious towards her
Maan did nothing to stop her as he knows how much she hates people who trouble him.
Thank God Maan stopped her right on time
Next is last part
I will terribly miss dodo and Genie
They were so so super sweet
Will be waiting for it


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Posted: 13 years ago
did she really killed her??
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update feeling so bad for kavita hahahah she deserve this
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Maan kissed her sweetly on her forehead.. My Adorable Dodo
she cried.. I want to kill her.. she hit his chest making a fist.
He kissed her head ..holding amy in his arms.
Geet sobbed.. I want to kill her..


every one in the hall ignored wat happened .. letting Dev take kavitha out of this place.
The rest of the pooja continued peacefully..
All of them left back to US.. Geet insisted Daadi also came along them.
He could have never refused her.

They followed all the tests & went ahead with the test tube baby procedures.
The whole house was filled with the love & happiness as Geet was now expecting their little princess. Rano & thai ji came down to US..to help her with the delivery..though dodo was dodo ..
main sab manage karlongi
nt teased ' I know how u managed first time so just shut up & listen to us.
She made a baby face looking at Maan.
Well that was her genie.. he pampered her the most. All her demands were met even before she asked. Amy was not really happy sharing his dodo with so many people. How much every one tried to explain him.. the little one was his sister..helping them cure him..etc..etc.. nothing made sense.


amy became more senstive & senti.. he clung to Geet more. Last few days before delivery ..amy cried hugging her..thats when he first time felt the baby kick him. He had felt it before..but never so closely.
Maan immediately encouraged him to talk to the baby & feel her more. Amy spent the whole day around geets tummy.
Well that was it.. she couldn't sleep or do any thing.. either amy or Maan would be there always wanting to talk to the baby.


Every thing went on well.. babies stem cell helped cure amy completely. Rano & thai ji stayed back until baby was 6months. After the baby was completely cured they all moved back to delhi.
Maan opened a hospital for rahul in delhi after sorting the divorce issue. Nt still fought with him.. but couldn't have stayed without him either.

Maan was getting back to office after months.. He was handling everything from home. Adhi & sasha were of get help. Sasha got back her position actually was made the CEO.


Well well here was the surprise to whole KC..the naughty flirtatious Maan. Complimenting & admiring the girls.. smiling.. cheerful.

only until.. his dodo came & held his ears.. & pulled him to the cabin.. yeh kya kar rahen ho tum
he straighten his tie..kaam ..kaam kar raha hoon
Genie she warned pointing her finger at him
u r not allowed to see other girls
phelen tho nahi rohk thi thi
she dangerously narrowed her brows; got really wild & left from there. He gave a victorious smile & went to his desk. His happiness was shot lived like his flirting.

Next day he came back to office with a huge smile plastered on his face. He was shocked to see the whole floor empty. He was bit taken a back. He looked around & walked towards his cabin..only to see the whole staff.. peeping into geets cabin.. even the girls. He narrowed his brows & walked towards her cabin.. every one straighten themselves & ran back to their respective places. He suspicious looked around &

slowly peeped into her cabin...he heard her smile..giggle ..laughing loud..he smiled.. her voice filled his soul.. he smiled & walked in ..his eyes widen in shock to see his wife..looking hotter than ever..wearing shortest black skirt with a formal sleeveless light lavender top.. her hair cascading along her shoulder..teasing her cheeks as she laughed.. wat burned his sight was her continuously laughing at the jokes this guy.. was cracking .. & the tall ..guy seemed to not take his eyes off his dodo. Maans eyes turned wild..

he opened his mouth to shout at her... before he could.. she walked sexily towards him & introduced him to the tall handsome guy..
genie he is Arjun..Arjun Rathode
he stared down at her angrily
she totally ignored him.. genie he is Nt di 's bro. After finishing college he gave me the job..tub tho mujhe koi experince bhi nahi tha
the deal jiske hum partner hain
..
Maan didn't even want to hear a word more abt another person on her lips.
He held her hand & dragged her to his cabin..yeh kya kar rahi ho tum
yeh kya kapden phen rahken hain
she smiled inwardly..the moment he looked at her ..she made an innocent face & looked down.. inhe main kya kharabhi hain
kal tum bahut admire kar rahen the.. us parking lot wali ko
wo tho main tumhe chid...he stoped
thats when he realized wat all this was abt.. aacha ji..
she nodded..
kabrdar jo aisen dress phena.. he removed his coat & wrapped around her
genie
he looked away fuming in anger.
Genie..suno tho...
he was so so .. annoyed...
she smiled..& held her ears.. nahi pehlnoogi bus..
aur wo langoor kaun tha
kaun langoor
that Nt ka bro.. I am he is interested in u
how do u know.
.she asked innocently
maans yes popped out.. wat??
haan.. he proposed to marry me
uske baad bhi ur working with him
he is not as bad as u think..he is really sweet
Maan was fuming now.. ussen se shaadi karlethi
aacha ..main kar sakthi thi..she questioned cutely
haan..he snapped
lekin she gave puzzled look
he looked at her from corner of his eyes
lekin tumne tho kaha tha ki tum sirf meri ho..
aur sirf meri rahna..humesah
he hugged her instantly.. tum sirf meri ho..samji..
aur yeh sab nahi phena.. usse baat bhi nahi karna

aur tum
arren baba..sirf tumhara hoon
..
aur wo parking lot wali
wo tho I was teasing u
yeh lo.. khama khan main ne ussen job se nikal diya
he laughed taking her lips into his..I love u ..

aauch Maan screamed.. Geet pulled out the kiss & looked at Maan.
Maan rubbed his thighs & looked down to see amy & little kiran..frowning up at him..
amy hugged Geet..meri dodo hain..
kiran just followed was every amy did.. she tried holding her legs. She had just started to stand...she wrapped her cute little arms around Geet ..meli..doo..doo
Maan lifted her in his arms & kissed her.. haan baba.. yeh sab ki dodo hain..bas ek meri nahi
Geet giggled hugging amy & maan

THE END

PREV PART 77

Thanks a lot for all the love & support to maitri..
hope u all like muskan's maitri
love u all
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finaly me first on the last part of MAITRI 🥳

part 77

loved i bathroom romance ☺️

dodo is such a dodo

giving bath to ginie & amy asking maan "how old are you,don't know how to bath !!!!!" 🤣

father son duo in same color dress 😛

that kavita bit just loved it 😆 😆 maan didn't do anything to stop her 😉 😆

dev married that kavita 😡 after knowing her truth 😡 😡

part 78

amy still don't want to share his dodo to anyone 😛

jealous maan & geet are adorable 😉

even kiran says her dodo not mamma 😆

geet has become dodo for everyone 😳

loved it to the core ❤️



Maitri will always be in our heart ❤️
thank you so much for such a beautiful journey of MAITRI 🤗 🤗



Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG this is so and Update!!!!!
MAANEET are sweetheart-desi-glitters-2s
going to miss MAITRI ,Dodo, Genie ,Amy
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful ending
Amy got cured
They have a little princess now wow.
Finally they are back in delhi and Maan back to his usual self.
Maan's flirting was very good
Geet gave him properly back.
The cuties claiming dodo was so sweet.
The family hug in Maan's cabin was ultimate.
Thank you for the beautiful story dear
Hope to read many many more from you

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