-dreams- maaneet FF THREAD 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot for all the support & love for this dreams of mine

I am greatful to each one of u for reading & motivating me to write
story so far...umm..
in a nut shell is a princess & he is the prince of her dreams..
just that the dream came harsher in reality...


poem that tells u abt geet & her story

I was an extraordinary girl-with ordinary dreams...

All I wished for is love-my biggest dream...
My world was small, the palace huge,
My dreams-thats where I took refuge!
All my life I wanted just a glance,
Tried to please my Dad at every chance...
Failed miserably every time,
Got scolded-what was my crime?
A single day turned my life upside down,
In a sea of pain I had to drown;
Yet the biggest blow was yet to come,
I lost all-I felt like scum!
How I wished I could die,
Yet to someone's wishes I was made to ply;
He treated me like dirt, didn't bothjer about my hurt,
Not even a word I could blurt...
A roller-coaster ride, has changed my life,
I seen heaven, and now strife,
My biggest dream seems real today;
Yet that dream now seems completely waste!
My identity has changed so have I,
Where my destiny will take me-I will comply,
I was an extraordinary girl, with ordinary dreams,
Yet, now, I am just a mother and a daughter in my dreams...
Love
Swati
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Dreams
part 39

Simran didn't quiet understand wat was going on. Why all her producers suddenly had similar offers. It was disgusting & humiliating to her..when each & every guy she approached just looked at her with cheap & lusty eyes. With out acting in a single adult content she became a famous po*n star. Articles came out claiming her as the next hottest po*n star..debates..on why she had to chose such line..media approached already doomed bajaj's with all kind of nasty questions on simran's character. End of 7th day.. there was nothing much left of bajaj's.
Geet was taken a back with all that news. When Maan came into the room she immediately hid the news paper. He narrowed his brows & looked at her. She looked here & there nervously. The moment he came close to her she closed her eyes & held the paper tightly behind. He smiled & went behind her..softly placed a peck on her shoulder..she just left the paper..
thanks.. he smiled
she opened the her eyes instantly.. tu bhi na..geet ..pata nahi kya ho jata hain..unke pas aaten hi
he took the paper & turned around.. he didn't care to read abt simran ..he just skipped it
Geet ' plz plz don't read
she almost ran into him. He lovingly hugged her.. tum aisen meren uppar giro ghi to padna kaun kambakt chayen ga
she took the paper & kept it away.
Nahi pada baba
she made cute concern face..mujhe tumahare charen ko padne se fursat milen tho news padon na
phir paper kyun chin rahen the?
She snorted her nose resting her head on his chest
he pulled her closer..taaki tum mujhe pe yun gir javoo
umm.. she complained..DD
she hit his chest..
the trip to London was all planned & scheduled.
Anni dropped out saying she had some impt work come out in the college.
Brij conveniently added..I could arrange for the jet for u & Daadi later on.
Geet was getting really emotional & excited. Maan was happy ..yet his heart only knew the pain it felt seeing her unseen pain...that left her bruised and ruined within.
Brij had taken care of every little thing in the jet for her, a special gynecologist traveled along with them. When they all settled in the flight.. the air hostess gave Geet the book she was reading on her way to India.. Maan was silently watching the lifestyle she was used to. If he thought his life was doomed after that incident...wat she had to face was unimaginable. She was princess in real sense.. & the day he came into her life ...he just ruined everything. When she fell a sleep...he looked at the book.. it was some romantic love story.. his heart cried.. she probably had dreams like every single girl of her dream guy.. her prince charming.. he proved only a night mare to her...a dark scared ugly truth.

Media was kept away when they landed in london. Brij.. tucked a long coat around her ..she smiled & chuckled.. there was a definite nip in the weather..she softly rubbed the side of her arms. They got off the pvt jet & boarded into the Limousin that awaited them. All the while Geets eyes had a dark fear in her eyes.. he didn'y know wat it was.. as they reached the handa palace main gate.. she firmly held his hand & inched closer like she was scared.. really scared of something.. her eyes were already filled with tears. Even brij had a similar tear ..but he was strong now.. he smiled & tried to pep her.
The drive from the main gate itself told Maan the volume of the luxury she was used to. He knew they were royal family... wat it meant in real terms..he could see it now. The garden.. didn't seem to to end on either side. As the long Limousin pulled in front of the gate..a line of servants dressed in uniform waited for their arrival.
Geet got off the car...but the fear still entrapped her..suffocated her..as they climbed the steps..she immediately held maans hand & almost stopped. He didn't understand wat was bothering her so much. He thought may be she is getting emotional of getting back home..or may be she is worried abt her mom. But he had to be by her side. He had to be there for her. Still there was so much of distance between them..he couldn't be deep in her heart & know wat bothered her so much.

yeh wohi aashiyaan hai
janha maine janam liya
ek pari ki tarah se badhi hui
saari duniya ki aisho aaraam mila
mere pairr rakhne se pehle
phoolo ka bhishona milaa

phir aisi aandhi aayee
mera yeh aashiana begana hua
kismat ne ek baar phir
mujh pe raham kiya or
mujhe janha aana mila
par kyun mere kadam ruk rahe hai
yeh kaisi bechiani hai
yeh mujhe kis galti ka sila mila
ke apni maa ko dekhne se pehle
mere dil ne mujhe aage badhne se manha kiya
jo gunaah maine kiya bhi nahin
us gunaah ne mujhe apno se hi juda kiya

by jasraj123
Geet was so scared..she didn't look anywhere..her head was down.. glued to the floor..tears filled in them.. brij finally sighed & guided them to mama's room. Geet took a deep breath & walked her every step was like she didn't want to be there..maan thought..she would be running & hugging her mom.. then why her steps fell so dead..like she didn't want to see her. She reached the door & turned her back. She closed her eyes tightly.. nahi Maan mujhe se nahi hoga..
main yeh nahi
main..
she cried brij..instantly hugged her..
Maan felt his heart heavy..
it all felt so fearful to Maan.. his heart seemed to sink into emptiness
the thought itself shuddered his soul..this was a place.. his eyes couldn't even capture the whole place. It was easily 10 times is mansion.. that he was so proud off infront of her. He felt too timid today infront of his own act..of sin. Every word he spoke came to back him.. deeper..sharper..his words her so shallow.. & meaningless.. hurting her.. shattering her..
-dreams part 39-
-PREV NEXT PART 40 -
thanks a lot for the sweet comments & likes..
muskan making baby face
mera likes & comments plz jaldi dena..
so that I could post the next part soon
love
muskan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me first again!!!!!!!!
Congrats on the new thread

Awesome update

Edited by XXXYYYZZZ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrates on new thread di...😃😃😃

hmm lv the convo of maan and geet...😉😉
maan is feeling guilty of his deeds...i hope all this disclosure doesn't leads to their seperation...
i mean maan is falling deep into the pit of guilt...🤢🤢
lvbrij the way he takes care of her each and every thing...😊😊
di r u again updating ???
oooyyyeee teri i 4got ...i m first to like and second to comment...
continue...
lv u di..
chao
Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update. love the maaneet moment but i guess it was happiness before storm. love the way brij arrange everything for geet in private jet. omg brij really kept his words and ruined her. 😡

i feel really bad for geet. poor her. she is even can't face her mom eventhough it was not her fault. i have tears in my eyes muskaan. way to go to you. i guess it was worth waiting for update.




yeh wohi aashiyaan hai
janha maine janam liya
ek pari ki tarah se badhi hui
saari duniya ki aisho aaraam mila
mere pairr rakhne se pehle
phoolo ka bhishona milaa
phir aisi aandhi aayee
mera yeh aashiana begana hua
kismat ne ek baar phir
mujh pe raham kiya or
mujhe janha aana mila
par kyun mere kadam ruk rahe hai
yeh kaisi bechiani hai
yeh mujhe kis galti ka sila mila
ke apni maa ko dekhne se pehle
mere dil ne mujhe aage badhne se manha kiya
jo gunaah maine kiya bhi nahin
us gunaah ne mujhe apno se hi juda kiya😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Edited by jasraj123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new thread
emotional update
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR NEW THREAD


loved it awesome thanks di
u update really its like ages
that i have not read it
so maan did not know anything about simran
hmm loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for new thread
Nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc part!!!luved it plz cntinue soon!!!:)
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for ur new thread🥳
Edited by nan_10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally they r in london!!
i feel bad for geet !!
she has to face everythin once again with her mom!!
loved it !!
continue soon

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