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Posted: 13 years ago
did someone say update???????/😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
pata nahi mere kaan kyu goonj rahe hai😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -memorable-

thanks sooo much 😃



congrats
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Posted: 13 years ago
@tinu
me fyn dear
how abt u???
my adrenaline level getting
high thinking abt the update only!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
diii
ashy dying...
thoda rehem karo!!!!
jaldi update dedo

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

<div></div>@tinu
me fyn dear
how abt u???
my adrenaline level getting
high thinking abt the update only!!!!!



me fine too. Well same is my condition.
Frm when this dream is started i cant sleep widout reading it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dreams
part 41

He life felt like a burden with every suffering breath. He just stood in the corner of the room quiet silent watching her in fear. Fear that ..his even looking at her could hurt her..fear that his mere presence around will impure her serenity.

he couldn't believe his eyes..she was turning restlessly in her own bed...her hand caressed the empty side of her bed.. the side where usually he sits .. tears formed her eye. Maan immediately reached her & softly caressed her hand. Maan.. she cried in her sleep.. Maan dad ne hume galat nahi samjha..she murmured
she pulled his hand closer & drifted into sleep. He sat their looking at her face..every incident played back in his mind.. his warm hand became cold with the guilt. His heart felt hollow.. he softly slipped his hand away.

She got up instantly looking for him. Maan...maan.. she called him.. rubbing the emptiness of her hand. He closed his eyes feeling miserable & left from there. Geet trembled..fumbled & followed him. He just didn't realize she was following. He went out in the garden pushed hi hair behind to fill his suffcated heart with air. Maan she cried & ran to him..the pain her voice made him clench his fist..she crushed into him & hugged him.
Aap kanha challen gayen the
she pulled him to her and crushed him in her arms. One hand wound itself into his neck while the other rested on his chest, afraid to let him go.
Main dar kayen thi..she said catching for her breath...
she chuckled I had a bad dream she whispered with a tear settled in the corner of her eyes.

He softly rested his head on hers reassuring her..main idhar hi hoon.. it was just a dream. There was a tinge of sadness in his tone.
She sighed in relief, rubbing her cheeks on his chest..making him gasp. The sadness turned to trepidation in an instant.


She softly led his hand that rested on his side to her grown stomach.. his heart felt heavy as he inhaled painfully. Invariable warmth filled his hollow heart.. he wiped his tear hiding it from her. His other hand encircled her & tucked closer. His heart missed several beats.. the sun became the moon..the coldness became warmth engulfing his soul. ..he could feel no barriers in her today.. her heart felt so much in peace..how he wished to be in sink with her. But he felt doomed in his own deeds. He didn't want anything to hurt her any further..not anymore. Not because of him atleast.

She straighten herself when they heard brij approaching them. He looked at her tears & looked at Maan. Geet immediately ' I had a bad dream.
Brij patted her cheek '
pagli
Geet '
mama kaisen hain
brij '
dr ne check kiya hain.. he said she is much better after seeing u
she smiled ..her eyes were filled with happiness..that had no end..the roses around seem to fade in front of her.


2 weeks latter when rano had completely recovered from her illness..though she still needed her wheel chair but she was much better now. Geet shied introducing Maan to her. Rano looked at awe seeing her little baby bearing a baby herself. The whole palace was filled with happiness yet again in anticipation of the little one. Since the time rano realized Geet was expecting..her recovery was super fast. Brij didn't want anything more. Maan's guilt was killing him within but he had to put up a brave face for her..more than him it would hurt her, if he showed any sort of distancing...but Geet could still feel the apprehension in him. She didn't question him.. but the kinchav was aching her in some corner.

After the dinner Geet sat in the table cutting the apple. She kept looking at Maan again & again.. & her finger slit...she screamed in pain.. brij & Maan immediately reached to her. Maan held back seeing brij.. her heart cried ..her eyes dipped in sarrow & tears rolled down more because of him not taking her close to him like he used to.

brij ..lifted her hand ' who asked u to cut apples? he yelled
He called all the servants & removed each one of them from the job..
wat the hell were u doin when u saw her taking a knife in her hand.
Brij panicked & called for the dr. at that hr.
Geet ' veerji main teehk hoon..
she tried to assure him
brij '
tu chup kar..why did u even take the knife in ur hand
the pain in brij's eyes was visible. His heart seemed to cry out..seeing her bleed.
Brij paced restlessly '
oh god..iss halat main cut gaya, kitna khoon behraha hain
Geet rolled her eyes
rano knew he was always like this with his baby sister..khud pata nahi gussen main kitna zorki mar denge..lekin koi chot lagjayen tho..he won't be able to bare it.
After the dr left Maan came in.
Geet smiled ' veerji aisen hi karten hain humesha
rano send haldi wala milk for her. Uff dehko na Maan she cribbed.

He just crossed his arm & watched her. The way she was treated just like a princess by every one. They were strict, disciplined but their hearts were filled with love. sab ki ankoon ka tara.


Geet couldn't go out with her pregnancy since her marriage was not officially declared or made a formal announcement. Brij knew it will become the talk of the town if it was put in the wrong way. But restricting Geet & maans movement was also not right. Brij requested Maan if they could have a small registered marriage in London before he could officially introduce them to their near & dear ones. He was so careful in putting forward the view. He didn't want to any way intend that they were not married. Maan remained quiet through out the discussion. He silently accepted every thing & went back to his room. Geet sensed his hesitation. Before she could follow him,..rano requested Geet to call Daadi & anni for the wedding registration. Brij didn't want anni to come. He knew that will only complicate things. But he didn't know how to avoid her now.

-dreams part 41-

-PREV PART 40 NEXT PART 42-

thanks a lot for the sweet comments & likes..
muskan making baby face for more
mera likes & comments plz jaldi dena..
love
muskan


Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting waiting
omg omg i just post for waiting and just landed under the update. me faint. yeh kaise ho gayaaa. kudrat ka krishma woh bhi mere saath. 😆😆😆
for update will write after i read. i am sooo excited that couldn't wait to comment this.😆


now update is awesome as usual. omg maan is still in deep pain because of his mistake. my heart cries for him nowww. muskaan do something for him yaar. i can't see him in this regreting and painfull any more. he loves geet and baby sooo much. he is doing every thing but still doesn't have peace at heart😭😭😭😭😭😭. love the way family is treating geet as princess and now they r officially going to get marry.

thanks for lovely update and pls continue
Edited by jasraj123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow , me 2nd . Thats reli cool.coming to update
loved brij's care when geet cuts her finger.oh me crying seeing maan's heart crying.oh i so want to see him happy wid geet . I hope geet shld comfort him sooner.
Love u 4 wonderful update di
Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me 3rd????😭
not fair...not fair!!!!😭

n e ways now cuming to the update!!!
fabulous update di...
luvd it soo much!!!!
the whole handa haveli is
rejoicing with
the comeback of geet and the new born also!!!😳

but i am scared of maan...
he is slipping into darkness...
a very lonely and painful darkness...
a strong feel of guilt is
eating him within!!!!

geet has started loving him so much!!!!

but really i want maan to be happy too!!!
geet is the only one who can
save him from slipping into the dark ditch of guilt

or else it might get too late!!!

continue super soon di!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks alot 4 the lovly update muskan... Simply u r the best my dear... 😊 👏 😃
Edited by Parrimuskan - 13 years ago

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