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Posted: 13 years ago
Refreshing page from cell to read
though it is so tough
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Posted: 13 years ago
Still waiting for the next part...!!!

jaldi karo di...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111



Dear m trying hard to write but it seems my fingers refuse to type nd my mind refuse to think nd concentrate but still m trying. m telling u dis Muski will definately kill me one day wid her suspenses nd u guys will be d witness of it😆



the way she is making our heart rate super fast. woh din door nahin hai. she really knows how to make her readers heart beat super fast and make them die of anxiety.😆😆😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111



Dear m trying hard to write but it seems my fingers refuse to type nd my mind refuse to think nd concentrate but still m trying. m telling u dis Muski will definately kill me one day wid her suspenses nd u guys will be d witness of it😆


don't say that yaar 🤢🤢
u r too precious to be lost 😊😊
so start writing 😉😉
so that i can be in peace 😆😆
that i 'll get two updates 😳😳
one from muski
and another from you 🥳
soon 😳😳
hehhe 😆😆
evil me 😈😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohhh di i m going mad. plzzz na update soon😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: libra25



har marz ki dawa..
muski ka update..
muski doctor jaldi dawa do..
to sabki tabiyatt theek ho..



Totally Agree Dear. Chalo sab Dil se Muski ko Awaaz Do. she'll definately update soon MUSKI KAHA HO TUM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting waiting😭😭😭🤢🤢🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mons_bhatia


don't say that yaar 🤢🤢
u r too precious to be lost 😊😊
so start writing 😉😉
so that i can be in peace 😆😆
that i 'll get two updates 😳😳
one from muski
and another from you 🥳
soon 😳😳
hehhe 😆😆
evil me 😈😈



OMG m totally flattered nw. ab to mujhe sach me Heart Attack aa jayega😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 43

Maan struggled with huge 6ft 4'' guards while.. the door shut closed infront of his eyes with his sister being dragged like a rug & thrown to the floor..geet ran behind him..& banged the door. She shouted yelled..screamed.. with all the energy she could.. last they heard anni scream...out in pain & horror

brij held her hair & pushed her on the dresser..she looked at him brij with her forehead bleeding ..yeh tum kya kar rahen ho..she questioned him looking striaght into his eyes.. she respected him for wat ever little relation they shared..from that she knew he had a very bad temper..thats it. She had no reason to believe he will stoop low...but his actions where intimidating
how the hell do I know.. he screamed...pulling away her duppata
he punched the mirror in anger ...she jumped back & screamed in horror.
She reached to sooth his bleeding hand .

don't u dare touch me.. he roared spitting fire.
Main chatha hoon tho tumharen saat..
he sighed away in disgust...
he smashed the mirror again & again..
main chake bhi tumharen bhai ki tarah neechen gir nahi sakta
she stood frozen with her head dipped..feeling ashamed of wat Maan did. She simply cried..with her shoulders shaking her hands clutched closed to her...she sunk on the floor; her kurti stuck at the dresser handle & tore...she cramped up closer..holding her knees to herself
brij threw her dupata at her...that was soaked in his blood
she cried...I am sorry
he punched the mirror yet again..smashing the cracked tiny pieces.
Kya galthi thi meri behan ki
anni sobbed painfully
how could he.. he hit his hand in anger ...bleeding & the flesh messed
why was I not there to protect her...he howled


Maan managed to fight with those guys & break each one down.. before ..he pushed open the huge door. Geets eyes was terrified ..re living the horrible moment..seeing anni cramped up in the corner..her duppata soaked in blood. Maan punched brij on his face...he lifted his other hand to ..
how could u..he screamed
anni meakly
I wish he could stoop as low as u did...mera dil main yeh bohj nahi rahata ki main tumahri bahen hoon
Maan released his collar instantly & fell on the floor as brij smashed his face...the instant from the time he realized something could happen to anni .. until then he died helpless 100 million deaths. Every passing sec was dreadful & miserable...he looked at Geet who actually had to live that fear. His remorse..of past 7months stood nil infront the her pain.
Geet fell on the floor hitting her stomach.. in the pool of blood.
Brij & anni rushed to her & took her to the hospital.
The guards dragged Maan & threw him out of the palace.

Daadi & rano were shocked when brij called them at the registrar's office to rush to the hospital.
Brij had strictly instructed to keep Maan off limits. Maan reached the hospital. Anni refused to even look at him.

Brij warned him ' agar meri behan ko kuch huwa na I will u with my bare hands.
Maan craved to get one glimpse of his life. He didn't care wat any one said..all mattered was his life & the life within.
Rano was really disturbed. All of them just in a state of big shock.


Maan numbly watched threw the window as the drs spoke to brij. He signed few papers.. Maan was getting impertinent & worried he lost all his endurance & finally barged in..he held drs collar & asked I want my wife & child safe. U do wat ever it takes.
Dr sadly dipped his head ' we r doing our best.
We need to go in for an immediate c-section.
Maan '
lekin abhi tho baby sirf 27weeks ka hain..it will be hardly 12inches long. & 1.1kg
dr exhaled tapping his shoulder ' we don't have any other option. We can't promise anything now.


The whole c-section took more than an hr. can't even express wat he went through. Every passing sec killed him...with the fear..all he hoped..agar kuch hona hain..mujhe hojayen..meri..geet ko aur baby ko kuch na ho..babaji.. The place out side the operation theater was heart-wrenching. Everyone closely, helplessly waiting unsure & unaware..uncertainty. Every min passed in a tedious..slow motion calm. The whole atmosphere seem to conspire with worrisome circumstances that made peace, positivity impossible.

When the dr came out..maan ran to him..with the thin ray of hope he held on to all the while.. as dr approached Maan spotted a pleasant smile on her face..ran towards her.. taking a giant breath and exhaled in relief. He cried as dr said
its a boy
Brij & Maan immediately asked
aur Geet
brij hated Maan even uttering his sisters name from his mouth.
Dr '
she is also fine. They will bring her after an hr.
Baby is hardly 2pounds & very week we have kept him in the incubator. U can see him
Maan ran to the baby's ward to see their love..her soul.. he was just like his princess.. a pinkish white ball.. could probably easily fit in his palm. He watched him in awe from the glassed window. A tear escaped his eye. The dream they had seen together..their love.. newborn trust & love.

PLEASE SUGGEST NAME FOR THIS CUTY

-dreams part 43-

thanks a lot nandu for the dreams poster..sweeties plz do let me know how u feel abt it

-PREV PART 42 NEXT PART 44-

thanks a lot for the sweet comments & likes..
muskan making baby face
mera likes & comments plz jaldi dena..
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👍🏼 yayy me first


oh diii its really touching part.
i m so much crying after this 😭.
really di , i felt proud for brij for not doing anything to annie..
ohhh our maaneet have a swee little boy.👏
i love their love,their dream, their child.🤗

muaaah😳 love u muski di for it.🤗

me happy happy with this update.
thank you sooo much diii.

Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago

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