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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lively-piia

ooyyee teri...lucky u...

geet ke babaji really saved u...

Yeah or may be ur prayer😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Yeah or may be ur prayer😉

may be...lol😆😉😆😉
hey tell me one thing m i in ur buddy list...if nt add me...
lv to hv u as my buddy...wat say????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lively-piia

may be...lol😆😉😆😉

hey tell me one thing m i in ur buddy list...if nt add me...
lv to hv u as my buddy...wat say????

Sure sweetheart
Where is kawaai
Is she stil busy in FT updating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dreams
part 44


Maan ran to the baby's ward to see their love..her soul.. he was just like his princess.. a pinkish white ball.. could probably easily fit in his palm. He watched him in awe from the window. A tear escaped his eye. The dream they had seen together..their love.. newborn trust & love.

Dear Lord,
I feel burdened, burdened under the weight of your divine blessings
You seem to continuously shower me with your celestial blessings
I do not even come close in deserving these blessings my dear Lord
I feel that a mistake, a mistake has been made in your Kingdom
I only belong in the Kingdom of Hell from where there is no turning back
Whereas you have let me live by bringing me through the Gates of Heaven
Dear Lord,
How can you be so merciful upon me after all the deeds I have done?
After all the sins I have committed, after all the hearts I have pierced with my own hands?
I beg you, do not spare me, I plead to you, because I do not deserve forgiveness
Yet, you continue to shower me with your blessings.. over and over again.
You brought an angel, a heavenly angel in my life
She encircled my life with her love, respect and kindness
Her heart as big as the vast ocean, engulfed my unspeakable crimes within her soul
She gave me her love, her care and her concern ..unconditionally
She forgave me for my sins and my crimes
You gave me a second life within my angel
A life that has a part of me and a part of her
A life that is so pure as her, yet tainted with the sins of mine
Today her and our child were on the verge of breathing their last breaths
Yet, you continued to shower me with your blessings by keeping them alive.
They are embedded in my life, in my veins and in my soul.
And, I cannot live without them at all.
Dear Lord,
What should I do? I do not deserve to live and yet I cannot leave them alone in this world
Lord, I beg for redemption bowing my head in thy feet while lying on my knees
Lord, is there any chance for me? Any at all?
I head is leaning with the weight of guilt and shame
Lord, is there any chance for me? Any at all?
For salvation!

My eyes close, waiting for your response
My heart beats slow waiting for your response
My breath comes out in gasps waiting for your response
I see white lights in front of me waiting for your response
My Geet and my child seem hazy waiting for your response
Lord, is there any chance for me? Any at all?
For salvation!


love rachna


Maans steps froze at the door step of geet's ward when he heard her scream the moment she came in senses...mama ..plz..mama.hume India nahi jana
his heart broke into million pieces..all the happiness he felt seeing their loved one just vanished engulfing him in coldness of fear..the fear of losing his life.

Brij immediately came close to her & held her hand..veerji dad ko kaho na mujhe India nahi bejengen...plz...veerji..dad ko kaho na...
brij ' lekin dad tho..
before could complete his sentence she fell unconscious again
the dr rushed to check her..while brij shot a stern look to Maan & then enquired with the dr why she spoke abt dad & going to India.

Maan 's whole world seem to fall apart. Their little baby in the incubator.. drs r continuously monitoring him. while Geets condition also didn't seem to stable..he found it impossible to compose himself..with no one..just no one beside him except the remorse.

Dr ran few tests on Geet & confirmed she was all fine..nothing to worry at all. For some reason nothing seem to console his heart. He was tore apart with his lives being in heart-wrenching situation. He spend few mins looking at Geet threw the glassed window & then few mins watching the baby.. his eyes longed to see them together in his arms. Why was that his pain didn't seem to end.


Geet woke up again she was calmer this time.. Maan stood near the door wanting to sweep her in his arm & keep her for ever with him. Last few hrs he has realized..how it would feel to see his whole world comming crashing down infront of ur eyes..how it devastates, demolishes, devours..every thing u ever cared for..rising hell that ends in naught.


Geet held brij hand 'veerji aap ne dad se baat ki
brij looked puzzled wondering why was she again & again talking abt dad.
Dr came in suggested her to relax.. even refrain maan from talking to her..until she felt better.

every one was taken a back she didn't even once ask abt the baby.
Brij spoke to the sr drs expressing his concern.
Dr came in for a counseling section. They were taken a back.
Dr smiled weakly & put her to sleep. She came to have a word with brij & Maan.
Dr ' did she face a emotional trauma back in india
brij short an agonized look to Maan.
Brij ' she actually never wanted to go there..how I wish she never did
brij still didn't want to say anything that would led down her name.
Dr sighs
well I guess Geet is suffering from Repressed memory.
Both Maan & brij look lost there.
Dr ' in simple words..Dissociative amnesia
brij ' but why..how come..she didn't have any head injury or something
dr '
no no ..this more from a psychological cause
the patient is not able to recall information, usually about stressful or traumatic events in persons' lives, such as a violent attack or rape.

The rape word itself..tore Maan apart...
brij clinched his fist.
Dr -
The memory is stored in long term memory, but access to it is impaired because of psychological defense mechanisms.
For Maan everything went numb, grey dull, he felt nothing..like an extended period of true blanks in his mind. He no longer felt sad or happy ..nor anxious..just felt nothing..nothing at all. He sat in the chair thoughtless the whole time just staring ..the reality stuck...like waking him up without any personality.
Brij '
but she remembers dad
dr '
she remembers everything until she got her result..I think after that she doesn't seem to know anything.. she was excited she got her result ..but very terrified that she is going to be send to India.
Brij ' kya hume ussen beten baaten yaad nahi dila sakten
dr '
nahi bilkul nahi, it will stress her more ...see it is a psychological defense mechanisms. ..so it could completely shut her down also.
Abhi bhi who aapne stiches ko lekin painc hone lagi thi.. we just said it is some accident.
Maan lifelessly walked to the baby's ward & looked at the little life blankly. '

Its been a week now..the baby was still in the incubator..fighting for to live in this worthless world. Maan spend the whole day & night here..only watching it..after brij.. took Geet away ..maan would have gone to any extend to get his Geet back..but it was not safe for her..


brij was ready to take the baby with him & keep him as his son & cook up some story..as it would have be not advicable to let Geet know anything..anything at all..that happened to her in last 7months..even her dads death was not yet revealed to her.

Brij let the baby with Maan.. saying..at least let him get one of his parents love. Maan kept looking at the little life..did he have to pay for his deeds..wat wrong did he do...just that he was his son..how could god be so cruel to this angelic creation of his own.

Hain faby..kept my promise!!!..
Thanks a lot for all the support & love
me still cribbing..mera likes kanha hain..GRR
now lets see wat do we have in store for maaneet dreams
plz..plz.. comment & like
muskan waiting
love u lots
uuma

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting di...😊


...edited...
Yayy Me first..😊
nice update di...
I feel sorry for both maan and geet...😭
Dont know how maan will survive without geet...
Thanks to brij atleast he gave baby to maan...or else maan couldnot be able to handle the separation from both geet and baby...😭😭
Continue soon di...
Edited by Prettierpreeti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
She forgot everythingthe wholae 7 months of india, Maan and her babynow there is no one beside Maanto console him, to listen his remorse n guilt Brij took his princess away from him...
What will he do nowhe already suffered alot MUSKAN DI ese bhiyanak twist ap k dimagh mein kahan se ate haan...
Glad that brij didnt take the baby with him now atleast Maan has a hope to live...
DI u r the only one who can give us Shocks and the treatment of the shocks tooJaldi se es shock ka treatment bhi kar do please

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it is so sad update
your giving us jorka zatka in every update of yours 🤢
bechara maan 😭
in serial Geet maan lost his memory and here in dreams you made geet suffer from memory lost😆
btw from where you get so many disease information
waiting patiently for dreams come true but don't make it more harsh 😉
can geet remember moments she spend with maan
waiting for next step of yours 😍

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Sure sweetheart
Where is kawaai
Is she stil busy in FT updating

wohi toh...it's past two hours she put dat updating tag...
i just went to ft thread and asked her to update dat quickly or join us here...😡😡😡
hadd hai...we r partner in crimes...i mean in waiting...rite na...
@ muski di...kahan ho yaar????
nahi toh apka thread humari baatao main hi apam ho jayega...
jaldi karo na...
pretty plzzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
DiHow culd u seprate them
Geet dosent remember her baby
The baby for whom she accepted Maan
Its al so mess
Why so painful
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG! Wowww.. What a twist . . Loving it .. I hope Maan will be successful this time to find a place in Geet's heart and begin everything all over again .. Cant wait for the upcoming updates. .
Continue soon Di ..

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