New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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heena mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

So sorry to keep you awake... i rewrite the pool scene 3 times cause I didn't like it at first thats why late ho gayi 🥱 😕

gosh i m totally dead, dat was outstanding. pool scene was amazing , ..finished reading it, wanna comment nw, bt wl do it tomorrow wid whole detailing😉, coz my eyes r nt supporting me nw......bye luv u hun

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

RES!!!WILL READ LATER AND WILL COMMENT LATER..BY D WAY HEER(ADDITI)IS ENTRYING THIS FF JUST SAW HER N ARYAN(HARSHAD,PREM)WEDDINGS'S PIC..

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Awesome update! I'm so glad Abhay saved and healed Piya! I felt really bad that Piya plans to leave Abhay and Aryan soon! I'm glad that Piya is a self-respecting individual who doesn't want to rely on anyone but her not living in that house would make their house empty and Abhay and Aryan's lives would be lonely again! I felt sorry for Aryan, poor guy is still in love with his wife despite her leaving him! And Abhay is so sweet to have bought Piya's property back for her! I hope somehow Abhay and Aryan stop Piya from leaving the house! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

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srija

@-srija-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Wow tanzie its awsome.abhay himself dnt want to let piya go...aryan is married bt c left...aww...feeling sad 4 him.abhay has got feelings 4 piya thats gr8 n nw they know deepanita is a werewolf.its superb dear.it has become one of my fav ff.continue soon.
With love
srija.

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

wow really nice update. love the way abhay is losing himself😉

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#456

Awesome Update!!!⭐️⭐️
I hate Dipannita🤢, she treats Alina like dirt...she should get the same treatment!😡. Pia-Aryan's convo was nice 😊and i think Abhay won't let her go.Oh so Aryan is a married man.😲Feeling bad for Aryan, Peehu left him.😔Abhay cares a lot about her😊 .Loved Aryan's dialogue" I'm at a party hosted by Prabeen Jaiswal. I just met his business partner. A woman who seemed to have used all lipsticks available in Manali😆🤣 and she's a werewolf!! Will give info soon". Continue soon. I enjoy reading this FF of yours😊.Good Luck!👍🏼 and thanks a lot for PM.😃

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Selina

@Selinapiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Wow..
Abhay and Piya part was Amazing...😍Abhay changed Piya's wet clothes...☺️
A woman who seemed to have used all lipsticks available in Manali
🤣🤣
update soon...👏🤗
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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#458

awesome update tanzie!!!!!!👏

really liked that abhay didnt want pia to leave him n go away... & i specially last line whr aryan says the lady has used all the lipstick available in manali🤣... that was superb dear!!!!

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#459

Tanzie wonderful update loved aryan caring fo pia and their convo it was cute dipu kab frame me enter hui ? And yes start their love track soon thanx for pm