New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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Posted: 14 years ago

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heena mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

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i m here😊

dat was something reli wonderful n magnetic👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️

starting frm d very start, deepanita is big blot on d name of a mother😡😡😡

nw coming to d rest of d update, starting frm aryan pia convo- so pia found out a way to move, bad, bt i knw " inne sone mondaan nu chad ke kithe jayegi"(ok dat was in punjabi let me translate, where she wl go leaving behind two handsome hunks😆😆) n above dat abhay nahi jane dega n i just love pia-aryan's bond, a beautiful frndship,a frndship everyone wish to av!!! 😳😳😳

nw i would like to tel u something "related to our connection"- u knw yesterday i was watching kis desh mein hai mera dil episode where prem pulled heer in dat hotel room n dat song o re piya n when i read ur update, my jaw got dropped, i was like wat, cn u read my mind???😲😲

oh!!! i felt reli bad for aryan, she left him😭😭😭, don't knw how to judge her at present??😕

bt i liked d description of his royality n richness through d description of his laptops😉😉

this pia is nt so vulenrable, she knws very well how to answer ,beechara abhay😆 aur aryan to in dono ke baach me pis jayega😆

n ok nw coming back to evening part, so abhay brought pia's property, wowww, prabeen n deepanita, get to ready for ur dimse!!🤢🤢

now wat to say should i b happy dat pia fell in d swimming pool or should b sad😆😆. bt i think i m happy (ofcourse nt on human grounds), bt agar wo nahi garti to abhay use bachta kaise. wo bhi itni hotness ke sath (full to besharmai). bt dat scene was beautifully written, d best part it was too natural, d feel was tryly beautiful!!!

damn good hun!! rocking!!!

luv u loadsss n a big hug to u 🤗

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wow tanzie wht an update I so loved it dear.1st lke Pia evn I m shocked tht aryan was married.Oh applause 2 dis guy he is a sufferer himself but never showed & now comes 2 our Abhiya.God Pia literally killed Abhay wid her rude words.But tht was nice 2 c Abhay was sad jst coz Pia cried & not coz he was scolded😛.I love tht pool scene.Abhay lost his control but pagal har baar control kar leta hai.It was so romantic of Abhay healing Pia's broken bones😳.In all awesome

Luv u🤗

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I love it yaar...my two besties back in competition... 🤣 🤣

BTW, its not over... plz dont read now 😛

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
I love it yaar...my two besties back in competition... 🤣 🤣
BTW, its not over... plz dont read now 😛

I already read I was not able 2 control myself ahahha😆😆

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heena mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
I already read I was not able 2 control myself ahahha😆😆

maine bhi padh liya, couldn't control myself😆😆 , plsss post d nxt half, dying to read it yaar

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Abhay changed Piya's dress!!!!!!!!! 😳
Abhay was feeling Piya's skin!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳
Piya was also feeling something!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

U r soon going to be da 'Best Romance-Writer',m telling u!!! 😉 👏

Edited by ANTARA-2244 - 14 years ago