New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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suhani

@abhilover123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

hi... 😊 i 'm new here.i just read ur ff. it's wonderful,superb, beautifully written, amazing.waiting 4 nxt update. tc 😳

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#472

awesome part yaar, mast update, i liked it so much, nice written yaar no words to describe

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#473

tanzie...super update...just loved it..

aryan is married...and his wife is peehu...😆...finally u used my name...i was wondering where were you gonna use it...😆...peehu ko bhaga diya...😆...well aryan married was shocker to me...but good..atleast he is not falling for pia...

thoda..wet wet u used...swimming pool...ausum..abhay shirtless...and pia was enjoying when abhay was heeling her back...kya kare pia ka 😆

abhay is falling for pia...ausum...

and ur last line...for dipu...really cracked me up...🤣..

but for ur update...it was fab and ausum...i just loved it...continue soon...and thanks for pm...

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#474

its awesome Abhay is slowly loosing himself. thanks for pm update soon.

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shafaq

@shafaq_abhiya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#475

lovely yaar it was really good nd specially the last part aryan texts to abhay abt deepu it was mindblowing 🤣

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#476

woh gr8 tanzie... loved abhay concern about pia... n how abhay saved pia... i liked it all... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...

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Pallavi Sarkar

@pallavisarkar

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#477

thnx for d pm dr

loved it confused n hurt piya caring n angry abhay n frndly n hurt aryan

do cont soon 👏👏

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D.O_Xing

@D.O_Xing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

That was a fab chappy Tanzy...👏

Did a great work...👍🏼

So finally there's something Dipanita's is scared of...🤔 Alina's unknown powers.. 😃Lets see what Dipu aunty faces cause of Alina... 😆

Loved the Aryan and Piya's friendship... 😃They both rock together for sure...🥳 Felt sad for Aryan and his long lost love...😭 The dialogue by Aryan "A woman who seemed to have used all lipsticks available in Manali" funniest dialogue ever heard... Cracked me up...🤣

Woah!! 😲Piya throws the insults on the face of Abhay... Just to make him realize?? 😕Well atleast Abhay got to know more better ki kisse uska paala pada hai...🤣 Felt really bad for both of them though...😭 Loved the caring of Abhay..The way he made her alright...😳 Our very own physician Dr.Abhay Raichand...😆Multi talented guy...😍 Is there anything he doesn't know how to fix or do the work..🤣 Loving their blooming romance...😳Now I'm waiting for the time when Abhay makes Prabeen pay for his sins..😡

Now you update real soon this time coz you didn'y even gave the next chappy's name...And I'm wondering what are the interesting twists are coming up...😍

Thanks for the pm..😊

Lots of love...🤗

Edited by 1301Princess - 13 years ago