New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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Raybika or u can call reeyana too

@Reeyana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#461

very good update.
i am really enjoying this FF ... plz cont soon

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purple_shadoz

@purple_shadoz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#462

chalo...finally m bk...😉as usual a rockng updt...👏pia planng to leave????? i gs dts nt happening...😕abhay...god...hes too much...😳i lv d way pia throws hs attitude bk on hs face...😆awww...so abhy dsnt want hr to leave????...cho chweet...😛aryan marriec???????😲 ok...dt ws 'unexpctd'...😆i gs dr s more to cm bt peehu...n pia...c s sch a magnet 4 danger...gosh...😲acha hai...kam se kam abhay isi bahaane uske paas to ata hai...😉gosh abhay changng pia's drs...☺️bt y ddnt u gv d dtails?????...😈🤣 abhay hs alrady strtd avng a soft cornr 4 pia...acha hai...😉so pia gts hs famous healng therapy...lucky grl...😆 abhay hs broght pia's proprty????? gud...nw i gs pabeen deepu ke antoim din nazdeek hai...😡 i hope abhay gvs dm wt de dsrv...aryan s such a sweet frnd...😳n alina?????i gs c wl b upto smthng nw...😲 do cont soon...lv u loacsss...🤗

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#463

Oh wonderful Abhay had it coming from Pia. He plays these mind games which is kinf of torture for everyone. So its good he got a taste of it too. So now he has brought all the property of Pias so what is he going to do. And a warewolf is in picture too so what is the vampire going to do about that.

The first part was really good and would love to see such moments were Pia shows Abhay his place. Though towards the end the poor girl was so confused.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#464

WOW...beautiful update tanzie 👏

ariyan-pia bond is really sweet...and that part...ariyan saying...pia has guts...offcourse she does...its only pia who can handle our attitudebazz abhay 😆
oops aryan married...thts surprising 😲 so is pihu's chap going to b introducd ??

humm...so abhay bought pia's property back...so sweet😳...thts y he is abhay.

then pia unconcious in the pool and abhay saving her...mouth to mouth...aww...☺️ ye abhay bhi na kabhi bazz nahi ayega ...always ready to kiss pia...😆

pia in abhay's bedroom...abhay changing pia's clothes...pia's face turning pink...☺️.aww...so romantic 😍 and abhay thinking...she is almost dying and evn in this situation she is worried abt ...ohh abhay this is the beginning dear...pia gets totally insane when it comes to u...😆 and dear u have wrote this part so well...i cud visualize the whole thing while reading...great work 👍🏼

p.s. omg what was tht tanzie...dipu used all lipsticks of manali...🤣 that was too hillarious 🤣

a/w update soon dear...waiting fr more abhiya romance...😉

t.c. love u...🤗

-indu

Edited by lost_in_love - 14 years ago

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 14 years ago

#465

awesome update
haoppy to hear that abhay is falling bad for pia
so aryan is married shocked to hear that
if he loves his wife still it means he will treat pia as just his friend
all abhiya scenes were fab especially when pia confronted him
thanks for pm and please update soon dying to read more

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#466

Wow Tanzie.. Really nice update!! Love it.. Loved Pia's question for Abhay.. Multiple personality disorder 😆.. I laughed hard..

Aryan's part - He's really soft!! He's married but his wife didn't accompany him.. So sad for him!! But still he manages to be happy!!

Abhay concern for Pia.. He got all the lands from Parbeen.. His reluctance to change Pia's dress😳 it was kind of cute.. God, Pia is full of questions all the time!!

Aryan's msg to Abhay regarding Dipanita - Using all available lipsticks, really good yaar..

Thanks for the PM.. Continue soon!!