It should have been you(ArSH/AR/DMG3 FF) Updtpg148 - Page 14

Originally posted by: sacred shrine

i loved the simplicity and practicality u have put in terms of the emotions of arsh...its really easy to relate as there isnt any trace of drama in it..all emotions are undramatic!!!great job!!!

Originally posted by: -Heart-Hacker-

firstly im actually really sory for not being able to comment properly! school is killing me :| and OH MY GOD!

This FF is just so f**kin perfect! i dont even remember, reading a better one than this! it has everything! id fallen so irrevocably, from the very first sentence you had written down! this has to be one of the best, ah no The BEST one! i love everything bout it, and duhh wait so eagerly for your updates woman!

Can i miss KaSh and ArSh more than i already do?! Youd actually brought the most most AMAZING thing out of a couple so many people seemed had nothing to go on for! it is so real! for once you dont feel something like straight out of fiction! Armaan's feelings, dilemnas everything is so damn real. Couldnt DMG go this way?! i miss them more and more now! everytime you update, there is this very different undefnable beauty and the most deepest of emotions that link them together, that is suddly reflected so amazingly through each word, nd scene that go by!

I dont even know how to thank you for this! How you had described the most beautiful element ArSh had an undiscovered, yet deep bonding between them, their friendship, and i absolutely love Shilpa! To me, she had been the best character DMG ever had! Given away all she had, for, and to the one man she loved without any demands, needs, commitments, and so madly that one cannot even trace a legendry tale like theirs!

You had gotten the best best best out of ArSh! this ff is dripping wet ArSh! And I so love you for that! the way youre taking it, i cant even describe your brilliance and hold over it! its beautiful, noh actually its far better than beautiful!

Holy Shih, im trying from so long and still im not able to explain my love and gratitude! guhh me! this ff and each word you write is lovely. No doubt you are an amazing amazing writer! and theres so much hidden and unrevealed yet shining through your words, its all KaSh, and the beauty, the undefinable relation that they had! DMG had always had the best thing as ArSh. ive always believed their story would have been one of the best ever, but alas ruined it was!

and youve pulled it up from the same sensitive, and important string, and your commendably genius at what you do, and the way this story is proceeding!

I love the speed alot! the friendship, slow realisations of the depth of nothing but what they have and what connect them, their sweet talks, how they make each other smile! how armaan was determined to take her back, and the emotional bonding, the moment he let his heart come out every damn thing is BEAUTIFUL! you leave me speechless! :P

Arman still loves Riddhima - paagal larka :PP LOL tehe! and ofcourse it hurts him, poor lover, but i simply adore adore adore the scene when SA came in and then she at once realised what he was feeling and when she said about how he couldnt hide his pain, GOD I LOVE THAT PART! it has to be the most beautiful interaction uptil now! their bond is so charasmatic! i still dont believe how could people not love them, not love her! :P

Oh fire escape! aha hes confused! i simply love how strong Shilpa is, and how strong her love is!

Thankyou so so so much for this FF! i cant even thank you enough! oh y werent you the writer of DMG? theyd had gotten high trps im sure about that!

Update really very soon! :P and i love how the story is proceeding! cant wait to read more, and did i ever tell you, your update brings tears to my eyes? Only because the way it is being taken by you! it reminds me of her eyes, their eyes, when she was leaving and she had said

''Il miss you Armaan Malik'' that strong is the power of your writing! i love them more and more, and im so proud to love angels like them! <33

love you

Rida

OMG that was awesome!

simply amazing...simple...sweet...

n awsum..

loved it yaar...

thnx for the pm,...