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supriya91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: arsh4life
hey
js awseome
i js dn understand y armaan is nt acceptin dat he is slowly slowly fallin fr shilpa
rather dan dat he is js thinkin y he is here wd shilpa n al
n ryt he deserves scoldin frm shilpa
he is js lk a gal luvd d way shilpa toked to him
he is real basanti
bt i knw nw shilpa is goin wd him dats gonna b d turnin point
where armaan wil accept his feelings fr her
oh js gettin excited fr dat
dn knw wen ull make dat
bt make it in such way dat we'l remember it fr long n cn even use dat type of way in r one of d ff's
thnx fr d pm
cont soon

Hey!

he is basanti😆😆 Awww I know it is a bit slow paced track, but see I felt that he is still so much in love with Riddhima, that I feel its only fair to let him take the time that's probably needed to get over her. Par fikar not, I promise to make it happen!

p.s. LOVED your writing as well, keep it up!

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supriya91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: krazy4kash
that was an absolutely spectacular part

i could totally feel the intensity b/w them ...it was amazing

update soon

thx 4 d pm

luv
kj

thank you kj!!

Awesome, intensity is what I was going for, rather "kashtensity" 😆😆

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supriya91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: _Afrin_
this was the best part so far...absolutely amazing...
now i m in totally in luv with this ff...u know i m always eager to read ffs on ArSh which r continuation of DMG...ur ff is one of those and on the top of it u r writing it brilliantly...
I so loved this part...I loved how Shilpa doesnt want to show her weakness to Arman...its so Shilpa Malhotra of DMG...it reminded me the ArSh fire-escape scene...
and then ArSh confrontation was explained beautifully...Arman's helplessness, his guilt, and Shilpa's unconditional love...even though she is dying within still she is ready to help Arman...
loved every bit of the part...
cont soon...and btw the part wasnt long at all...try to write longer part...😉

if you keep being as generous as you are with compliments I'll keep writing even longer parts! Seriously thanks for these lovely compliments! you know that was my biggest issue with DMG, the fact that Shilpa changed from being "Shilpa Malhotra" I LOVED that strong headed Shilpa, and I am beyond happy that reading this you felt I got a bit of the character! Thank you so much!!!!

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supriya91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice part
continue soon

thank you!! 😃

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malose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

grat update i relay cod fel the boths filings and the gilt arman filing and the love shipla have for arman and the looniness arman filing and that shipla fils that his more importune than here love for him and she shod sport him that hi can move on his life even she knows its gonna be difficult for her

thanks for the pm

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moonlight2630

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

hey nice update love shilpa she is so understanding n supportive truly friend she is an angel thanks 4 pm.

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fri42911

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

brillantly written!!!

you have showed their emotions beautifully.

finally armaan was able to convince shilpa to come with him.

waiting for next chapter.

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Pritha Das

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Awesome update..
I'm loving Shilpa's character..she is so understanding..
Finally Shilpa decided to go back with Armaan..that's nice..
Arghhh..when will Armaan get over that girl??
Do continue soon.. 😊