MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 75

welcome back... it was a dhamakadaar come back...

my heartbeat increased after reading this part.. if i gt a heart attack u n only u wl b responsible.. [in devdutt's style]🤣

nt gonna say much abt this part but i shud mention d part "Krishna was inside her" loved it how u compared Draupadi's state with Geet's..

porer baar plzz taratari update dis...😳

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Hi sayanee finally edited my post
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and this one also

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wowww hugs for ur long comments .. I love them .. wl reply tom

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

wowww hugs for ur long comments .. I love them .. wl reply tom

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

First sorry sorry for late comments
as u know the reason

Yes me know the reason .. dats y no shikayat to u 😉

ok now coming to the update
awesome , beautiful, mind blowing,out standing, romantic part
loved it
loved maaneet moments
they r lost in their love and passion where only maaneet and their love exist nothing else matters
their separation made them longed, craved for each other and they so much drowning in their love

😳❤️😳

now come to devdut
don't know what adjective should I use for this spineless creature
the more I read and the more I hate him
I really don't know how can this man stoop so low
really love can take u in paradise and love can take u also in hell
Love can make u Man who can respect and loved his lover and love can make u sinner who only know snatched the happiness
love can make u selfless and love can make u selfish
like here Devdut a sinner , selfish who only thinks about himself
it's not love
it's obsession
his love became his obsession and he is become mad
pyaar pagalpan hain toh jarur
lekin pagalpan jisse tumahre ashiq ko tabha na kare but jab ohi pagalpan pyaar ko tabha kar de tab oh khatarnak ban jata hain

actually love is an emotion .. n no matter how an emotion is strong it must be controlled by man .. if man gets controlled by his emotion it can be fatal for him n others .. Devdutt's love has become his controlling power thus he is getting obsessed with it ..

dev is evil now
dev's obsession will destroy only
Loved the way u compared geet's love make maan rise where dev's love or so called obsession make him fall
loved the way u compare the situation with lamp and the shadow beneath the lamp
it's perfect totally
loved another thing about man and women ,
yes generally man didn't cry and suppressed everything
like devdut didn't cry but make this thing as revenge of his

"prodeeper niche andhokar" ds Bengali phrase made me think .. its true light n darkness is just two face of one coin .. if one is there another have to be near .. world is balanced by two contradictory force

n about man n woman .. men r adament to prove "Mard ko dard nahi hota" lol .. dumbos .. gals cries coz de r smart .. de just wash away d pain with tears n dumbo guys ko to saukh hota h dard ko paalne ki .. well de can't be as smart as gals .. galz rock hai na??😆

for devdut it's not love
GEETASARI is a trophy for him
it's his obsession make him things like he has to win geet , and mainly after know and or realize maaneet r together
he is blurring his vission that how can maan get geetasari
but maan didn't have it as trophy but maan win geet's heart and now ruled there
there is the difference between maan and devdut's love

hmm its his frustration what makes him think so .. sometimes it happens with us when we did something to get something n lose it to someone else .. but prob is here its not 'something' its 'someone' .. a very much alive woman ..
about attack in Gobardhan Temple
I really felt bad but it's common those days, but
what I felt happy or to say in peace when those priest killed by soldiers of sultan
those cunning evil priest r like vulture who takes advantages of religion , who takes advantages of innocents and trust of common people and play with emotions
chi those priests r like vulture
I really felt bad for those devdasi
I still remembered how I cried after read what was happening on Gobardhan Temple
it's so sad those priests used GOD for their own game
those evil priests will rot in hell

prob is still there is ppl who plays with religion .. game has changed .. but doing politics n power game on religion was, is most horrible n filthy game whats going on n on

I really loved shantanu here
loved his determination
loved the way he saved the deity
loved what he said about Deity
so simple but so firm and powerful

Shantanu is also one of my dearest character here .. kind of characters I used to respect in d stories of Narayan Sanyal .. I made him inspired by such characters .. well even in Maan's character there r some shadow of HIS characters.. N Sanyal has a lot of inspiration on my writing ..😊

Now again devdutt don't know whenever I felt he will not stoop low but he proved me wrong and commit another sin or mistake

Now he is taking advantages of the sultan's attack to send maanendra away

How could he

Chi ghin aati hain aise creature se spineless cowerd

Rajlaxmi tensed ro shantanu and devdutt here also took advantage of it

Devdutt want to buy the love

Pyaar, love is not thing to buy It can be only win by ur love, ur affection, ur work, ur care, ur good will but for devdutt it's just a thing where he has buy it

He is committing mistake sin and blaming GOD that y he put him there

Wah what a logic devdutt

hehe but we all do d same.. 1st blame hum God ko hi karte hai .. isn't it??😛

So devdutt know he can't raised his filthy eye on geet in front maan so he is sending maan away by trick

Devdutt will definitely rot in hell

Here our maaneet , geet is so lost in her land well no one can say anything as after so many days she got her husband's love and more the things and incidents happen last few days, emotional turmoil, maan's love all r taking over now when maan is near to her she was so much lost in there

Maan's teasing to geet make her crimson.

Loved the description how maan adorned his lady love by jwellery and dress but it's like maan's love adoring her

Well and beautiful described geet's condition there

So romantic yet so beautiful

'A Goddess has descended from heaven wrapping the sky on her body'

Loved this line sply so perfect for geet

❤️

Don't know y with the feeling when maan is looking at geet like taking her image in his heart make me thing something will happen

His touch in her feet and geet's reaction and maan's reaction make geet blushed

It's romantically beautiful

Geet's shyness well understand and it's common after loved or claimed by her man or husband still there is shyness and when husband is playfully teaser and this shyness coyness some times it's loved by husband

Still geet try to come out from this shyness

Maan's teasing is going on

Loved the way u desrcibed and compare vermillion and it's color red

Geet's face glowing more as it's natural when her man, husband filling her mang again

So true and agree with this line

red is the color of love to her this red is the color of whole universe

loved how maan promised about the declaration of their marriage in front of whole world on an auspicious day of "RASPURNIMA"

geet's dream will be fulfilled and the beautiful future of together ness of maaneet she has seen in her dream will fulfill

maan know it and the condition of geet's mind is well aware by maan

so he try to ease the situation by his teasing

The fall of vermillion on nose make the story say again

Man or husband loves his wife or woman more if vermillion fall on nose

But along with maan's teasing about vermillion fall on wife's lips

Naughty maan but he make geet able loose her shyness and blurted out the one of the hidden desire

Maan laughed and teased geet more by his laugh but geet feard if some one heard this then what will happen and it lead to shed all coyness and kissed maan and make him stunned

But can guess he loved, enjoyed it throughly ,

Though he stunned and surprised at first but enjoyed it lots also

They lost in their love and passion when there is knock on the door or say knock or the paradise

Geet make maan hide as she fear for maan as still their marriage is hiding from the society and this cruel society make some illogical and useless norms

Rajlakshmi came and search for maan, when geet try hide the fact that maan is there

Rajlakshmi begged and maan came out and both maaneet came to know about

Gobardhan Temple

Though geet don't know about shantanu but can guess what shantanu means for Rajlakshmi

Though maan know geet is sad and the pain geet felt now as again they will be separated but not only for destiny but for some one cruel and cunning trick which make fall maaneet and rajlashmi

But geet also know maan is inside her,he is her soul now so y fear and she gave her Krishna to maan as Shri Krishna will save and protect maan from all evil

This is also selfless love some time this small thing means so big

Geet spend her whole day with rajlakshmi

Geet felt dizziness and nosiatic and vomiting after eating food

Guess it's indicates she is pregnant maan's pyaar ka nishani is there

Let's see

hmm for that u have to wait a lil 😉

But y m feeling the evil,monster start his work first the flower then that glass

And guessed right there is monster sinner .

How conviently he is trying to put blame as what will Geetasari will make him

Well he already make him self a sinner and find way for hell

His sins ,mistakes r big and it's going on

There is no come back for Devdutt

He lost in his obsession

Rakhi loved ur comment .. u read it thoroughly n commented in detaion .. a BIG HUG for u .. 🤗

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

🤗 😃
update kabe pabo 😛

dara ei to korlam ekta .. wait

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

dara ei to korlam ekta .. wait

Originally posted by: mayukha

I am so glad you came back.

Have been waiting for this update since long. I really loved how you have drawn the parallel between Draupadi vasthraharan and Geet's situation. The very understanding and acceptance of Lord Krishna's presence within oneself is very endearing.

Please continue with the story as was planned. I am sure it will turn out exceptionally well.

Love

Mayukha

Thanks a lot for having confidence on me .. n sorry for keeping u late .. n very very glad that u liked the comparison .. it was d most difficult part to write .. 😊