As usual nice writung...and I am proud that u r my best friend!
Specially those lines brought tears in my eyes...
"Krishna was inside paanchali."
Still it wasn't clear to Geet. And now when Duhsashan's hands are about to reach her honor she realized Maan's words. Krishna was in Paanchali's mind, in her strength, in her mighty spirit. Increasing the length of her sari wasn't the matter, Duhshashan defeated in front of Draupadi's fortitude and Shri Krishna was the source of her strength. Shri Krishna is source of all force. One only needs to feel Him inside her and all evil will fall weak in front.
And the last line was so very touchy-only humming of waves echoed everywhere like the flute of Krishna.
Won't say much about Devdutt...I thought he was yudhithir...but he is not only that but also dushashan...
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