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Posted: 12 years ago
dare u say, this wasnt a good part... girl, u dont know, wht kinda intense emotions this update has...
it was just awesome... I had made my mind for this part long back, as I knew tht Devdutt will show his real colours...
poor Geet, got to know the reality of Devdasi system...
n also the hatredness of Rajlaxmi towards her...
though I m a fan of Geet, but the last part of her jumping off the window shook me...
True, god is in urself... u should know how to read it...
awesome part... love u for the one girl...
continue soon... waiting for the next part...
hope that both Geet n Maan are alive...
love u loads... :) :D :* <3 <3😊👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

I want to say u r brilliant

U make speechless darling

Wonderful superb, brilliant out standing mind blowing update

Loved it

Thank uuu .. n looove u .. for this compliment .. 😊

From the place geet got her inner strength by what she can fight with devdutt who is now like Duryodhon or Dushashan but Devdutt forgot the histroy of them

And the way u described geet's situation with "Draupadi's Cheerharan" kudos to u dear

uff such a relief that u liked ds part .. It was so difficult to convey my point here .. I was not getting any word or way .. didn't know how to express my thought .. me so happy that the message is delivered n u all agree with it .. it was difficult to put it in words but u r such a nice reader love u

It's give me goose bump

Loved how u descrived and maan said about Sri Krishna and how I loved this para fully

Geet looked her sideways .. it was the wall where Maan curved the definitive incident of Mahabharata .. Draupadi's Vastraharan. This particular sculpture always used to make Geet curious. This very part of the epic made her ask a thousand of questions to Maan and the biggest one was of them was "If Shri Krishna was there then why didn't he came to stop this, to punish Duhsashan and others. Why he left Draupadi alone? Why he didn't come in front of everyone?" Why this, why that? Before she could proceed more with her quarries Maan replied her "Because Shri Krishna wasn't present there."

"but he was there .. I read it.. he helped Paanchali. See you also curved him here."

"Krishna was inside paanchali."

Still it wasn't clear to Geet. And now when Duhsashan's hands are about to reach her honor she realized Maan's words. Krishna was in Paanchali's mind, in her strength, in her mighty spirit. Increasing the length of her sari wasn't the matter, Duhshashan defeated in front of Draupadi's fortitude and Shri Krishna was the source of her strength. Shri Krishna is source of all force. One only needs to feel Him inside her and all evil will fall weak in front.

I read it again and again and trust me it's give another kind of power

Maan's explanation about how Sri Krishna helped Panchali it's bang on

It's so true and so easily he said

Krishna is inside us and it's upto us to rise Krishna, our strength by trusting Krishna by loved him fully

Krishna will helped us surely but it's upto us

Krishna is our strength, spirit, power, trust everything and from this, and geet got the power

Maan unknowingly also helped geet

And SRI KRISHNA IS THERE TO HELP HER

u know I never feared Krisjna .. nor I was a worshiper of him .. I just loved him .. thats y I have seen him in various l8 .. as a Human being, as a gr8 politician, cute lover, musician, master mind, artist, game changer n as GOD .. n the incident of Draupadi n his presence without being present there cleared the fact that is only an allegory to show HE is everywhere .. u remember him n he will be ur strength ur friend ur support .. d way u want he will arrive

Loved how geet with her all power retort back devdutt and what she said to him

What she said to him about his punishment so true and so true the word about maaneet's love

loved this para and words by geet

"You neither can have me nor my love. I don't know if I can ever meet Maan or not but we will remain together in our heart and your memory. Even if this universe forgets you won't be able to forget our love along with us. Be it in your hatred, in your anger, jealousy or repentance we will be alive. Your death isn't your punishment your life is. Stay alive."

Loved geet

hmm I thought death is a very common n easy escape for Devdutt his punishment should be bigger one

Geet is no cowered she took the step when nothing is there as she has to save her honor may be it's too tough but her love, body,mind soul every things r for maan only , not another creature has the right to touch it so she take the step

Geet gave herself to maan and save her honor by jump from there

Don't know what will happen

Don't know what SRI KRISHNA will do here but know LOVE won already

How , it's time will say

Devdutt got his first punishment and it's start ,it'll be going on full life

I really wish and hope geet saved and maan got her they need to lived the life for themselves, for love for truth, for so many lover wish, hope

And know GOD will helped them for this and true love will win again

Geet's duppatta stay there to say the crime Devdutt committed

Then Rajlakshmi and others came and witnessed it and their eyes said all

Flute of Sri Krishna can only say it's most divine thing, can't have the right to say anything only say just feel it

It's most beautiful divine thing

Now waiting for next part

Pls update soon update kar jaldi


Rakhi thank for such long comment .. love u dear for inspiring me


Edited by sayaneegupta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

I got so engrossed,that now i dont know what to write for comment.

Right fm d starting wen Raj was searching for first Maan and den Geet,every thing or scene has its symbolic value.
When Geet woke up,the half light and half darkness,symbolising inner selves of Geet and Devdutt.And then as Dev forwarded towards Geet all diyas went out,trying to engulf Her in darkness of Dev's lust.
But den d memories of Maan,the time Maan spend in dat "Natmandir"gave her relief and strength.
And finally the carvings of the "Cheerharan" scene fm Mahabharata,how it was related to Geet,how Maan had said"Krishna was inside her".

This one sentence evoked so many emotions in me and gave Geet a whole new strength to fight d demon in her own way.
Her last dialogue gave goosebumps to me and then...
then d jump into d river.All calm silent,Geet's body shining in sunshine as drowns herself to save herself for his husband Maan and Maan only.


To write sm praising word for dis part "Flute of Krishna"s appreciation wud be insufficient ,so i m leaving it upon u to imagine urself wat kind of effect u leave on ur readers thru this epic.(Pls dont think i m exxagerating coz i mean every word i write)


Thank u .. I can't tell u I feel soo please reading this comment .. d way u have described the significance thanks .. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another heart ringing chaptr...
Its unfortunate sch a piously passionate love story s gng to end...
The interpretatn of Draupadi n Lord Krishna's telepathy jst made my hnds stil on my touchpad... Wonderful it ws..d most beautiful thing abt entire painful chaptr ws d above interpretatn ws recald by GEET in form of MAAN's words...
Vl v gt to knw wht GEET's lst wrds wuld hv been whn she gave hrslf to d river..??(jst a query..nt a demand.. U cn ignore it)..

love

SANJH
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjh89

Another heart ringing chaptr...
Its unfortunate sch a piously passionate love story s gng to end...
The interpretatn of Draupadi n Lord Krishna's telepathy jst made my hnds stil on my touchpad... Wonderful it ws..d most beautiful thing abt entire painful chaptr ws d above interpretatn ws recald by GEET in form of MAAN's words...
Vl v gt to knw wht GEET's lst wrds wuld hv been whn she gave hrslf to d river..??(jst a query..nt a demand.. U cn ignore it)..

love

SANJH

hmm I really didn't think it in that way . okk will try to add it in next or later updates.. thanks for ur comment ..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu_gurti

okay ...hi sayanee..i loved it., i mean i am not bothered about the mere presence of maaneet in every scene...but for me this update is full maaneet...MAAN IN GEET!!!!!...i really feel pity for this DEV., exactly he is in his animal state..every human has this one side and his temper has lead him to this state...and i feel it could be bit elaborate for geet realizing rajalakhsmi's pain...it was nice., but i expected a bit more..because what she lost was unexplainable and most precious!!!!!!...so will maan find geet., or her body!!!!!..i am waiting..a nice update sayanee...👏

thanks for this comment Sindu .. yes Rajlaxmi's pain is unexplainable .. I wanted to make that portion a lil longer but it wud have slow down d pace of d update n Geet didn't get enough time to mourn as Devdutt was there ..

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Posted: 12 years ago

update...😳

keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed & also MY EXAM..

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLYSUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

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Posted: 12 years ago
u made me cry girl.. u know i was discussing abt devdasi system with my sis. it was disgusting.. i cudnot think this type of life for anyone.
i hardly sleep the night when i read ur story.. so i always try to read 2-3 parts togather.. u r brilliant. i know everyone want appriciation. par please yaar don't leave this story in half way. finish it... it is one of story which tells the truth faced by women. i'm not a gud writer so dn't have words for ur praise but i really applaud ur hardwork for this story...

thank u for writing this beautiful piece...
and yes sorry.. i've just come back after 4 mnths on if.. so cudn't read and comment earlier..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice ff
this is my first time reading a MG historical ff!
and i must say i like it
do continue the story...soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome yaaarrr...
here da the love of maaneet is beyond limits...
i always liked ur stories..dis is da best ...👍🏼👏
but i dont want dem 2 die yaar..always u make me cry 😭
update soon

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