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mayukha

@mayukha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

I am so glad you came back.

Have been waiting for this update since long. I really loved how you have drawn the parallel between Draupadi vasthraharan and Geet's situation. The very understanding and acceptance of Lord Krishna's presence within oneself is very endearing.

Please continue with the story as was planned. I am sure it will turn out exceptionally well.

Love

Mayukha

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

devdutt has lost his way...his mind...

n now geetasri...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#733

what a come back update

brilliantly written by u dear

d way u compare draupadi vastraharan and geet's situation dere was amazing

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

amazing update
droupadi's vastraharan part n krishna within us ...its so beautiful
did geetashree really killed herself???
loved it

Edited by dona86 - 12 years ago

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

I got so engrossed,that now i dont know what to write for comment.

Right fm d starting wen Raj was searching for first Maan and den Geet,every thing or scene has its symbolic value.
When Geet woke up,the half light and half darkness,symbolising inner selves of Geet and Devdutt.And then as Dev forwarded towards Geet all diyas went out,trying to engulf Her in darkness of Dev's lust.
But den d memories of Maan,the time Maan spend in dat "Natmandir"gave her relief and strength.
And finally the carvings of the "Cheerharan" scene fm Mahabharata,how it was related to Geet,how Maan had said"Krishna was inside her".

This one sentence evoked so many emotions in me and gave Geet a whole new strength to fight d demon in her own way.
Her last dialogue gave goosebumps to me and then...
then d jump into d river.All calm silent,Geet's body shining in sunshine as drowns herself to save herself for his husband Maan and Maan only.

To write sm praising word for dis part "Flute of Krishna"s appreciation wud be insufficient ,so i m leaving it upon u to imagine urself wat kind of effect u leave on ur readers thru this epic.(Pls dont think i m exxagerating coz i mean every word i write)

Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

part 18
awesome part...
that scene Krishna is within us was so beautiful...
Devdutt has lost all his marbles...
and Geet has she killed herself?
she cant give this pain to Maan...
Raj has come to know about Devdutt and the whole thing is out...
cont soon dear...

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preetianand21

@preetianand21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

You updated after along time...but a nice one...glad Geet came to know about Rajlaxmi plight...but you left a cliffhanger...please continue soon.

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Bharathi_gurti

@Bharathi_gurti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

okay ...hi sayanee..i loved it., i mean i am not bothered about the mere presence of maaneet in every scene...but for me this update is full maaneet...MAAN IN GEET!!!!!...i really feel pity for this DEV., exactly he is in his animal state..every human has this one side and his temper has lead him to this state...and i feel it could be bit elaborate for geet realizing rajalakhsmi's pain...it was nice., but i expected a bit more..because what she lost was unexplainable and most precious!!!!!!...so will maan find geet., or her body!!!!!..i am waiting..a nice update sayanee...👏