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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry magicia, i couldnt comment on your updates, i was really busy last week.. you know its Ramazan...its time limitations...plus loadshedding... and so much hectic schedule of my life too... sorry

read almost 15 parts in one go...
story is going nice...
i feel really sorry for Geet...
well i think they donot stress anyone to be a nun against her will... i know she cant tell them what she wants but they judge it by the attitude and behaviour of person to differentaspects of life...
Although this fact cannot be denied that maasi ji and father were the only saviours of her life... but maasi ji should not force her to be a nun... doesnt she want to see her niece as a homemaker... or be loved by someone...
who said that by marrying or loving someone or by not being a nun you cannot serve humanity...i think you can do better this way...
about maaneet story
thats sweet, cute , hilarious and damn hottt tooo... Geet sometimes act as a real besharam... and Maans comment you wrote in brackets are just hilarious...
i think only when Geet bid him a farewell and proceed to become nun...he will comeout of coma and search her and stop her from being nun.. something similar to , what happen in film KYUNKI...am i right?
anyways.. nice updates altogether...will try to be regular at comments but cant promise as Ramazan time limitations are still there...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW waht an awesome update dear ...
The THINGY TALK was simply mindblowing ...😉 very well written.😆
Now the flashback is over...
waiting to see what Geet would do next...😆
continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago



Edited by magicia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 21.Candle in the storm

08 August 2011

03:56


Story Intro

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

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  hey ..its so cute Right ..Not deleting

The rain started 'The window beside Maan was open and rain drops managed to get inside started to wet his face 'shoulders chest ...

 


Story Intro

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

 Please Join My Event Here following this link on facebook

to get Daily Updates ...Love U ..Please Motivate me With your Likes as It became essential to survive here in India Forum since Maaneet gone off air  

Please Visit My Blog 

If you Really want to Read This FF

I have been waited for you enough Here ..Less likes ..and ..ok 


press likes ..and come to my blog ...OK 😆

Blog Link ...


Its all Pink Beware !😳


  hey ..its so cute Right ..Not deleting

Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update luvd it
fanx 4 da luvly update

Hapi friendship day x
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
may be father benedict is at door...
or her x husband...well he shouldnt be as she opened the door...
armaan knows that she lives here so would not be the person...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Have no idea who the person is...
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice 1 update soon...waiting sweetheart...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: magicia

ask me babes ..lol

i had so many friends once they got admission ..oo when we met our fisrt year vacation..baap re baap..

and i that time reall bachee😳 really get irritated 😡 and call shameless eek ..lol

and they make baby face how can't they be ..they are seeing studying this all day ...lol
and add ..wink wink ..a doc cant be shy ..lol

and it was Sapna after marriage talking with her buddies ..and occasionally her shameless comments ..lol
and geet baby , not studying ooopsee ..she is just ..getting in to subject u know ..lol





yeah i know its common for us but wow i did not know anyoe can go do practicals about it like geet did to poor maan
no hard feelings
i love your updates

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