Mystery Girl updated Note on 148

Mystery Girl 

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

I wish I could press like button more then once...😡

Originally posted by: Dilsay

wowww what a start yaar,

congrats on starting a new FF

me have become fida on this new FF of urs...🤗

The story ,concept and the starting track is simply mindblowing dear...

Don't be scared its awesome ...please do send PM.

I know readers would love it.

I got so involved into reading the first part that I didn't realized that it got over..

Yaar jaldi jaldi update Chahiyay is FF ka...😉

lets talk about Maan... Is he OK ??????

It seems like he is paralysed or may be somewhere in rehab.

yaar YAY Kya gol mal hay four yrs of marriage with Maan then there was an ealy age marriage...😕

yaar kiya suspense create kiya hay...

abb update chahiyay ...

Brilliant start dear

continue soon

Originally posted by: magicia

Ok its ur duty now that i should not get blocked ...only three liked it .. u commented ..and its a command for me ..so i am writing next part ..ok

Anyway within half an hour i will update ...

ur comment motivates me a lot

Chapter 1 : Forbidden Fruit 

Chapter 2 : Fallen Angel

Part 2  fallen angel

31 July 2011

08:32

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..