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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: siroilily
interesting start⭐️
pls pm me wen u update😳

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi...awesome update...please include me in ur pm list will send u a buddy request

Originally posted by: -dia-
Sound interesting ...loved the start

do PM me the further updates.

Thanks for the appreciation. Will PM the next for sure.

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Nidhsara
You love rain very much don't you my dear Jazz...
Which is right now abundant in this part of India...Kerala...
Rains are so inspiring, beautiful ...(yet can't deny the fact that they cause destruction at times too, god save those poor souls)
Loved the two parts so far...
Thanks Shikha for giving us the link to this...
You have introduced us to an excellent writer...
Continue soo Jazz😊

I do love rains. And I think most of the females do, we do possess romantic bent of mind inherently.

And I do believe you would have to thank Shika for more than just introducing this SS to you.

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Liz

@luvabbybaby1

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Plz add this user LUVABBYBABY

Edited by luvabbybaby1 - 14 years ago

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Danina
Okay...wow...just simply amazing...the first lines just took my imagination to a whole new level...i mean...wow the way you described the rain...i mean we all love rains...but the way u described it and then the way someone was writing in their diary in solitude...that was just perfect..and then someone watching her and describing her...
It was all wow...at the end of it the only words i could form were wow...
Amazing...plz add me to your pm list<3
:)

Thank you. Glad to see my words leaving some impact.

Will add you to my PM list.

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby1
Plz add this user LUVABBYBABY

Will do =))

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Note - I know the updates are short as many of you have commented. I am a painter in reality. Writing is not my forte per se. I only manage to give words to a scene that I can capture in one single frame. Maybe that is the reason that the updates come out as short despite best efforts. I am only moving frame by frame with this story. The length of the update hence slips from my mind.😳

Chapter 3

Stirredand Awakened.

(college) Library

"So!!"

"So what?"

"Sooo..."

"Pinky!!"

"Geet!!"

"Why are we having this conversation?"

"Well, a TDH..."

"TDH?!"

"...tall, dark and handsome, get on with your abbreviations Geet, it won'tdo you any good to lag behind the fads." Pinky grumbled.

2022/2/9 - IMPORTANT - SS moved to

https://archiveofourown.org/works/36072373/chapters/89923987

jazzerette | Archive of Our Own

Rain. "Umm, Dadi, Ijust remembered I had ...ehh ...something to do."

"But Maan..." she called as Maan rushedout. "Fine, be back soon!" she added sternly.

"I will", he solemnly replied. For he feared that staying long across her street may bind him to that spot forever.

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Next - Impasse

Edited by jazzerette - 3 years ago

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516645

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

What do you expect me to write?😆
I already blabber everything with you and when it comes to posting a single comment i'll be typing, erasing..lolz..itne mein ek update type kar leti..
i love two characters a lot in this story.. Guess who!!
Pinky and Dadi..
Pinky will choose a bowl of Maggi..hmm as expected..she would definitely do that..
the entire Pinky Geet conversation made me smile you-know-why.
And Dadi..!! Gawd! She's that kind of Dadi anyone would wish for. I love these lines of hers..
Like a good little boy its office-home-and-back-to-office routine for you. And in the name of extra-curricular activity, you have your hoo-haa tai-chi shai-chi."
It had me in splits..😆
As i already told you what i like the most is the similarities of their persona. Disinterest..
Everyone's life isn't exciting.. Many will live for something... but some will just go with the flow.. and i'm glad to see something different..
Even the opposites attract concept is something which is always used but this is knida interessting and i already told you your mission accomplished!!😆
I loved it that Geet isn't making an issue over the general-or-rather-accidental-or-according-to-pinky-oh-so-dreamy fall! Good girl!!😆 I appreciate Geet!!😆
And the last part again held my breath and i swear am grinding my teeth every time you stop and don't be surprised if something happens to my teeth! you should be blamed!!

Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

awesome and fabulous continue soon

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Jazz...your stories have poetic flow...@1-2 .well done on settling the characters - initialization...3rd part is better as I saw story moving...

another common thing...I noted between you and me...is I am also painter though not professional yet...😳

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Pinky is a great friend. She sounds awesome! Dadi is hilarious! Haha, the part about him being a nerd, tai-chi, and the partying. I love Dadi! I wish it would rain here, I am about to burn up! [random thought] Geet's seen a silhouette! What will she do? Check it out? Call for help? Or watch in silence? Will the silhouette realize that she knows he's there?

I kind of like the short updates *avoids jhutis and grabs an umbrella* It makes it seem like a scene in a movie or a snippet of conversation, of sorts. Loved the update! Thanks for the PM!

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